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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

STATEMENT OF PURPOSE INTRODUCTION I, [Bardia & Faridi], was born on 1 August 1998, and I am currently residing in Shiraz. I had studied Mathematics & Physics and I have worked as a mobile phone repair technician. EDUCATIONAL BACKGROUND I have done high school diploma in Mathematics & Physics in 2015-16 at Shiraz university high school with a GPA of 15.68 of 20. ENGLISH PROFICIENCY LEVEL From middle school until now, I started learning English and according to the IELTS exam that I took in February last year my score is as follows: Listening 7, Reading 7.5, Writing 6.5, Speaking 6.5, Overall 7 WORKING AFTER GRADUATION After completing a diploma degree, with the introduction of one of my professors, I started my internship at Atlas mobile to gain practical experience. After 8 months due to my performance in the assigned tasks, the manager decided to hire me. During this time, I was able to apply the concepts I learned during my studies in a real business and improve my expe...

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Many museums charge for admission while other are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

IThese days, the question of whether people need to pay a fee to go to museums or not has been receiving an excellent deal of public attention. While I recognize that museums charge visitors has both benefits and disadvantages , this essay will discuss both views

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In the future it may be necessary for us to live on other planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do agree or disagree?

Nowadays, due to myriad numbers of challenges we are facing, majority of people opine that we should sums of money for space in order to explore them and to find a suitable site for localizing. However, there may be some alternatives which would tackle this issue and they will be covered in further paragraphs.

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some people say the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. do you agree or disagree? give some relevant examples due to your experience.

It is often argued that financial gains instead of personal feeling of satisfaction and productivity are considered the main factor for a working staff to do his best for the company. Although I agree that monetary rewards play a very important role, I think personal satisfaction is also crucial for a worker to do his best for the company.

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Some students tend to travel after finishing school and spend time working somewhere instead of going to the university directly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? (May 2021) Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern era there are many students who want to take gap in their education after their high school and pursue work in a new geography. As the coin has both the faces, this situation also has pros and cons.

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Museums should display art of their own country, or they should display art from all over the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (May 2021) Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Museum is place where all the artifacts are displayed which not only have a historical importance, but also represents the culture of the time they belong to. These act as a centre for tourist attractions where people from the foreign country also visit and gain knowledge about their significance in the world’s history. This essay postulates the points on the reasons about county’s art to be restricted to its own but not anywhere in the world.

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write an essay presenting the pros and cons of online education

Did you know that in some countries, schools used technologies for learning five years ago? Without a doubt technology play a major role in our lives, but online learning is a controversial topic.

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Some people think that video games are advantages while others believe video games are harmful to the people who play them. I would argue that video game my give the negative effect.

Some people believe that playing video games is more beneficial for users while others claim that it is more disadvantageous. I personally believe that video games bring more benefits while being aware of their drawbacks.

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some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age . Others think they should begin after 7 years of age . Discuss Both views and give your own opinion.

In the contamparary era , education is a vital part of children education. Many individuals believe that children should begin their formal education at an early age . Others believe they should begin after 7 years of age . Formal education in early age pressure of tiny children .

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Graduates who cannot find work in their chosen field should be advised to do a second degree,rather than taking a job that does not interest them. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

These days,it can be difficult to get a good job when you leave university.Many more students are studying for degrees,so the job market is very competitive.Some people believe that it is better to take a second degree if you cannot secure suitable employment.But I tend to think it depends on your circumstances. The first consideration is finance.Universities charge high fees for their courses,and in some countries it can cost...

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Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a widespread belief that technology plays a vital role in the metabolism of current society. Therefore，there are increasing number of educationalists propose that the official ought to boost funds in the science education than other subjects. From my point of view, I agree this proposal to some extent, but I disagree that investing more than other subjects.

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More people have unhealthy diet and do not do enough exercise. What are the reasons for this?How can we encourage people to have a healthier?

In today’s modernized era, junk food and physical activities are on the concern list. It has been noticed that most of the individual prefer to eat unhealth food and in addition to this they do not do any exercise. There are several factors behind this harmful practice and certain step could be taken to improve this situation.

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Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people are of the view that only those species of animals that are endangered must be safeguarded while others have the opinion that we should preserve all animals irrespective of their status.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Eased on my knowledge, some people choose to accept the fate that they have to undergo the bad situation as they believe that good things might come out of it. Their solution is simply to just go with the flow because they think that they will learn something new along the journey. For example, a student received a grade B for his Physics examination. However, he only needs one more mark to get an A If a student requires to receive a mark percentage of 10% to get an A, this student got a lA% on his paper. As the teacher looked through the questions with the whole class, he notices that the teacher accidentally marked his correct answer to wrong. So, realistically, he should get an A. However, he chooses to leave his grade as a B because he believes that his current grade will be a motivation fo...

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In many nations around the world, declining health and a lack of fitness are becoming very common among people. There are a number of causes of this, but certain measures could be taken to alleviate this problem.

The picture given illustrates the process of how ceramic pots are manufactured.

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City centres are very crowded with cars. They often cause a great deal of pollution. Cars should be banned from all centres. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

The line graph has the data about the number of foreigners to four main museums from different parts of the world between 1980 and 2015. These statistics have been done once every five years.

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Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Civilians believe that having more police on the streets will help to combat crime but its not true. Countries which have more population like India is suffering a lot with crime rates even though they have a good amount of police on the street, crime rate is unmanagable. I disagree with the belief that more police is not the best way to combat crime.

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big salary is more important than the job satisfaction

These days, it is becoming more and more common for nations to earn a lot of money. People think and believe that money is far more vital than the activity itself. I completely agree with this idea and in this essay I will support my ideas with examples

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In some countries, changes in the amount of rainfall have led to a serious shortage of water and governments are now under pressure to find solutions that address this problem. What are some of the problems that lack of water causes and what can be done to save water in the future?

Changing in the environment directly affecting rainfall might be due to global warming, which further leads to the shortage of water and the authorities are under a burden to solve this major problem. There are some countable issues, which are caused by deficiency of water. The measures to conserve water should become into force. Let's delve deeper into the following paragraphs.

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