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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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MANY CITIES CONTAIN OLD PUBLIC BUILDINGS,SUCH AS TOWN HALLS ANFF ART GALLERIES,WHICH ARE EXPENSIVE TO REPAIR.SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT GOVERNMENTS SHOULD REPLACE THESE BUILDINGS WITH NEWS ONES.OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT IT IS IMPORTANT TO KEEP THE OLD BUIldings discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, some individuals discuss public places. While some argue that old public buildings be rehabilitated, others oppose it and support the construction of new modern ones. This essay will discuss both thoughts and provide an opinion. On the one hand, some argue that governments should replace aging structures with new ones due to the high costs associated with the maintenance of old buildings and the inconsistency associated with availability of financial resources. For instance, the National Institution in Lagos, which houses invaluable artifacts of Nigeria's cultural heritage, has faced numerous challenges in its upkeep. Issues that that range from repairs of wear and tear, correction of some structural defects and quarterly facelifts. Advocates for replacement argue that investing in modern facilities would alleviate financial burdens and provide spaces better equipped to serve contemporary needs, such as improved safety standards and accessibility.

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Some people think that visiting museums and art galleries is the best way to learn about art, While others believe that there are betteer ways of doing that. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, art is an important category that people like because it might show culture and development in some regions; as a result, most people like to learn it to do it or recognize communities; additionally, People have different ideas about art learning. A group of them believe the best way which people can learn art is by visiting some places that have it such as museums and art galleries; in contrast, another group think we can find better ways of doing it. In my opinion, the second belief is the best one due to the fact people have various talents, so they can learn art in diverse types.

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Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects such as reading, writing, and math in elementary schools. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Humanity's reliance on computers has been increasing exponentially throughout the last decades. As a result of this, a group of people are now in favour of integrating computer skills within elementary school curriculums as a primary subject like math, reading, and writing. I, too, strongly agree with this notion that people should develop an aptude for computers at an age when knowledge is more likely to become bonified.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed that science is for the sake of human convenience. It should be used as a tool to increase the quality of people's lives. However, the development of science may not always be compatible with a better life for everyone. War and weapons can be a good indication of the devastating effects of improvement in science. In my opinion, science should be only in favour of better lives and such impacts might be controlled or avoided.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that parents should teach their child how to be good members of society, while others are of the opinion that school is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter, despite parents can give the practical experiences their children, school lessons can give insights what it takes to be good citizens.

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Some people say that individuals should change jobs during their working life often while others believe that doing the same job has advantages to individuals, companies, and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about choices of careers, that individuals should change jobs during their working life often while others believe that doing the same job has advantages to individuals, companies, and society. In today's competitive job market, I agree with those who believe that others doing the same job has benefits to people and society.

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Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarkets rather than small shops or local markets. Is this positive or negative development? Discuss and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people would like to provide their daily needs from supermarkets instead of small stores. I heartfully believe that this change is a positive one, and the reasons will be discussed below.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The glowing development of social networks has reduced the time spent interacting face-to-face or meeting friends for many people.For this reason, this has had a negative impact on the social lives of people. While it is true that some argue these advancements have led to a decline in face-to-face interactions and negatively impacted social lives, I believe that this perspective overlooks the significant benefits these technologies offer. Therefore, I disagree with the notion that modern communication methods have had a predominantly negative effect on social lives.

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Many people around the world use social media day to keep in touch with other people and new events. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, modern technology is allowing us to benefitfrom anumber of new facilities, which our ancestors did not, one of them is being on social media,however, no matter how many advantages social media has, it can also start an addiction for the young juveniles, which can affect their mental health. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The advancements of public infrastructure hold significant importance for city layout and environmental sustainability. In my view, I strongly agree with the statement that more money should be allocated by governments for the railway system.

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First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

There are no doubts, that the picture that a unknown individual forms in the mind of a person who meets with him at first time is crucial. I agree with people, who believe that the performance in an interview is the main factor of achieving a nice work.

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Some people believe that it is the best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions

I agree with the statement, that there are people who could live with limited money or endure an unsuitable job, while others actively strive to improve their lives. This essay will dive into the argument for embracing an unsuitable job with insufficient funds, and fighting for a better life. Ultimately, I believe people who are not settling for less will have a persistent character and always do their best in everything.

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Some people believe that every human can create art. Other people think that art can only be created by people with special talents. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the current era, the field of art is receiving a lot of attention and interest from everyone. While some people believe that every human can create art, other people think that art can only be created by people with special talents. This essay will analyze these two essays before coming to a conclusion.

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People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, it is believed that people in this century are having good life in comparison to past centuries. I certainly agree with this statement, so this essay will discuss how nowadays life can not only provides easy and rapidly solutions, but also includes high quality services.

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided.

Dealing with the children’s issues has always been one of the most challenging tasks for parents, particularly when children reach the adolescent period. There are two contrasting views regarding the matter of teenagers’ conflicts with their parents. Some people see it as an essential part of a child’s development while others believe it as a disadvantageous experience. In my opinion, the second viewpoint is more aligned with my beliefs. In the following I will elaborate both views, and explain my own idea.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Many people from various countries prefer to move away from family and friends in order to find work elsewhere for a more suitable living. While this provdes a lot of benefits to the people, it also comes with various drawbacks.

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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this¬? What solutions can you suggest? s

Even if there is a lot of workout centers, passive lifestyle is becoming widespread worldwide. This essay will discuss the problems associated with sedentary lifestyle and suggest possible solutions to address them. Inactive way of living causes an increase in health problems such as obesity, diabetes, cardiovascular diseases among the population. The possible solution could be inserting mandatory physical activities in people’s lives by equipping their workplaces with special tools for their physical training.

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the plans below shoe a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. summarise the inoformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make somparison where relavant

The figure illustrates the changes that have occurred to Grange Park which was first opened in 1920 until now. It is evident from the plans that the overall features of the park have varied during these years.

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Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that it is a good idea to demolish aging buildings and homes in urban areas to make place for modern housing complex, while others argue that classic buildings should be preserved. I think both views are valid, but I would argue for the protection of the heritage buildings because each country's culture and way of living is depicted via these kinds of architectural buildings.

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Many people today are worried about "cybercrime" such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does "cybercrime" cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take?

Cybercrime is an important problem connected with stealing personal data and passwords, that makes a lot of people feel unsafe and leads to a number of negative consequences. This essay will explore the main problems caused by this trend and discuss the possible solutions.

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