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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

In this modern era, most students around the world have their own mobile phone. While this device without a doubt plays a big role in terms of safety, learning, and networking, many schools have chosen to restrict their use in school grounds. In my opinion, this is a positive step and can bring many benefits, not only academically but also socially and physically.

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Some Young People are leaving the countryside to live in towns and cities, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Currently, most of the youth generation are moving from the countryside to live in cities and towns, thus the elder people are left behind in the countryside. This situation is happening because young people are more eager to explore new places and if they move they can easily find interesting places in cities to hang out rather than the countryside. These problems can be solved by teaching or letting them know that they can do many fun activities without leaving their current places.

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Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

The youth of every country is its valuable resource. The responsibility for change, progress and innovation lies on their shoulders. They can make or mar the society. Many students growing enormous difficulties in attentiveness and concentration during school hours. This essay will not only highlight the invariable problems associated with the grave issue, but also present some potential measures to resolve it.

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Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Wedding traditions are quite important in any country. There are some reasons to do big wedding parties such as even though increasing expenses. I believe that there are some negative effects of this action.

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Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of the private health care outweigh the advantages?

Good health is an essential need for humans, so there is a debate that healthcare services should not be managed by profit-oriented organizations. In my point of view, I do not agree with the argument.

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In the age of digital communication and social media, face-to-face interactions are becoming less common. Some people think that this is decreasing people's ability to communicate well in person. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, with the trend of of digitalization and social network, virtual communication has becoming more rampant lessening the frequency of person-to-person exchange. Some people believe that this phenomenon is lessening our ability to have a proper communication in real life. I believe this has a negative impact on their ability to communicate effectively face to face

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More and more people today are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Therefore there is no need to print books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays increasing use of computers and electronic devices get information. For this reason, no need to type books, magazines, and newspapers. I totally disagree with this. I will argue why I agree with this.

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There is an increasing trend around the world towards having a small family rather than a large family. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there is a significant rise in the number of people who prefer having a small family instead of a large one. In this essay, I will explain why the benefits of having a small family overshadow the drawbacks.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is worth noting that there is an increasing amount of waste being produced in our societies today, resulting in pollution and environmental degredation. This phenominon is largly owing to people's uncontrolled consumption patterns and untidy behaviours. The government should take actions to tackle this issue in order to maintain a clean environment.

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Some people believe that mobile phone conversations should be banned in crowded and social places, while others argue it is okay to be allowed.

The debate over whether mobile phone conversations should be permitted in crowded and social places is a contentious issue, with proponents and opponents presenting valid arguments.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

Every subject has an impact on modern phenomena. Several individuals opine that history is an essential subject for school learners whereas the opposite opinion is that studying modern subjects such as science and technology is more effective. Personally, I support the second statement, and in the following paragraphs, I will discuss both views and the reasons for my bias.

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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.Discuss both views and give you own opinion

People have different views on the goals and functions of museums. In my opinion, a successful museum should be both interesting and educational.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, some people argue that publicizing is beneficial for people to purchase goods. Others say that, publicizing is useless and people do not often pay attention to it. In this essay, I will analytically discuss both these views and come up with my own opinion.

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Happiness is often considered difficult to define. Why is this? What factors determine happiness?

It is said that happiness is one of the most significant feelings in life. Some people think that it can be defined as wealth and material success while others believe that it is emotions and relationships between individuals, that is why it is very difficult to define.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In many countries, it is common for children to be told anything is possible if they set their mind to it. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this message.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The ever-rising development in the technology has broadened to the transportation industry with the introduction of driverless vehicles. In my estimation, there is likely to be numerous benefits for this revolution, which will be pointed out in detail below.

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There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Recent research shows that music is not only entertainment but also beneficial for a view of health. Nowadays, there are lots of music types, for example, the traditional music types are still continuing to their popularity against international music. Whatever the music type is, it is certain that the music helps us to feel different feelings and remember the past. In this article, I will give you various thoughts and examples about this issue.

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Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many factors for enterprises to hire new employees, such as the level of education and the social skills. Some think the former one is more crucial than the latter one. In my opnion, I firmly believe social ability is more important, and the following content will outline the reasons.

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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In order to increase the effectiveness of the office work process some employers use open work zones instead of separated work spaces. I think that it has mostly positive effects for two main reasons.

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Nowadays,The way many people interact with each other has it changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the type of relation that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development.

Currently, the development of technology changes the way people interact with others, and it can influence the type of relationships that people make. Although technology is getting easy on the activities of humans, I think this condition is going to cause a negative impact in the long run, and my reasons will be elaborated in the paragraph below.

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