IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 119

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is this a positive or negative development?

Marriage is pivotal in individuals' lives and various aspects of society. Recently, there has been a trend towards couples delaying marriage and giving birth to their thirties. While this trend might have some prominent benefits, it is a change for the worse.

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Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. Is it positive or negative development?

Today, many children spend a significant amount of time playing computer games instead of engaging in sports. Although this trend offers some benefits, I reckon that it has more bad implications for children's health and social life.

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More and more people are seriously overweight. some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the prise of fastening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The number of people who are overweight is increasing day by day, to address obesity problems many people propose to rise the prices of fattening foods. This is essay totally disagrees with the approach because the people's suggestenation is about the wrong solution and it may bankrupt professionals that produce this type of food in such way.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the monetary help given by the developed nations does not resolve the issues, and they should provide aid in other ways rather than giving money to the underdeveloped countries. This essay totally agrees with that statement because of the level of corruption in third world countries and this also increased the national debt.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self- employed?

To be an entrepreneur is a dream for few people and considered to be superior than working for someone else, these days. It gives us more freedom in many aspects, however, it has its own drawbacks as well. Inmy opinion, though, working in an organization as an employee is easier, it is good be your own boss, despite all difficulties.

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Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed by many that the university education should be free and governments should bear all the expanses. This essay totally agrees with this statement because everyone has a right to education and this will also helps in the development and technological advancement.

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More and more people are moving away from agriculture background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this. What solutions can you offer.

There have been an increasing number of people moving from agricultural areas to the city due to better job opportunities. This essay will discuss the implications of this issue, which are undeveloped rural areas and lack of skillful workers in agriculture, and the most suitable solutions are enhancing infrastructure evenly and by implementing online schooling.

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Many people believe that watching a live performance is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some are of the opinion that attending a concert or an event in person is more exciting than watching them on TV. This essay totally agrees with that statement because it provides an immersive environment and also allow people to have good memories with their loved ones.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that if children’s leisure hobbies are not focused on learning ,it’s just an unproductive use of time. I fully agree with this statement. I believe that’s children’s time should be spent on activities that promote learning,it is also help children gain important life skills. This essay will discuss how educational exercises help children develop significant skills and will give some cases.

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Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and education but not on theaters or sports stadiums. Do you agree or disagree?

Whether spending national budget on medical and education or theaters and sports is a matter of debate in today's society. While maintaining good educational and medical standards is a must, I am of the opinion that having financial support on advanced services is also necessary for the society as a whole.

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Some people believe that children should not be given home work everyday, while others believe that they must get home work every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People these days have different ideas about education ,However , in this essay, i will discuss both points of view and I will give a clear opinion.

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some people argue that because the internet make it so easy for children to access facts, schools should not focus on teaching facts. instead they should focus on developing children's skills and potential, and their relationships with other people. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Schools should encourage the study of social and other skills of students instead of facts due to easy access to facts on internet. I partially agree with this statement, because there are lots of invalid information on the web.

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In education and employeement, some people work harder than others. WHy they work hard? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

Number of people work harder than others, especially in spheres such as schooling and employment. People work harder than others to get some respect from people such as parents or employers. However, it is not advantageous for people to work hard. In this essay I will answer questions.

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There is a rising trend of people working from home. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on society?

These days, people are more free to opt the way they want to work. And now, remarkable number of people are eager to have a distant job. Companies' intention to reduce their office costs as well as the type of job are play role in this issue. This can affect the traffic congestion in megacities and result in happier societies.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Certain individuals claim that we have too many options these days. Afterwards, I concur with this assertion, attributing it to the advancement of technology and the increased income of individuals, as elucidated in the subsequent essay.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century, and sea levels continue to rise at alarming rate. What problems are associated with this, and what are some possible solutions?

Utilizing fossil fuels over the last century has caused several dire hardships around the globe. Today, global warming, and consequently, nonstop increase in sea levels are alerting issues. Extinction of various species of animals and plants as well as drowning coastal cities are related to continuous global warming. Fortunately, it can be prevented by limiting fossil fuel consumption, and by using environmentally friendly energy sources.

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Some feel that tourism endangers culture while others feel it is beneficial. DIscuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Today, the tourist industry is important to the economy of many countries because it can present traditional culture, food, or dress. However, some individuals don't agree with this statement; their views are that some tourism will endanger the culture. I disagree that tourism will have a negative impact on culture, but sometimes, the hosts destroy the culture.

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Is the Use of AI in E-learning platforms an effective solution to bridge gaps in cross-border education?" - Africa

Africa is facing various educational challenges due to limited infrastructure, resources, and a shortage of qualified teachers. Artificial Intelligence in E-learning is applied over the world as a breakthrough technological tool, offering personalized learning and the ability to approach which help address the educational inequality in Africa. However, using AI is only effective if deployed with the consideration of infrastructure, cultural context, and sustainable funding. Despite its challenges, AI holds the potential to support cross-border education in Africa by optimizing resources and reaching remote areas.

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Some people believe that children should do organised activities in their free time while others believe that children should be free to do what they want to do in their free time. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some Some people believe that children should do organised activities in their leisure time, but others believe that children should be free to do what they want to do in their free time. Both views have positive or negative things, but I support the first view.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Certain people claim that foreign languages are learned because the learner requires them for a job or travel in another country. Others argue that there are other reasons for the learners, with which I completely agree, and I will explain them in the following essay.

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