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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The percentage of overweight children in western societ fty has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the cause and effects of this disturbing trend

Nowadays, obesity in Western nations has increased among by teenagers more than 20% in the last decade. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall elaborate on the reasons and discuss what the side effects are.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the increasing population in many countries, towns and cities are filled with loads of people who like to go outdoors to many public areas. From my perspective, I agree that all towns and cities should have large public outdoor places for the local populatoion to visit.

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Creative artists should always be given freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree on this IELTS topic?

The imagination of creative artists knows no bound. Lately, the masses argue that artists should be given the freedom to express their ideas however they like. There should be no outside factors, like governments, that restrict them. Nevertheless, I think that those people have their rights to convey whatever message. However, there should be some limitations to avoid their arts becoming a negative influence for the consumers.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?

In this globalization era, child labour become ubiquitous in some countries, espesially in development countries. While proponent argue that working is positive for their experienced, others contend full time is totally inappropriate. I personally wholeheartedly agree to the latter, but I will discuss either view points and elaborate my thought on the matter.

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some people that governments should spend money looking for aliens. On the contrary, many of them think that there are a lot of problems to solve in this world and that the money spent on aliens is nothing but waste. However, this essay will argue why authorities should continue looking for life on other planets.

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Nowadays, all of the important media is always accessable and free due to significant development of data dissemination using the Internet.

Nowadays, all of the important media is always accessable and free due to significant development of data dissemination using the Internet. Therefore, the topic of the future of printed books and newspaper became the reason of many arguements. Despite the less relevance of printed media because of improvement of technology, I can say that I am disagree with the opinion that it will totally disappear.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The advancement in science these days helped to enhance people’s lives significantly. However, people would argue whether the aim of science should be solely to improve the living conditions of humans. Some people believe that researchers and scientists should aim to invent things that help people have better lives. Others believe that scientists should aim to understand the surrounding world and make explanations and theories of different fields including physics, chemistry, and others. The article will cover both overviews and my opinion on this matter.

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The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Since people are able to travel to other countries after all the covid-19 restrictions disappeared, group trips and tour guides have become very popular. In my opinion, guided group trips can be a great help for certain people but also limits the adventure of exploring a new place.

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Natural resources, such as water, forest, and oil are being used at an excessive rate. What is the main cause of this problem? How can this issue be solved?

The planet's resources are being exploited at an alarming pace. The primary cause of this phenomenon is overpopulation in big cities, and the most viable solution is to raise people's awareness of this issue.

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Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

Nowadays there is a vast array of job opportunities. Many new companies are developing, which creates a competition between the employers. Searching for a change or a better pay check many people tend to leave their job after a few years, rather than working at the same place their whole lives. In this essay, I will give my opinion on why a (trend) like this occurs, as well as give solutions on how to fix it.

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Government of many countries had to impose a lockdown to control the Coronavirus pandemic. What were the advantages and disadvantages of this lockdown.Give eamples from your own experience

It was thought that quarantine was the best possible solution ,implemented by govenments, during covid-19 spread to decline the number of people catching the virus. While the lockdown caused many people's lives being saved, there are many primary drawbacks involved, including dead ends to many occupations and serious mental health issues.

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the Internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are .on the other hand it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledage or experience . Task2

It is believed that the internet is an essential tool in the globe due to the fact that it helps us to keep in touch anywhere in the world. However, some websites have become an obsession and motivate us to stay at home instead of meeting our friends. I believe that it has an important role in our lives if we use it correctly because it covers the social and business aspects in our lives.

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Obesity is a growing problem in developed nations. What are the reasons for the increase in numbers of very overweight people? What can be done to deal with the problem?

Nowadays, first-world countries are facing problems of obesity on their respective citizens. This essay discusses the reasons for the increase in population of overweight people and methods to solve the problem.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that students must study History as it is extremely crucial for school curriculum. Others stick to the point that nowadays there are other subjects such as Science and Technology that are more significant rather than History. While knowledge of Science and Technology leads people to a bright future, I tend to think that through History we are able to broaden the horizons in different ways.

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The government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to help cut down on pollution from exhaust fumes. To what extaent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

With the degradation of ecosystem at an alarming rate, a significant number of ecologists have called for the government to charge fee on car drivers during rush hour, expressing concern about the destruction of the environment. They believe that this national action would be appropriate for improving air quality. I wholeheartedly agree with this opinion since it is integral to reduce the emission of fumes significantly for sustainable environment.

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Some people feel online courses are better while others feel classroom courses are good? Discuss both the views and give your opinion.Some people feel online courses are better while others feel classroom courses are good? Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some believe that taking online classes is more effective method for learning and retaining information better, however others support the idea of traditional classroom courses. Even though both methods have their own specific positive aspects, I believe that e-learning is more preferable option since it offers more facilities that enhances people's convenience and is more time-efficient.

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Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?

Violence has become widespread in many parts of the world. Many people think that the main reason for this is the international popularity of martial arts. I partially agree with this view, especially regarding its impact on children. In this essay, I will discuss the side effects of martial arts and their advantages.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are contrasting opinions when it comes to working for the same organisation throughout one's career versus switching between different organisations. Obviously, every group of people are searching for more positive than negative factors in their choice such as levelling up the career ladder for one point of view or expanding their professional experience for another point of view. In my opinion, there are merits to both approaches, but I personally believe that gaining different sorts of working experience is a strong plus for everybodies career. In the following essay I would like to discuss some points connected to this topic.

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians, or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

It is a common belief that celebrities including movie stars, entertainers, and athletes are receiving more money than they deserve. This essay will shed light on the reasons why I strongly advocate with this statement before discussing other careers that I believe should be paid more generously.

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant period of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. What are the advantage and disadvantage of the trend?

Nowadays, the number of people travelling to other countries either to find a job or to study for a significant period of time is considerably increased. Although these people can face many benefits to doing this, some of them may face some difficulties. I think the benefits far out weigh any drawbacks.

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