IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 772

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that young people should spend their free time with their families instead of enjoying outside entertainment, others do not agree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued by an overwhelming majority of people that youngsters should spend their leisure time with their families rather than spending outdoor activities and entertainment. I am of the opinion that they should spend part of their time with families and part of them with their friend in outdoor activities.

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Death penalty is still practiced in jurisdiction system of many countries. Some people believe that this type of punishment should be abolished. However, others are of opposite opinion. Discuss both sides of this debate and give your own opinion.

While death penalty is legal in several countries, here always be people who wants to cancel this "barbarian" rule, also will be who support such kind of punishment . There are several arguments on both sides of this very sensitive issue, and i will discuss them now .

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In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on arts. However, others think government should spend more money on health and education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Different sphere are developed in different countries. Art, education, health are the principal part of all nations. Some people think the government should allocate funds on health and education more than art but other individuals against this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss both views but from my point of view, the ministry should spend more attention on study and health.

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describe a situation you were not allowed to use your cell phone ?

The mobile phone disturb the human life this days.As now people also can't live without cell phone .today i am going to talk about a situation were cell phone not allowed. It happen when some relatives come at my home to spend vacation time .My mom will say me to go with the relatives roam at akshardham temple.It is a sunday time so there were very rush of people that day.We also enter in the temple and i forget to switch off my phone and then my relatives told that we want to buy some ...

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Some people think that the Internet is a useful tool for education while others believe it can be distracting to students.What are the advantages and disadvantages of using the Internet in teaching and learning?

Now a day, the internet is the useful device for everyone for teaching purpose.A segment of society believe that the internet is very crucial and usually device for everysectors.whereas, some people think that the net connection widely spread around the world, which means it creates some problems on students future.Now a day many students wastage their time behind the using of ineternet. I will discuss advantages and disadvantages about its following paragraphs.

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Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic people bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Culture is a vital key to show that racial customs and traditions of the people. Nowadays, global world become a small village and multi-ethnic people live together in one city and I am largely agreed with this point that it is more beneficial for any country. However, multiculturalism has some drawbacks also. On the one hand, first and foremost, if different traditions people live in a single society, they will learn about the new culture easily because they are celebrated all festivals and function together. For instance, one research article shows that 80% of people who are living in the different ethnic are enjoyed their life than people who are living in single tradition country. Second major positive side is that people learn different types of language with each other and become a multilingual person easily. In fact, it is very hard to learn more languages without living with their native people, as well as when they visit the other area of the world, they do...

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngesters under the age of 18. Some psychologist claim that the basic reason for this is that children thesedays are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent you agree or disagree ?

Juvenile delinquency is one of the heating issue in communities. Psychological consider that raise in criminal activities among young people is due to the lack of social as well as emotional guidence from teachers and parents. However, I agree with the given statement to a larger extent and also mention other factors that are affecting to surge the crime ratio.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry.What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

People of all walks of life, both young and old, enjoy travelling. Tourist sector has been growing remarkably in recent times. This essay will discuss the positive aspects of tourism on people and nations as a whole. Travelling exposes you to different cultures and religions around the world. People get involved in other customs and experience them in person. There are year old traditions which are a great source of knowledge. It also refreshes your mind and soul and brings in a sense of peace and harmony. You get away from your daily hectic schedule and spend some time enjoying the beautiful sites universe has to offer. According to a recent study conducted at Harvard University, individuals who are frequent travellers have more knowledge about the world’s history. Hence , visiting other places help individuals learn other people and refreshing their system. Economic benefits and job opportunities also increase with increased tourism. Tourists bring in a lot of cash, which a...

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Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

Today, life has never been as comfortable and convenient compared to the previous periods. Although numerous fitness centers and sport facilities have been built to encourage people to get fit and live healthily, the result is proven to be otherwise. This essay will point out what causes this phenomenon and offer different methods to tackle it.

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Paranın çok önemli olduğu bu çağdaş dünyada, bir kişi yaşam becerisini öğrenmek zorundadır.

