IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the contemporary era, crime is a serious problem, and there are many arguments on how to reduce the number of criminals. A range of individuals think that a longer period of prison sentences will solve this issue, meanwhile, their counterparts do not agree and argue that there are other better ways to reduce the crimes. Two aforementioned views will be discussed thoroughly in the following paragraphs before presenting my perspective in the conclusion.

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Some people think that computers are more of a hindrance than a help in today's society. Others believe that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

Many argue that computers have become more of an obstacle than an aid today, while others believe that it has become a crucial part of their both personal and professional lives. In my opinion, in the modern world, the computer has a major influence over people in a positive way rather than being a burden. Owing to the advancement in technologies, mankind was able to become more efficient while, eliminating excessive workloads.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent times, with the help of technology, many individuals prefer to read newspapers on online platforms instead of hard copies, as they are available free of cost. I agree with this notion because people can read anything from anywhere as well as it is also environmentally friendly.

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Chinese scholars writes on how benefitial its for other country to cooperate with China, what do you think is problematic about it?

Chinese scholars Xu and Wang have contributed to the analysis of the challenges and opportunities in the Sino-Kazakh partnership in the energy sector, particularly China’s role in Kazakhstan’s renewable energy development. In their joint research, Xu and Wang examine Kazakhstan’s current development situation of RE’s development. In addition, they are pointing at the impact of Chinese investments and technology transfers with a focus on wind and solar energy projects (Xu and Wang 2019). They highlight key geopolitical risks, including Kazakhstan’s balancing act between major powers, public skepticism toward Chinese investments, and Russia’s strategic influence in the region, all of which shape the trajectory of energy cooperation.

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Many people think that children should be given freedom to make their own choices, while others believe that too much freedom can be harmful. Do you agree or disagree?

The importance of providing flexibility to children which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject the notion. In my opinion, granting limited freedom to offspring is acceptable.

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Many scientists believe that seeking out life by sending messages into space is a good idea while others feel that it is dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary epoch, everyone suffers from diseases. However , nowadays doctor's fees as well as medicines are really expensive and cannot be affordable by everyone so due to this people do not want to visit hospitals. It seems to me that this trend may have a negative impact on society.

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Some people say that in all levels of education from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not in learning practical skills, upto what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, many people think educational institutes are more focused on theoretical and facts curricula, rather than practical skills. Although factual knowledge provides insight into a broad aspect of learning, I completely agree with this statement, schools should encourage practical courses, because this shows real-life situations. This essay will explore these views.

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It has been observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects at university. What are the causes of this? What effects can this have o society?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that more students do not prefer science subjects at university. It is undeniable that science has become an essential part of our life . This essay will discuss both the causes of this phenomenon and the issues that affect society.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, artists are becoming more popular for their work because of social media platforms and the support of the government. It is often argued that the ministry is wasting a huge amount of capital on artists, however, they should use the fund on resolving other major problems in the country. I agree with the second view to a greater extent but I m not denying the benefits of spending currency on the artists. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the topic in detail.

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In the past, most working people had only one job. However, nowadays, more and more people have more than one job at the same time. What are the reasons for this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one job? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the past, individuals typically dedicated their careers to a single job, often remaining with one employer for decades. However, in today’s fast-evolving job market, an increasing number of people hold multiple jobs simultaneously. It is pertinent to note that this shift is driven by economic factors, evolving work cultures, and the rise of flexible job opportunities. While juggling multiple jobs offers certain benefits like economic stability, it also presents notable challenges like stress, lack of job security, and decrease in productivity.

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Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?

It has been claimed by a few individuals that the 21st century is one of the most influential and is generally counted as the era of opportunities. This period, according to predictions, may cause plenty of positive changes to the world, however, I partially share this optimism.

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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The debate has emerged over how competitive sports influence the education of youth. Some people believe that it has positive consequences, while others claim that sports and education are not connected things. This essay will analyze both points of view and give my own personal perspective.

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International travel is becoming cheaper and cheaper, and several countries are opening their doors. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, trips abroad are becoming more accessible every day, what once seemed like a luxury for the majority, is now within the reach of many people.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. UNIVERSITY SPORTS CENTRE (present) Gym Outdoor courts Changing room 25m Pool Outdoor courts Reception Leisure pool Changing room Sports shop UNIVERSITY SPORTS CENTRE (future plans) Changing room 25m Pool Gym Reception S ;ро hall Changing room > E

The maps illustrate the current outline of the university's sports centre and that of a proposed development plan.

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In many countries, the tradition of having family meals together is disappearing. Why is this happening? What will the effects of this be on the family and society?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is having meals with family disappear. It is undeniable meals together in the evening have become an essential part of our life. In this essay, I will look at the factors responsible for full-time management and examine the effects it has on our relationships and lifestyle.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children letter in their life. What are the reason? Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, people are dealing with much harder jobs with lesser salaries. That is why we, as a society, are trying to build ourselves really well before having children of our own. We are not in the 70s or the 80s, where you could find a house for 1 dollar. We are in the new age of this world, the age where life is something luxurious, and surviving it is the new living state. Everything has become expensive, from housing to education, and it is not easy to raise a family without strong financial support.

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Are electric cars really better for the environment? Give your arguments to this topic

Nowadays the usage of e-cars is taking shape in a fast-growing world leading to numerous consequences for the surrounding. This essay will argue that despite there being some concerns in driving advanced vehicles, the benefits that electric machines can bring to the environment, far outweigh any drawbacks.

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You recently stayed at a hotel with your family. This was your first time staying at that hotel and you were very unhappy with your experience. Write an email to the manager: Describe your unpleasant experience.,Ask the manager to repay you in some way, and Suggest how things could be improved.

My name is Helen, a past guest at the Orion Hotel and I am writing this email to describe a disappointing experience during my recent visit with my family.

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Many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. However, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Opinions differ on the benefits of remote work to both parties in employment. Personally, I disagree that this trend only favors staff since telecommuting offers improved work-life balance for hirees and effective business management for hirers.

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Lectures were used in the past with many students. With modern technology available for education, there is no justification for this way of teaching. Do you agree or disagree?

With the intense recent technological developments, many people argue that conventional lessons should come to an end. In my opnion, this is disadvantageous because teachers still engage their experiences in classes and students still need to learn from classroom materials.

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