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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

People in developing countries tend to purchase their own cars. Its a advantage to have your own car, there are many factors that support this. Cars are not the problem to environment. Its the pollution emmited that is destructive.
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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

many people assume that it is very easy to identify about person ethnic by looking at his attire, its a debateable issue in many developing countries for eample, in india many people can be recognized by thier clothes where and which state they belong too. I tend parly agree about the culture could be known by appearnce but not his character, ill discuss more in the following paragraphs.
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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?

Nowadays its obvious to see more obese people around u then before. Main reason for this is the junk food; to control this epidemic people must follow diet restrictions in their daily routine. in essay this the writer will discuss the causes and measures and how to control this disease in future.
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In many countries today,people in cities either live alone or in a small family units rather than in large extended family groups.Is this a positive or a negative trend?

It is common knowledge that,different people have different way of living.As some prefer to live in a nuclear famailies rather than having an extended families.To some facts mentioned below it has more adverse sides as it affects both parents' and their children's attitude.
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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays we can see a really interesting and modern trend that many people  use more and more  pictures instead of usual text.
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Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

Nowadays, we can see the great improvement in the health industry. As a result, people about sixty five years old and older have the possibility to live more actively.
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Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe that it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Friendship is the relation that contributes to the wellness and stressless life and a good friend always stands tall irrespective of any circumstances. It is always debatable that we should establish friendship with the people of a similar mentality however, few people reckon that it is essential to build ties with people of different opinions. I believe a friend with similar agreements creates a strong relationship. On the one hand, it is discussed that we should elect and strengthen our friendship bonds with people of similar standpoints and I believe this will certainly lead to a healthy relationship. We meet friends to discuss the stress of our day to day life and a person with an identical thought process will assist in the decision-making of any of the harsh issues of professional and personal life. A similar mentality makes the friendship rock solid and may eventually help us in overcoming the burdens. On the other hand, friends with different opinions may lead to a s...
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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Discipline is the foundation of the human race. It is often debated that who is responsible to establish regulation among children, teachers or parents. This essay will argue both pros and cons of the responsibility towards the discipline of the kids.
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Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school, while others believe it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Firstly, to start with the discussion , all children at the school level should learn the foreign language , in addition to the subjects and syllabus covered. Choosing the option to learn from the start university or in the secondary academy doesn't matter until they learn the foreign sound. To keep this in better discussion and description, may be start hall childresn may Feel bit pressure to learn the new style from the day one.
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Some believe that people will purchase a product based on their needs and advertising is not needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people feel today, marketing a product is not demanding an advertisement whenever,if people want to shop, they buy a product leaning on their intention and inconsequence commercialism on advertise is being proximity for mass. This essay will support the issue by looking at agreement and disagreement of commercial attention.
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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, governments are showing interest in investing and developing roadways and railways. However, there is still confusion on whether governments should fund development for railway or road transport. I believe that, it would be a decision to choose railways as it would solve many problems caused by road transportation.
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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

parents play a vital role in children's growing process; some individuals believe that it is appropriate methods for schools to teacher every young person to be a good parent. I agree with the statement to be a good parent needs good communication skills and provide sufficient time to make them healthy. I will discuss how these each factor makes good parent.
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Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?

In today's century television is popular amongst everyone. It is no more a luxory, but a necessity.In this essay , I will share my viewpoint and examples that would help us understand, how television is one the most important electronic device, which helps people to get information across the globe and also a sole partner for few people.
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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that the number of children who are committing crimes has increased nowadays. while many argue that these children should be punished as per the severity of their crime, others believe that it is their parents who should be punished, instead of the children. I agree with the former view than the latter for several reasons.
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People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that society has been becoming indistinguishable momentarily. I, firmly, acknowledge this.
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Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree

It is no doubt that reading news becomes norms of common people's life. A huge number of people still read from trationational sources rather than digital media. However, I, personally, think that paper news may be replaced by online news in the new year coming year.
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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. what is your opinion?

Intelligence is function which has been evaluated since the beginning of the human being. It cannot be measured only in one way ( like amount of money on bank account) it should be the sum of different points of view like wisdom, aids, which were reached during life time period, and style of life. Some people suggest that intelligence should be measured by success of person, while others think that this is not the only way. In my opinion I partly agree with both sides of discussion and will prove you my point of view.
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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

In recent time, the number of cars have been increasing.While some suggest that this is a positive trend, others consider that this could have many drawbacks as well. This essay will discuss both aspects of having a personal car and I support the latter view point.
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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing taffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree. What measure do you think might be effective.

The traffic as well as the pollution became a huge issue today. Some are of belive that the higher taxes on the cruid oil should helps to remedy the challenges.
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Topic: Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what do you agree with this view?

There are two points of view. First, the arts are important and it's okay to invest wealth into it. Second, a spending cash to this "trash" is impermissible luxury.
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