IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 686

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Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.’ What do you think this means? Do you agree with this statement?

Charm is case by case of another person. I think this means is people like beauty points are a variety. Beauty is the eyes of the beholder is realism. I completely agree with this statement, and will give my opinion below.

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To what extent has the internet made life more convenient.

It can not be denied that internet has huge effects in either direct or indirect ways ; the internet has made life more convenient in various parts, for example education and communication. Although the advantages outweigh disadvantages, there are some problems that sometimes occur, such as security and privacy.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

The line graph illustrates the numbers of those who travel by the subway within a day in London. Overall, it can be seen that early in the morning and at 16:00 o'clock the number of passengers is the lowest, whereas figures of travelers by metro reach at their peak at 8 am and 6 pm.

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Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide the best care for their children. Others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both view and give your opinion

Child upbringing is a very important job for child,s physical as well as mental health it becomes more valuable if parents are working , the only option left for them to keep thier children either in child care centre or with their grandparent .In both, the conditions child care can be done nicely but it depends on persons to person parents whether their parent healths condition is good or not ,in my opinion , I fully believe that child care unit can provide better responsibility to their kids.

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"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Modern medicine has evolved along two lines: prevention and cure. In this world, many people are dying from various types of health-related problems due to the lack of appropriate health education and preventive actions. That is why, according to my perception, government should spend a huge amount of money from health budget for preventive measures. To begin with, it is evident that, in most of the country's health education is hardly imparted among the people. When people are made aware about the health-related issues it naturally implies prevention of umpteen diseases which can be avoided with basic alterations in lifestyles. For example, in most of developing countries, people are suffering from so many communicable disease because they do not know about disadvantages of having unhygienic food and water. Moreover, If the government can provide the information about basic preventive steps which can be inculcated at basic grassroot level then the chances of spread of v...

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"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Modern medicine has evolved along two lines: prevention and cure. In this world, many people are dying from various types of health-related problems due to the lack of appropriate health education and preventive actions. That is why, according to my perception, government should spend a huge amount of money from health budget for preventive measures. To begin with, it is evident that, in most of the country's health education is hardly imparted among the people. When people are made aware about the health-related issues it naturally implies prevention of umpteen diseases which can be avoided with basic alterations in lifestyles. For example, in most of developing countries, people are suffering from so many communicable disease because they do not know about disadvantages of having unhygienic food and water. Moreover, If the government can provide the information about basic preventive steps which can be inculcated at basic grassroot level then the chances of spread of v...

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Nowadays，most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying that schooling is one of the crucial arguments in our times. Many of us believe that the sufferer of pain in the neck. However, people hold different views r as to whether or not a specialist is superior to the generalist. In my opinion, focusing on an academic study at the academy enjoys more benefits. Admittedly, those who support vocational training are, to some degree, never without their reasons. vocational skills can help learners secure well-paid jobs quickly, therefore, help their parents reduce burden fee tuition From our activity, we can find some examples to prove that job candidate from vocational training schools are because what they have learned are career oriented and job-related. Also, ，Jack-of-all-trades is a master of none. In comparison with studying a wide range of subjects，specializing in the specific field can make one stand out in a crowd considering that one’s time and energy are limited. What I want to deny, howeve...

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Please explain Business directory and graphic stocks

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Despite the advances in agriculture industry ,many people are unable to fill their stomach.The saying "Rich are becoming more richer whereas poor are becoming more poor" is valid.This argument is very concerning, will disccuss the reason and the solution for the given problem.

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Modern cultures around the world have become similar as compared to the past. What are the main reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

Cultures in different parts of the world have become much more similar nowadays when compared to the past. This trend is probably caused by globalisation and the advanced technologies like the internet. Despite being able to know more about each other, it can be a negative development for cultural diversity.

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others seen it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Adolescents collision with their fathers and mothers is essential while they grow up. Some folks think it has some drawbacks. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.

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Some people believe that is good to share as much information as possible in scientific business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Many of people believe that information should be shared directly with fields of education, science and business, however, negative attitudes for information sharing is that some vital and significant experience may not be available or accessible to others. For my opinion, due to humanist and equal environment, information should be shared more frequently.

