IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 430

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The gap between rich and poor is becoming wider, the rich richer, the poor even poorer. What was caused this problem and how to solve this problem?

With the progress of time, there are more and more methods and ways to make money, and the Matthew effect is becoming more and more obvious. As long as people with smart minds have little success, they will have a cumulative advantage, giving them greater opportunities to achieve even more outstanding achievements. This is also one of the reasons for the gap between the rich and the poor.

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Some teachers think it is effective for student to study in group while others think it is better to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent days, the topic of whether it is more effective for students to study together or alone has generated heated discussions among teachers. Some teachers believe that studying alone is more effective, while others hold the opposite view. I think it is most effective to find the learning method that suits you best.

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In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development？

In recent days, a topic has sparked heated debate in the community about whether it is illegal for companies to deny job offers to applicants because of their age. Some people think age discrimination is illegal, while others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, businesses cannot use age as a reason to reject job applications from those looking for work.

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In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first few months after the birth of their baby. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In recent days, the topic of women taking several months of maternity leave after giving birth has sparked heated discussions in society. Some people believe that they do not need to take longer maternity leave, while others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, the advantages of women taking a few months of maternity leave outweigh the disadvantages.

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Advertisements encourage consumers to buy in quantity rather than promote quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, a topic has aroused heated discussions in society about whether advertising prompts people to blindly buy quantity without promoting quality. Some people think that advertising makes people pay more attention to quality instead of big purchases, while others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, advertising encourages people to buy more instead of promoting quality.

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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Recently, the topic that people no longer need public museums and art galleries because they can use computers to view cultural relics and artworks has aroused heated discussions in society. Some believe that physical museums and galleries are no longer relevant, while others take the opposite view. In my opinion, I am against the dismantling of public museums and galleries.

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Scientist found that most crimes are committed by people who lack education. Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to provide prisoners with education because it will help them find a job when they leave prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

New scientific studies have discovered a strong correlation between low education levels and high crime rates. Some individuals believe that offering education to incarcerated individuals is the best approach to decreasing crime, as it can assist them in finding employment after release. Personally, I agree with this belief. However, other research indicates that many offenders remain psychologically unaltered.

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Today, people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

In recent days, there has been a heated debate in society about the fact that thanks to improvements in communication technology and transportation, people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose. Some believe that the pros outweigh the cons, while others hold an opposing view. In my opinion, this is a negative development, although it brings some benefits.

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for their studies?

Recently, there has been a heated debate in the community about whether school leavers should go straight to university or take a gap year to travel or work for a while. In my opinion, both views have advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is ny increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are number of people who believe that the best way to develop people health is by adding more sports facilities, while others say that it would have some effect on person health and other measures are given. Personally, I would say that increasing sports facilities everywhere will give motivation to work out.

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Nowadays companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear uniform. Think about jobs where uniform is important. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

Currently, many companies and institutions have policies that their employees have to wear the company's uniform. This essay will outline the benefits dan the drawbacks that occur as a result of the policy.

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1.University and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Despite all the changes that are happening in the world, education remains one of the most hotly discussed issues, especially with the advent of online education. Moreover, it has even been argued that human teachers could actually be replaced by distance learning over the Internet. Personally, I think human teachers are irreplaceable.

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Only government action can solve housing shortages in big cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Housing shortages in big cities are a common issue we are facing nowadays. Many folks believe that only the government is able to solve this problem. However, from the way I am thinking, I do not agree with this idea.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, people are gradually taking pills at home instead of checking up with nearby hospitals or doctors. In my opinion, both sides have their advantages and drawbacks.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society?

Crimes have drastically risen in recent years. It is said to have doubled in percentage around the world, especially in third-worldworld countries. Most prisoners are said to do more crimes as soon as they get out of being locked up. There are various causes for this and there are surely effects on the community.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the percentage of home-schooled children are increasing. Parents prefer to teach their children themselves rather than sending them to school. Some people say that it is much better, while others say the opposite. In my opinion, it is better for children to be learning in school compared to home education.

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Some people believe that money is the best gift for teenages while other disagree. Discuss both views.

Some people think that give money better as a present but other people believe that this idea is not good. In my opinion, Although, there is the best gift for young. Other gifts give better is actually important.

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The plan below show a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the degree to which a school campus has changed since 1985.

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In many developing countries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measure can be taken to prevent this?

It is important that children learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Mobile phones should be banned in public places, Up to what extent do you agree/disagree?

Public safety is still one of the main issues in the world.Some populations suggest like smoking, and headsets should not be allowed to use in the zone including on roads or where folks have gathered.I do not support this idea because it has become an integral part of life and there is no way it could be restricted anywhere.

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