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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The impact that growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people traveling by air is to increase taxes on flights. To what extent do you think this could solve the problem?

It is a topic of great debate that emission from air planes is deteriorating the environment, in order to, tackle this issue one of the proposed measures is to increase the taxes on buying plane tickets, so that commuters start avoiding this mode of transport. However, in my viewpoint this measure would help to some extent only and reasons to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs. As a solution, we must focus on developing new technologies, which could help to ameliorate the pollution caused by the aeroplanes.

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Some believe travel is overrated. People argue whether travel is or is not a component of a quality education. To what extent do you agree with it?

In the last few years, many people have chosen to travel for their different perspectives. Some believe that it is overrated, in contrast, others opine that it provides Quality education. From my perspective, I agree that travel provides Quality education. In the following paragraphs, I am going to show the supporting benefits of travelling.

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A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 years old watch television and/or play video games too much. How does the problem affect? What measures can be taken to control it?

A report depicted that a lot of children around 7 until 11 years old are addicted to watch television or play video games. It will lead to bad eyesight and a serious problem in the future. Meanwhile, the role of the parents is really important here to control the using of handphone and TV. I highly suggest for the parents to set a screentime schedule.

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Some people believe that successful sports teams are always those with the strongest or fittest players other things that successH discuss both view and give your opinion

Some believe physically strong and fit players make a successful sports team. While others reckon mental strength has more to do with the success of a sports group. Although healthy brain can give players some advantages, I believe having a robust physique gives player advantage over his competitor.

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A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the level of migration to developed countries increases, it is clearly obvious that these people will contribute to a country’s well-being.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In the modern epoch, advancement of modern technology has made things easier for people such as travelling, communication and shopping. One section of society believes that this advance technology has united people; however others refute with claim. Both the viewpoints of this essay will be discussed before a reasonable conclusion is drawn.

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Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the years. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer longer vacation. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

People often discuss that it is better to have many short holidays for work breaks. However, some people believe that having longer and fewer vacations is better for relaxation. I firmly believe that taking free days off from work is better. Because there is not enough time for distracting from work.

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Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There have been contentious debates over whether actual environmental issues will provoke the extinction of the human life on earth. Some people believe that this outcome is inevitable and we must seek life beyond earth, while others argue that this is not bound to happen in the foreseeable future. Having these differing views, I am inclined to believe that we'll be living in this planet for a long time before the risks to life overcome the possibilities to thrive.

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Some people think that it is more effective for student to study in groups, while other believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

WHETHER STUDYING IN A GROUP OR STUDYING ALONE IS BETTER IT HAS LONG BEEN HOTLY DEBATED. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS, IN A SUPPORT OF FORMER.

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In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem?

In more than one country children suffering from obesity are an increasing concern. I think that an exaggerated consumption of junk food is the problem's main reason, but both governments and individuals can tackle the problem with some measures.

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many young children have indiscriminated access to a mobil phone. This is because their parents allow those devices to take part of their daily lives, frequently abusing of their use. In my opinion, this provokes a terrible impact in childrens´s living conditions, affecting not only their phisycal but their mental health as well.

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Housing is essential for people. Some argue that the government should offer free housing for people who cannot afford it. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Owning a home is important for humans. In opinion, some people's government must provide free housing for those who are not able to buy it themselves. I disagree with this point of view, since it's not profitable and productiveness will decrease. In this essay, I will explain why I disagree with this opinion.

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Many people believe that reducing obesity is due to educating people, while others argue that education does not work. Discuss both points and give your opinion?

In recent years, obesity has been a major health concern among people. Although some agree that education played a huge role in the decrease of obesity, others argue that learning has nothing to do with it. In this essay, I shall discuss both sides of this argument before presenting my perspective that education can teach individuals about the benefits of healthy diet and the risk associated with obesity.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent times, many people who live in rural areas are moving to cities which caused a decrease in population of countryside. I believe this is a negative development because of the problems caused by this event such as overpopulation and economic problems.

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Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There has been contentious debates over whether space exploration should cease its activity so that the funding might be allocated towards a different purpose that could be potentially more beneficial for a nation. Some people believe that space exploration is substancial for our future development, while others argue that a better use of the funds may be considered. Despite the differing views, I am inclined to believed that investigation regarding this field has significantly contributed to plenty technological advances and, thus, it is crucial to keep up investigations and developments, as well as funding in this sector.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that advertisements can help a business a lot by persuading people to purchase their products or services. However, others believe that advertising marketing is no longer useful as consumers seem to not care about it anymore. Therefore, in this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and present my opinion.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Western cultures often emphasize that children should try hard to achieve their dreams. Society believe that this can boost their motivation to be diligent, and boost their confidence to chase them. However, it seems to me that there are some merits and demerits with this statement. Therefore, in this essay, I will present some advantages and disadvantages which will be set out below.

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NEWS STORIES ON TV AND IN NEWSPAPER ARE VERY OFTEN ACCOMPANIED BY PICTURES. SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THESE PICTURES ARE MORE EFFECTIVE THAN WORDS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE AND GIVE YOUR OPINION?

In this contemporary world, advertisements are pivotal for individuals in learning and gaining knowledge about something new. It is believed that pictures used by marketing companies on TV or newspapers are very common nowadays and they are more effective than words. I partially agree with this notion and will elucidate my opinion the following paragraphs.

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In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging business and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In many cities, problems associated with overpopulation are increasingly common. Some governments are now inspiring citizens to move from cities to rural areas. I personally believe that while in rural areas, people do not get enough modern facilities, the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks because the load of population will be reduced, and the associated problems will be reduced in cities.

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Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Currently, many people who struggle with health issues are increasingly adopting a perspective of resorting to home remedies and alternative drugs instead of paying visits to a physician. This approach is harmful to one's health and could result in one's death. Therefore, this essay will analyze the negative impacts of this attitude in terms of the role of doctors in critical situations and the complexity of illnesses.

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