IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 629

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Some реорlе believe that there should Ье fixed punishments for each type о/ crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances оf an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding оn the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Every person and system in the society needs discipline. To survive in the society, one must follow the rules and regulations. The people who violate those rules should be punished. Some argue that there should be specified punishments for each kind of crime. However, some believe that punishment should be given after considering the circumstances and motivation for committing the crime. In this essay, both the views will be discussed.

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Some people think that students should play more team sports, such as football and volleyball, rather than individual games like running and swimming do you agree with this statement?

This is one of the debatable of today’s World “Team game versus Individual game”. Bunch of personage claim that Team game is good, However there are some who express disagreement to it and Support in another view as Individual game is great for success. In this disquisition, I will explicate both stance before presenting my consensus or point of view.

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Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem such measures cause?

In the world, not only crop production that make land problem, meat production is also the reason why land resources are being destroyed. Every day, every months, humans eat a tons of meat, many animal had been killed to meet the requirement of us. And go with it is the place where produce meat for human, it take many lands, many forest was cut off to become a factory, a company of produce meat. This action is not good for environment, so we need a solution to pretend it. I think the govern...

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According to those in the travel business, the nature of the average 'holiday' is changing. Rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far-away place, people now want exitement on their holidays and are keen to participate in unusual and challenging activities. Do you agree or disagree?

The nature of holidays are changing tremendously over the years. These days, people are more inclined towards trying new and challenging activities. I am in favor for trying new activities on holidays but on certain limit. It is rightly said that amount of fertilizers decide the growth of any tree, the same way, anything done in moderation is more acceptable and safe.

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It's important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

There are several stages in a child's life and growth and one if the most important one is the development of conscience, which is the ability to diagnose right and wrong.

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|Advantages And Disadvantages Of Taking A Year Off Between High School And University

It is commonly believed that students must take a gap of one year before joining the university.

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In some countries it is advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

It is argued that children should begin the formal education at four years old but someone else thinks that it is important to start school not before than seven or eight.

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Now-a-days celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than their achievement, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is clearly evident that celebrities are becoming more popular for their beauty and wealth rather than their achivements. If we look in to the field of cinema, actors are giving priority to the roles that involves beauty rather than a good role or a responsible message. Even the cricketers are not playing to the mark to achieve something for their country, instead they are concentrating more on adverstisement which earn them money and bring fame to their beauty.

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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this today world, watching television is becoming a major threat to our family relations, rather than talking to our family or visiting people we just watch television. However, I totally agree on this statement and in this essay I will be explaining how this television can become a threat to our relations.

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Some people think that paper money and coins will be replaced completely by credit cards and online method of payments in the near future. Do you agree or disagree with their statement?

People have been using money for buying something or trade for many years. Some individuals support that credit-cars and online shopping are useful than paper money and coins while others think that it is wrong. I strongly agree that first statement by the agency of more practical and spending less time.

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People think children should attend extra classes after school, while others disagree. Discuss both opinions ad give your own view.

In this competitive environment, each and every individual is on a race to be on the top. Not only employees, sportsmen or businessmen, even students are a part of it. Some parents and guardians are leaning towards an approach to keep their kids mentally and academically intelligent. For the same, students are showed to attend extra coaching apart from school hours. Nonetheless, there are few people who oppose to push children beyond their capacity to study.

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Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest to protect endangered species and biodiversity?

Despite knowing about bio-diversity's importance for a long time, human activity has been causing massive extinctions of different species. This essay will examine the main causes and loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to this problems.

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Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that they should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion. You should write your essay in no more than 250 words.

Some people believe that children should be competitive toward each other, while other counterparts argue that they should learn to work with others to grow up to be modell citizens. From my point of view, I think children should be both competitive and cooporative with others. As human beings, we cannot exist all by ourselves. That is why learning to give a helping to each other is of importance. Cooporating with friends helps children enhance their teamwork skills, as well as leadership. When working in a group, a child cannot do what he wants. He has to work out the task with others. Moreover, children not only enhance skills that they already have, but also learn new ones from their teammates. For example, one child has a head for figures and another is talented in physics. They can self teach each other so that both of them achieve desirable grades in tests. However, competitions among children can also be benefitial. Being competitive boost children’s personal ski...

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Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that they should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion. You should write your essay in no more than 250 words.

Some people believe that children should be competitive toward each other, while other counterparts argue that they should learn to work with others to grow up to be modell citizens. From my point of view, I think children should be both competitive and cooporative with others. As human beings, we cannot exist all by ourselves. That is why learning to give a helping to each other is of importance. Cooporating with friends helps children enhance their teamwork skills, as well as leadership. When working in a group, a child cannot do what he wants. He has to work out the task with others. Moreover, children not only enhance skills that they already have, but also learn new ones from their teammates. For example, one child has a head for figures and another is talented in physics. They can self teach each other so that both of them achieve desirable grades in tests. However, competitions among children can also be benefitial. Being competitive boost children’s personal ski...

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

While some people argue children should have physical education at home by their parents, some other people believe that school should consider some sport classes for students at school. However, I reckon schools are a proper place for children to attend physical practices.

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Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that they should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion. You

Education children is a controversial issue of all time. Many people believe that children should be taught to battle while others argue that they ought to learn to work together. From my point of view, the latter seems to be more meaningful. On the one hand, competition is very vital. Practically, opportunities are not given for unworthy people. Thus, it is totally reasonable for children to be taught that they have to try their more and more and become the best person. It also means that they learn how to vie with others to get opportunities. For instance, in China, there is a strong competition for university entrance examination. Candidates who have higher ranks not only can study in prestigious universities but also can be offered better chances of jobs after graduation. On the other hand, cooperation is essential to survive. No one can only rely on his own talents to achieve success. In fact, people need to work with and help together in every organization, such a...

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Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that they should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion.

Education children is a controversial issue of all time. Many people believe that children should be taught to battle while others argue that they ought to learn to work together. From my point of view, the latter seems to be more meaningful. On the one hand, competition is very vital. Practically, opportunities are not given for unworthy people. Thus, it is totally reasonable for children to be taught that they have to try their more and more and become the best person. It also means that they learn how to vie with others to get opportunities. For instance, in China, there is a strong competition for university entrance examination. Candidates who have higher ranks not only can study in prestigious universities but also can be offered better chances of jobs after graduation. On the other hand, cooperation is essential to survive. No one can only rely on his own talents to achieve success. In fact, people need to work with and help together in every organization, such a...

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of people think that the growing the number of sport is a great solution for health problem in society. Others say that different policy is needed in this domain. This essay will attempt to elaborate on the various measures for improving public health.

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The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More new reports tend to be sensational, shocking and unpleasant. However, I believe that we have the right to know about what happens to around our surroundings and the world. I strongly disagree with this statement for the following reasons.

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The air we breathe has a major impact on our health and the environment. However, the air pollution is constantly growing and at current levels it can be fought only globally. That is to say, individual efforts to improve air quality will not give any results, and it's solely responsibility of our governments to reduce air pollution. Do you agree or disagree?

Air pollution is a serious problem on a scale global. Some argue that individual efforts will not be effective at all, so government should take care of this matter to reduce air pollution. I totally agree with this opinion, and the reasons will be followed later.