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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people when visiting the local historical and cultural tourist attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that some individuals believe that foreign tourists must pay more than local people for tourist places such as historical culture and tourist places , in my opinion, I disagree , and I will explain this below the statement .

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Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?

There is growing concern about the stress and amount of time in work are higher these days. The writer of this essay thinks this is because of the desire to enhance working efficiency and the overuse of technologies. This problem can be solved by implementing more relaxing times for the employees.

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In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

In certain nations, shopping in big malls of cities are preferred by many individuals who live in smaller towns. This is because smaller town stores are going out of business. Moreover, people who do not own vehicles have no options left to do shopping due to this, the number of cars is increasing on the roads. In this essay, I will explain the demerits which are more compared to merits.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

In many cities, there is growing need for housing due to population growth. While some believe that building houses on large areas of land is more effective, I strongly believe that constructing taller buildings is a better solution. This essay will explain the benefits of high-rise buildings and why there are more suitable for urban development.

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Some people believe that children today are not as well-behaved as they used to be. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, concerns have been raised about the behavior of today’s children. While some people argue that children are becoming increasingly disrespectful and undisciplined, others believe that children today simply face different challenges than previous generations. In my view, children’s behavior is shaped by multiple factors, and both parents and schools play a key role in guiding them.

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A group of people believe that smoking in the public should be banned. Other groups of people argue that it should not. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some people who perceive that prohibiting people from smoking in public is necessary, while others stand on the opposite side. The writer of this essay firmly agrees with the idea of banning people from using cigarettes in social locations due to protecting non-smokers and reducing environmental pollution, although this problem is more prone to individuals' perceptions.

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Most people prefer ready to eat food outside of their homes rather than home made food now. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?

The topic of whether individuals prefer eating out than home-cooked meals bears consideration. While critics argue that having a meal outside provides convenience, the food safety and health concerns clearly outweigh these benefits.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

There is almost no time for leisure activities for individuals working overtime. Although the significant drawback of this is a lack of time for socializing with family and friends, this situation has more advantages than disadvantages because it leads to early financial freedom and saves money.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, advertising strategies for most existing companies strive to highlight the fresh ideas of their goods. Personally, I think it's mostly positive development, since this practice makes clients happy and businesses striving.

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The plan below shows a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university

The two diagrams illustrate the layout and features of two types of student accommodation at an Australian university: one designed for two people and the other for a single occupant.

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The plan below shows a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

The provided diagrams illustrate the layouts and amenities available in student accommodations designed for single and double occupancy at an Australian university.

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Some people believe that children should be tought how to become good parents at school. Do you agree or disgree with the statement.

Many people believe that students should learn how to become responsible parents, and that it is the teachers’ responsibility to teach this. I completely agree with this view, and in this essay, I will explain why.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the modern era, childhood plays a pivotal role in one's development. There has been a heated argument about the topic of providing good parental education to young ones in school. There is no iota of doubt that this is a positive idea .A majority of society favours it, however, rest opposes it. The following paragraph will highlight my perspective which will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to teach children to be a good citizen or worker rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Schools are widely regarded as institutions that not only shape children's personalities but also help them become responsible citizens and productive workers. Some critics argue that schools focus too heavily on preparing children to be good workers and citizens rather than supporting their individual development. This essay disagrees with this view and argues that schools play a vital role in supporting children’s personal growth, which in turn helps them become well-rounded citizens and effective workers.

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In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

The modern trend of youth crime is one that is often subject to heated debate. There has been an increase in the number of criminal activities committed by teenagers. This essay will discuss why this has occurred and provide several solutions to this trend.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

People's actions across the world have detrimental effects on wildlife. Some individuals claim that these cannot be shifted in a positive direction due to irreversible damages that have already been done to the environment as well as governments not allocate resources for this purpose. Still, there are hopeful ones, who believe in a change by taking required actions, such as creating more conservations for plants and animals, implementing serious penalties and including this topic in the elementary school curriculum to educate children as aware citizens.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind , such as reading and doing word puzzles . Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time . Dicuss two views and give your opinion .

There can be no doubt that the topic of what to do in free time is one which deserves some consideration. It is the view of this writer that the evidence is on the side of those who believe leisure time should be for resting, despite some reservation.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same job. What problemes does this came? What are some possible solutions?

In recent days, workers' competition has spread widely and doesn't see the difference between young and old people. In this essay, the problems will be explained with the solutions will be provided based on my point of view.

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Some people think it is more important to provide parks and sports facilities than to provide shopping centers in these new town for people to spend their free time. To what extent doo you agree or disagree?

New towns and residential centres are continuously being planned and implemented across the globe. Amenities and natural spaces are important features to consider when designing a new town, this essay will discuss the reasons behind my firm opinion that leisure centres and green space are more important than shopping malls.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rising levels of obesity have led to a possible solution of increasing the cost of fattening foods in order to diminish this issue. The writer of this essay strongly agrees with this statement as it will abate the consumption of high-calorie food items and give an incentive to healthier products.

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