IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

There is no denying the fact that supporting kids to get part-time jobs has become a popular thing among people. While it is a commonly held belief that encouraging kids to work is beneficial for them. There is also an argument that working children in their free time will have negative effects in the future. In this essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people think that the time and money spent on the protection of wild animals should be spent on improving humans’ quality of life instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is sometimes argued that the time and funds allocated to wild animal conservation should be used to enhance human living standards. While I agree that human needs should undoubtedly take precendence, I firmly believe that resources for the protection of wild animals should not be entirely cut, as it is essential for human well-being and long-term success.

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Some people feel that boarding school are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons consider both sides and discuss.

there is an ongoing debate on the topic of residential schools. A few individuals suggest that hostel schools are a phenomenal choice for children; however, other people are of the opinion that it is unnecessary to give a high priority to boarding schools for several reasons. Therefore, both views will be elaborated on in the forthcoming paragraphs with relevant examples.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that having a competitive spirit in the work atmosphere, during education or even in day-to-day life can be considered as a positive manner, however, others believe that competition can be detrimental and instead people should try to be more cooperative. In this essay, both these perspectives and my own point of view will be discussed.

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Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Employees are increasingly preferring to be self-employed rather than working for any kind of business or company. In terms of flexibility and control over time management for better schedules. In this essay, the advantages and disadvantages of this topic over working for a company will be discussed.

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In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the advantages of this change outweigh its disadvantages?

In some nations, people prefer to drive to purchase in the supermarkets on the outskirts rather than central groceries. While this trend could cause an increasing use of automobiles and serious traffic congestion, I personally believe that its benefits outweigh its drawbacks.

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Nowadays, people make new friends with the use of social networks and internet chat groups. Some of the people think this is good. other people thinks that face-to-face conversations is beneficial. discuss both sides.

These days and in this era we are living a great transformation in our lifestyles, including the way we meet people.However, a lot of people try to keep the traditional method of meeting. In this essay, we will discuss both aspects.

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Nowadays more and more people are using media like TV or online platforms to read news instead of reading newspapers. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, a lot of individuals use media such as television or Internet websites to read news instead of reading newspapers. This essay will argue that although the utilisation of social media to get information is costly and worsens digital divide among the elderly and low-income earners, this situation is highly beneficial because it provides convenience and easier access to its users.

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A large income is much more important than being satisfied at work. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that a higher salary and being comfortable are essential things for employees. It is a commonly held belief that people always choose to have a higher income than be satisfied. There is also an argument that opposite it. In my opinion, I consider that having a better environment is more important than having a large income

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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public place. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, around the world, smoking in cafes and malls has been banned by the government. Moreover, it is argued that smokers must smoke outside, and far away from people. I totally agree with this perspective. This essay will elaborate my reasons.

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İt is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risks is a common part of people's lives, both in their professional career lives and their personal lives. However, these risks can result in big mistakes in personal life and serious financial loss in business life. I believe that the advantages of taking risks outweigh its drawbacks in every aspect of our lives.

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Public libraries will soon no longer be housed in building as all facilites and books are available for all to access. What are the advantages and disadvantages of public libraries existing online?

Public libraries will no longer be seen in buildings because the majority of books and facilities are now made to be easily accessible by users on the Internet. The advantages of this is that it is convenient and because of its non-returnability. However, this new development presents certain challenges such as unemployment and high-cost of books purchased online.

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Personal information is shared readily online, and it is easily accessible, as nothing shared online is truly private. What are some possible problems that could arise due to privacy issues online? What are some solutions to these problems? At least 250

In today's day and age private information is not so private when it comes to the World Wide Web. People are eager to give away their personal details when it comes to making purchases, accepting cookies, or even making friends online. However, giving away information about oneself can lead to serious drawbacks, luckily the solutions to these issues are rather simple.

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Some people think that the best way to solve the problem of air pollution in cities is to increase the cost of vehicle fuel. Others think that different measures should be taken. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people argue that the better solution to solve air contamination in urban areas is to increase the fuel charges. However, others have an opinion to consider different alternatives to control air pollution. Both views have different pros and cons, and in this essay, I will highlight both views and I will give my perspective which regards to air pollution.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of Income. Unfortunately, tourism can be cause of lot of problem if its not well managed . What are the advantage and dis advantage in the modern world? Do you think advantage overweight the disadvantage

In this global world, a number of countries are dependent on visitors for earnings. However, If they are not properly managed they can bring many issues which need immediate action. But we can not deny that they have both benefits and demerits. According to me, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

n today’s rapidly developing world, science plays a fundamental role in shaping modern life. I strongly agree that the primary goal of science should be to improve people’s lives, as it contributes significantly to human health, well-being, and sustainability.

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Most morden families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What is the solution?

Nowadays both mother and father can be involved in financially supporting their family and as a result, children can have a deficit of parents's attention. This essay will explore what reasons behind it including the absence of their own housing and gender equality, and will suggest possible solutions as government support.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

While many believe that earning a high income should be a higher priority when choosing a career, I argue that other factors, such as personal interest, job satisfaction, and work-life balance, also require higher demands. If not, the job provides us with negative emotions or significant stress. Hence, I mostly disagree with the statement.

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Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

Nowadays, it is considered that art and music are the integral core of all communities. While, some argue that today creative fields are not a big necessarity in modern society, others completely oppose this statement. I also disagree with the former statement and in this essay, I will explain the reason for this matter.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Due to the learning benefits and also having better job prospects after graduating, learning various subjects besides the main ones is preferred among some university students. However, due to wasting time and high costs, some suggest that all of the student’s time and energy should be allocated to learning their own lessons and getting a degree.

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