Bugünün dünyasında, birçok öğrencinin memleketi dışındaki çeşitli şehirlerde üniversiteye gitmesi oldukça yaygınken, bazıları eğitim için aileleriyle yaşamayı tercih ediyor. Bence, ailesiyle birlikte kalmanın birçok avantajı olmasına rağmen, yalnız ve evden uzak kalmak bir öğrencinin genel gelişimi için çok daha faydalıdır. Bu makale, onlarla kalmanın aksine evden uzak durmanın çeşitli avantajlarını tartışacaktır. Başlamak için, yalnız kalmak ve aileden uzak kalmak çok sabır gerektirir. Bir...

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studying at university in your hometown where your family lives or studying at university in a different city far from your family.

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what is the role of performance management at the time of crises

performance management has been one of the most praised, most criticised and most debated management practices for decades. Performance Management defined as a process that is systematic for improving organisational performance by the performance of individuals and teams development. it means when understanding and managing performance within and agreed basis of planned objectives, criteria and capability requirements, the organisation can get better results. Performance is about how it is achieved and not only about the objectives. performance management in time of crises play a vital role because of time the performance of organizations are changed some people performance are very much appreciated and some of them are not so the time changing effects very much about the performance of any organisation.

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The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. what are the reasons?what are the impacts?

It's a fact that the traditional family mealtime is becoming a thing of the past.

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Homework: Write an essay Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree.

In the modern day offsprings should have a regular physical exercise. Some people believe that it should be parent's responsibility, while other believes that it should be school's responsibility. In this essay I will give discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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Some people think that interviewsm is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Interview is a long and painful process for employee as well as company. It is argued that interview is not only the best way to choose any person for job but other methods are also applied. In my opinion, it depend upon the realm of job and skills which is needed for jobs. There are multifarious reasons why interview is preferred for choosing any employee for right job. Interviews assist companies to get an idea of employee's personality and also examine the s...

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some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays youngsters are remained glued to technology due to this, reading and writing skills are declining among them. I partially agree with the this notion because the negative effects of this aspect can be revoked if technology should be used for only useful purposes. using technological equipment had an adverse effect on children's writing skills. When young people write message on each other so, there is a automatic correction system available in the technological gadgets that's why th...

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Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

ality it is widely believed that house chores should be shared between men and women equally. I strongly agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that cooking at home is a waste of time. They feel it is better to buy fast food which is more convenient and less stressful in modern life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience

In today's world, time is considered precious thing by people who are living urban cities.In order to manage distinct tasks, they need to organize themselves in a good way.For this reason, the vast majority of the people would rather fast foodstuff than food which is prepared at home.As a matter of fact,I agree with this idea in a certain level.Although buying fast food seems more advantages,benefits of home cooking exceed the advantages of fast food.

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Films and computer games which contain violence are very popolular.Some people believe that they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned

For the time being, violent films and computer games have become rife among people, especially youngsters. They are believed to bring about deleterious impacts on society and so measures should be introduced for restricting them. To the best of my knowledge, watching violent movies and playing computer games can undoubtedly engender adverse impacts on both society as well as well-being of people and parents hold the most vital position in prohibiting such forms of pursuits.

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With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

foodstuff is one of the most important ingredients that give energy to human beings. Nowadays, foods can be easily produced and made cheap because of rectifying fertilizers and usage of machines. But, usage of some methods is becoming dangerous to people's health and the quality of it might be affected negatively on local society. The advantage, do not overweight of disadvantage. Firstly , the main affected part of the digesting system to using of machine foodstuff because before of the era of technology, the people were made the feeds for their own hands so it was a very healthy and more suitable for everyone's body. Secondly, using technical cousins is increasing some kind of disease to dangerous for everyone. Lastly, sometimes coincidentally foodstuff packets bring very old an expire on a date and it can be harmful to everybody. On the other hand, there is some advantage of fertilizing feeds. First of all, in the 21st century, using technical fields are easily available ev...

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