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Some people think that a high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is clear that, nowadays, everybody is always looking for the perfect job. Although some people believe that a high wage is the most important factor to consider when choosing the right company to work for, others support that a nice working atmosphere is much more important to get in mind. In this essay, I will explore both sides and explain why I agree with the latter one. Even though we all know that “baggers can´t be choosers”, when looking for the first employment, younger generations tend to seek high-salary jobs. As their first time getting employed, they rawly may think that nothing else matters but money. For those people, is there a good salary, it is fine to have competitive collegues, negativity, and even a mean boss. As a result, although being well paid, in most cases, they hardly get to complete a year working for the same employer. For example, despite the great salaries that are mostly paid in Rede Globo, the average time that a young jornalist stays employed...

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Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country. Others think that they should live as a separate minority group with a different lifestyle. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The issue of whether people settling in a new country should adopt new culture or not is opened to debate. While there are benefits to maintain their lifestyle, I would agree that immigrants should behave as people of the host country. On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why people insist on keeping their traditions. Firstly, cultural conservation allows them to express their love for family and nation. For example, beginning of February, more East Asia students celebrate a party for a new year as following old type. Secondly, if a person is from a country with strong and old customs, it will be difficult for him to adopt new ones. He cannot break the old customs such as food habits and wear certain types of clothes. On the other hand, it seems to me that copying the new traditional lifestyles is the best choice. Exploring and understanding new culture provides a plenty of opportunities to success succeed/move forward in the life. It supports them to get on ...

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is always a good idea to teach school students about Literature because learning literature helps students understand the history and origin of the information. By studying literature, students can be curious to know and learn about new things. Literature plays a vital role in the investigation and understanding of items from the root—novels and poems depth our knowledge and clear our concept. School students need to know stories and poems and the aesthetic side of life. Students who study books develop new ideas and learn from the experience of the writer. It helps the student understand the other side of the story and how different people deal in different situations. I favour that students in the school must learn literature. Students pick a concept from the novel and poem and develop their ideas to deal with complicated situations. The student also gets to know about the contribution of the previous people in preserving the literature.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Healthy enviornment is the basic need for vitality, not only for human beings but also for each and every living species on this earth. As far as humans are concern, to improve and maintain the quality of an enviornment, the lots of efforts are really essential. then who will be responsible for this?, Government?, Large companies?, or People?.

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Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Modern medicine has evolved along two lines: prevention and cure. In this world, many people are dying from various types of health-related problems due to the lack of appropriate health education and preventive actions. That is why, according to my perception, government should spend a huge amount of money from health budget for preventive measures. To begin with, it is evident that, in most of the country's health education is hardly imparted among the people. When people are made aware about the health-related issues it naturally implies prevention of umpteen diseases which can be avoided with basic alterations in lifestyles. For example, in most of developing countries, people are suffering from so many communicable disease because they do not know about disadvantages of having unhygienic food and water. Moreover, If the government can provide the information about basic preventive steps which can be inculcated at basic grassroot level then the chances of spread of v...

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Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is true that a successful economy and clean environment lead to a prosperous country,while other people think that they are incompitable. In my opinion, i believe that a clean environment is the result of a successful economy.

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Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We live in the era of modern times, but still, the traditional and religious festivals play a very important role in our society . Some believe, during festive seasons, people only want to enjoy themselves. I firmly agree with this opinion and in this essay I will provide certain argument's to support my point. Nowadays, most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals. This is as people these days prefer to enjoy themselves in their own way. There are many disadvantages that doing so can have. For instance, traditional and religious festivals are a part of a persons family. They provide an individual with information and values about their rich culture and history. Nevertheless, instead of understanding and learning about all this, people these days prefer spending their time chatting or going out with their friends, rather than spending that time with their families. Also, with time, the very definition of " enjoying " during festive seasons has ch...

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Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments.

In the resent day, many countries rely on tourism to ameliorate economy as Thailand, Singapore,... Although the growth of quality of traveller can bring a lot of benefits to countries, it also has a negative effect on The environment. I am personally convinced that holidaymakers still do many things to reduce their impact on nature and culture.