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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Friends have more impact on the academic performance of students than their teachers do. Do you agree or disagree? Use details and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays, academic performance in children is a hot topic among parents and teachers, as some people say that friends or colleagues have more impact on learners comparatively tutors. If it comes to me then I totally agree with this statement.

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The plans below show a harbor in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided maps illustrate a harbour back in 2000 and its present layout. Overall, it can be observed that it stood in approximately the same shape during the period, with the addition of minor facilities.

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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

In this competitive world, people are migrating from villages to cities to seek opportunities and to improve their lifestyles. However, it is good, but people forget the importance of rural areas. In my opinion, it is good but there should be a proper balance in these areas. And also, what kind of problems many countries face because of people moving into urban areas.

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Global warming is emerging as a great threat to human survival in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and suggest some solutions?

Many think that global warming is rising and sea levels are increasing at unacceptable rates, also it can create some dangers for human existence. This essay believes that it stems from the rising number of factories, fossil fuels and plastic packaging. Additionally, the government can mitigate this way to enlightenment in schools and consulting renewable energy sources.

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Some countries invest in specialized sports facilities for top athletes but not for the average person. Is this a positive or a ngeative development.

There is an ongoing interest in national investments in sports. Many countries allocate funds to specialized sports infrastructure for professional athletes, but not for amateur players. The question now is whether this is a positive or a negative development. I believe this change is of benefit, and I will delineate my reasons in this essay, supported with relevant examples.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kinds of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

Individuals generally avoid embracing changes in their lives. The problems it causes are that without changes the lives of people become monotonous and stops the growth of individuals. To solve this issue, people should come out of their comfort zones and should try new things in their lives.

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Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that human life was better when technology was simpler. I completely disagree with this point of view because technology has made daily life more comfortable and eased studies and work.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can certainly lead to both social and practical difficulties. In this essay, I will explain why I agree with the statement that living in a foreign language environment can cause significant problems.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a growing debate about whether someone should learn a foreign language if they are not going to travel or work abroad. Some people believe that those are the only reasons to learn a second language, while others argue that there are many more. My personal view is that there are certainly more benefits of learning a foreign language.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The education plan can include added subjects which are not a required part of speciality. Some students do not mind learning optional subjects in addition to a main program so that it can extend their erudition, while the others would like to focus on only subjects which concern their chosen profession. This essay will discuss both sides of the topic and give my personal opinion why universities should give a choice to students.

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Some deem that job pleasure is more important than job society. In contrast ,others think thay having a stable job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A certain group of professionals believe that a job should be interesting to do, while others prioritise the stability of the job over its comfort. Both the given views are correct in their own way, so these following paragraphs will provide some insights and I would like to conclude my opinion in the end.

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It is important for every one, including young people, to save money for thier future. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Saving money for later life stages is often considered an important action, especially for youngsters, as they can build their life on these savings. So, it is normal to consider it an essential part of a living. I also find myself among the ones who agree with this topic and in this essay, some reasons are going to be mentioned.

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Studies have shown that many young children worry about their appearance. What are the reasons for this? What might best be done to reduce the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Research has shown that a lot of teenagers are concerned about how they look. Especially nowadays, humans have a lot of problems with thinking about their appearance. This essay will discuss the solution to this and the reasons, eventually it will be finished by adding my own perspective.

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Many people think that living in the city is better than living in the countryside. To what extent do you agree with this view. Gia Linh

In modern society, many people believe that living in the city offers an enormous benefits than living in the countryside. I completely agree with this view since urban areas provide better job opportunities, improved public services, and a more dynamic lifestyle that contributes to personal and professional growth.

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Many people think that living in the city is better than living in the countryside. To what extent do you agree with this view.

In modern society, many people believe that living in the city offers a wide range of benefits than living in the countryside. I completely agree with this view since rural areas provide more opportunities that are not possible in villages, and I will discuss my opinion in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the contemporary world, industrialization and globalisation lead people to migrate to metropolitan cities from small cities. This behaviour profoundly contributes to the lack of employees in many sectors, whereas it reduces the demand of rural regions and discourages companies from investing in these areas. In my opinion, this attitude causes a huge devastation and appears a certain economic imbalance among poor cities, so it stands out as a negative development.

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discuss the causes of children academic, social and commercial pressures. and give measures to the same

In recent years, young children are experiencing immense pressure from academic, social and commercial outlooks. Modern society has never been easy on children, regardless of enhancement in social structures and behavioural systems. This essay will discuss both the causes and effects of this issue with a logical narration.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high education

Nowadays, It is necessary to include free of charge community services in the high school curriculum in my opinion this will have a positive impact on the upbringing and personality of young people. In this essay, I will look into the advantage of the importance of community affairs for teenagers.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Different people thrive under different circumstances, some due to competition while others due to being able to cooperate with one another. This affects not only people at work places but also students at school or in everyday life. Individuals tend to have their own opinions on this matter, some believing it allows them to succeed while others get discouraged. This essay will explore both views of this matter along with my personal opinion.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Business days per week should be reduced while employees should be given extended weekends. I do not concur with the notion because it would be unfair to the businesses as well as workers.

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