IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 171

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Nowadays, more and more people spend more time away from their families. What atre the possible reason and the effeects on the people themselves and their families.

Individuals tend to spend the most part of their time separately from their family members. While the main reason is people's aim to achieve higher goals in their career and go out of their comfort zone, it may cause psychological damage to both hard workers and family members.

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More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are some possible solutions?

People in developing countries are increasingly buying cars for the first time. The most common problem is, without being aware of road safety, people buy their first cars, and the solution would be not permitting people to buy cars, without learning driving properly.

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Many young people do not know how to manage their money when graduating high school. What do you think are the reason what an be done to teach them this important skills

Nowadays, more a more youngers who have just graduated high school have a lack of knowledge about managing their financial resources. While the main reason is financial independence provided by younger parents , It could be solved by trading lessons about economy at school.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming, interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people resarch this?

These days people are getting interested in the history of the house and building they live in. To find the history of the properties, they use diverse ways. In this essay I will discuss why people show this behaviour and the way they find the history.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper of books becasue they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many printed newspapers and books are getting replaced with reading online these days. Some people predict nobody will read printed newspapers and books in the future however I do not agree with this opinion. I have been using an ipad for 10 years which means reading books and news online is familiar to me. Nevertheless I prefer to read something physical. There are many reasons why I still prefer paper.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

The idea of whether to ask the high graduated person to stay in the country after their education or to be free for working abroad is controversial today. Both prospective require careful examination, which we will discuss here.

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Nowadays, most large companies operate multi-nationally. To what extent those companies should have responsibility towards local communities in which they operate? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that more huge companies operate are essential. The benefits of companies operating for people have increased in recent years. It is useful to utilize wonderful companies operating in life. This essay will first suggest that companies operate and companies should have a responsibility towards local communities are the foremost reasons.

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Some are of the opinion that children below the age of 12 shouldn’t be allowed to have a mobile phone. Others believe that mobile phones are a useful tool for children of all ages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that the provision of smartphones should be permitted to children from 12 years old onwards, whereas others completely disagree and imply that anyone (including children who are much younger) should have the opportunity to use one and enjoy its benefits. This essay agrees that although mobile phones are able to provide useful tools, they do not overweigh the high risks that they might bring to a very young person.

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The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

The issue has sparked an ongoing debate regarding the current increasing availability of low-cost airlines. While some claim that it is satisfactory when people can travel around the world, the opposite holds a strong view that it is unsatisfactory overally. While the latter is valid to some extent, I would consider myself an advocate of the former.

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The plan below show a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the changes that have occurred in a local school area since 1985 until these days.

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Many countries want to host international sports event, while other countries think that hosting sports event has more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The idea of being a host to a worldwide known sports event can spark both positive and negative emotions. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on the potential problems and benefits that come with being the host country and provide my own opinion.

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some people think our first impression of someone is important, while others think we should not judge another person so quickly and should take our time to know them better discuss both sides and give your opinion .

The question of whether, first impressions play a crucial role in the initial perception of people's character has been always challenging. Some people argue the first impression is essential to inform about some person's personality traits. While others claim that being judgmental is so unfair for an initial counter. I believe that being patient is so important to recognize someone's characteristics.

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Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agrede or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience .

Nowadays, youngsters tend to take a gap year between graduating from high school and becoming a freshman at university in order to prepare for work, travel around the world, and gain benefits to time when they return. Personally, I completely agree with this idea, because I think that extra year would greatly improve solitary experience and university readiness.

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People say that it is a waste of time for high school students to learn literature such as novels and poems. Do you agree or disagree ?

Learning about a nation's literary and cultural works is an important aspect of our education. I mostly agree, that students should be taught about famous novels and poems however, it should be done in moderation to ensure that the material is understood properly.

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Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days, some people have argued that sports games are crucial for society. Since sports games can give people passion, they can contribute to improving society. However, others believe sports games should be taken only as entertaining activities because they easily lead people to become exclusive, not allowing others on different sides. And I agree with the latter statement.

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What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

Recently, shopping online or e-commerce seems to be expanding in society because a vast number of people are using it to purchase what they need. The advantages and disadvantages of shopping online in both customer’s view and company’s view will be discussed as below.

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1.Some people say that when deciding how taxes should be spent, governments should prioritise health care. Other people believe that there are more important priorities for taxpayers' money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that the government should spend taxpayer money on health care. However, I strongly believe that there are more important the government should prioritise.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that you can get success within hard work and determination, however, others think that income and appearance are also more essential factors. Both views will be discussed in this essay before providing my own idea in conclusion which supports the former view.

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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that rich countries should increase the acceptance of newcoming foreigners and provide them with basic life necessities. I totally agree with this statement because this option contributes the country finding cheap workers and gives a new opportunities for incomers to build a new life.

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International travel is becoming cheaper, and more and more countries open their door to tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

It is true that global tourism has become inexpensive these days, and an increasing number of nations are freely allowing entry of tourists. While there are possible disadvantages associated to this trend, I think that potential benefits of the growth in tourism overweigh its drawbacks.

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