IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 172

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others think that actions can be taken to bring the change. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is argued that the plants and animals are affected by the human activities around the world. Some experties believe that changes can be made to it, while other thinks that it's not possible. I completely agree with the ideas and will support my opinion in this essay with examples.

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Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Environmental problem is one of the primary issue on earth. Many individuals say that the loss of certain species of plants and animals is the major environmental matter, while others believe that there are more foremont environmental problems. This essay will explain both point of views and give my personal standpoint in detail.

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A large number of young people cannot find a job after leaving school. What problems will youth unemployment cause for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among young people?

A greate number of graduates are facing difficulties in finding proper job opportunities. This situation can cause harm to both youngsters and the society and various actions should be taken to tackle this problem.

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The best way to reduce, the amount of traftic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that reducing the demand for people to go to workplaces, schools or malls is the best way to decrease the number of transports on the city roads nowadays. While there are some benefits to this option, I partly disagree with this notion due to the risks it presents.

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Many people think that the behavior of professional sportsmen off the field is not important as long as they are good players. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Although some people claim that professional athletes can behave as they want in their personal life if they play well in the field, I totally disagree with this view because they are regarded as role models and function as an advertisement. In this essay, I elaborate on my opinion.

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Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up. Do the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks?

A lot of students opt for education at universities that are situated far away from the areas that they were brought up in. Although, this can help them with better career opportunities, I believe the negatives far outnumber the positives because of the adverse impacts it can have on their health in the long term.

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in spite of advancements made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Although the farming methods have been developed today, starvation is one the most fundamental issues that many people are still dealing with. There are several reasons for this peoblem which will be discussed in this essay and then, some solutions will be suggested to tackle it.

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Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet. How accurate is this statement? Is there any other big threat to mankind?

Changes in the climate is the highest form of danger imposed to living beings on earth. This notion is completely valid due to the extremeties it is causing. Another huge threat would be the skewed resource allocation between the financially stronger and weaker sections of the world.

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Decribe the benifit of smart-phone in your job and in your day by day activities

There are many cutting-edge technology devices that I have used. If I have to choose one to talk about, it could be the hand phones. You know I have been using the hand phone for a long period of time. However recently I just bought a new smartphone that the old one had been had a serious problems.

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First some people think that it is responsibilities of governments to take care of the environment while other believe that it is responsibility of the citizens discuss both views and give your opinion

There is an ongoing discussion between people where taking care of the environment is government's responsibility; meanwhile, others argue that the citizens should be more responsible to preserve the environment. I argue that this action should be done by both parties.

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The government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatment facility in order to protect the envirnonment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

A lot of millennials are of the notion that higher authorities should shut down the factories that are generating huge amount of hazardous waste without proper channels for their disposal. I will shed the light on both the views and put forward my opinion on the same.

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In this contemporary era, a Vital role is played in education. Some individuals opine that reading stories with the aid of the internet is better as compared to watching TV or playing online games with children. I believe that reading E-booksbooks offer more advantages rather than playing games or watching shows.

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and peoms. To what extend do you agree and disagree?

There is an argument that studying literature, such as poems and novels, is claimed to be an useless activity for high schoolars. I strongly disagree with this point of view and I will elaborate more on this essay.

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More and more movies are being released directly onto streaming platforms, like Netflix and Disney Plus, rather than being played in cinemas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

The number of films released in cinemas is decreasing significantly, owing to the fact that they are now launched on websites and applications like Netflix and Disney Plus. Although this has numerous benefits like cost efficiency, it reduces family time and the impact of a social message being perceived by society.

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Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that competition in classroom can be disadvantageous to students, whereas other argue that it can make them eager to learn new things. Although it can cause mental stress on children's mind, I personally think that learning in such an environment can increase their attention toward lessons.

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Preventative Measures According to the U.S. Department of Justice, compliance programs should contain preventative measures like monitoring and training to fend off corruption issues. To what extent do you think the faithful execution of preventative measures could limit corruption? Do you think corruption is something the business community could eliminate completely, or is it an inevitable phenomenon we must manage?

Whenever we talk about corruption, in essence, it is the violation of some legal provision.

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Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university to or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages?

In some countries for example Saudi Arabia taking a gap year will lower your chances of getting into a university, so in Saudi due to their system, it is better to not take a year off, to increase your chances of getting into a university.

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The government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatment facility in order to protect the envirnonment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

It is often discussed that governments should have access to people's mobile phone call records and messages. Some people think the government should have access because of safety reasons, while others believe it is private information and should not be available without permission. I completely agree with the latter statement. Phone call records and messages are personal information that should not be accessible by anybody.

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Some people think that paretnts should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

All the people should be a good person to enhance our society. Some people argue that parents should teach children to be good members of society ,while others say that schools should teach this. This essay intends to delve into both perspectives. I, however, side with the former view.

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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

One of the widely discussed issues at present is the causes and consequences of rural-urban youth movements. However, there is no absolute agreement as some people find study in the city beneficial, while others consider everything associated with overpopulation. Surely, there are both pros and cons to crossing but I believe advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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