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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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IN BRITAIN, WHEN SOME ONE GETS OLD THEY OFTEN FO TO LIVE WITH OTHER OLDER PEOPLE WHERE THERE ARE NURSES TO LOOK AFTER THEM. SOMETIMES, GOVERNMENT HAS TO PAY FOR THEIR STAY. WHO DO YOU THINK SHOULD PAY FOR THIS CARE , GOVERNMENT OR FAMILY?

Old people need both friends with a chat and care, it is a fact that they are in difficulties while they make their own requirements in their houses. At this point, they require an accommodation with doctors, nurses and other consultants which makes the services much more comprehensive. Moreover, I think country governments are obliged to take the initiative and introduce some additional suggestions and recommendations taken by various communities. This article will demonstrate how to government helps older people and their families and explore additional suggestions and recommendations taken by various communities.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other prople think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the present age, whether science and technology provide more benefits than history material has sparked much debate. Some people assert that nowadays Scientific and Technology have been selected as an essential education. Whereas more others argue that the History subjects is much important. Personally, I am in favour with the first view.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern days, sports are widely considered to be one of the most popular way to entertain the public. Contests, on a worldwide scale, are constantly organised with this exact purpose. Thus, a fair number of governments began investing capital in order to provide professional athletes with specialised facilities, uttery neglecting the option of doing so for a wider range of population, sparking a debate on the positive and negative consequences of this decision.

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Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

One of the most controversial issues today relates to which is the best place to live. While some people tend towards the viewpoint that cities are the best place to live, others support the idea of living in the countryside. In this essay, I am going to examine both points of view and provide my own opinion.

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Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Artificial intelligence impacts hugely on people right now. Robots and computers are taking over more and more work, which was earlier made by mankind. In this essay, I will examine the advantages and disadvantages of this statement and provide my opinion.

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Social media has become a real problem for young people today, and governments should create law that allow only people over 18 years of age to have accounts. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Social media platforms have become integral to the lives of young people. While there are concerns about their impact, I firmly oppose the idea of implementing laws that restrict social media access to individuals above 18 years of age. This is because such restrictions could hinder the development of essential soft skills in young individuals, such as creativity, and limit their access to vital news sources.

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online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. do you think it is a positive or negative development

The development of technology has changed and influenced the world in many different aspects. One of the sectors that has received the impact is the commerce sector, where online shopping are starting to replace offline stores. In my oppinion, this is a positive development because is very beneficial for the human population because it gives more accesibility, better price offer, and also helps the country's economy.

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Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a ‘gap year’, before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons. For others this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some young individuals have set their mind on spending a gap year before continuing their further education or career while believing that it would extend their understanding of the world. However other youngsters view it as a distraction and is simply a waste of time. Nevertheless, in this essay, I will discuss both debates and conclude with my own personal opinion.

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Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Society's vices are always sophisticated problems. Especially, among young people who often are attracted by experienced new things such as drugs. This phenomenon can arise from the lack of taking care from their family, to reduce stress or to fit in with their peers. These purposes can lead to negative effects on themselves and the public social. This essay is going to detail these causes and effects and some recommendations to address youth drug abuse.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that the health quality of the coming generations will be worse than current. However there are some counter-view on this point. Both sides and my opinion are declared in this essay.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world, with the development of advanced technology, most of the young generation kids are addicted to using smartphones in their daily lives. In the current context of the world, most of us are reliant on smartphones to fulfil our daily tasks and in fact, I firmly believe children using smart devices like phones can be a negative development. In this essay, I will elaborate on why most children are spending their time on technological related gadgets such as smartphones and why it is a negative development.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems do this cause? What can be done about this?

In the contemporary urban landscape, there is a significant portion of the population who remain unfamiliar with their neighbors. This issue is primarily rooted in the urban population's rapid growth and high-paced lifestyles. However, one viable solution to this problem is to foster neighborly interactions and conversations.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Paragraph 1 - Introduction: In contemporary urban life, many people do not know their neighbors. This essay will examine the causes of this issue and propose a solution: the creation of shared spaces in the neighborhood. Sentence 1 - Background statement: In bustling cities, neighborly connections have dwindled. Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement: It's due to the frantic pace of modern life, leaving little time for neighborly interaction and a decreasing sense of community. Sentence 3 - Thesis: The lack of neighborly relationships can create social problems, but it can be addressed by establishing shared spaces in the community. Sentence 4 - Outline sentence: This essay will explore the causes in the first supporting paragraph and discuss the solution of creating shared spaces in the second supporting paragraph, concluding with the importance of building a stronger sense of community. Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph: One of the main causes is the fast-paced city lif...

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All cars that burns fossil fuels should be banned and electric car should replace them. Do you agree or disagree

In the modern world, the energy car is increasing due to many people think that these cars are good for environment. I agree that energy cars should replace normal cars. This essay will discuss why many people need to use energy cars from my point of view and will give reasons from my experiences.

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Some parents believe that their children should do educational activities during their free time. Others say that in this way children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education has become the top priority for everyone nowadays. Most guardians believe that learning tasks ought to be incorporated into their offspring's free time, whereas others vocalise by adding that doing so creates a sense of burden on these young minds. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the above-stated notions in detail and will explain why I opine that amalgamation of study and leisure is the best way to tackle this.

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Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people reckon that when they punish offenders, instead of sending them to prison, it is better to take the advantage of education and training. From my point of view, I totally disagree with this statement and this essay will pinpoint my own perspective.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of people think that all the university students should have a chance to choice their own disciplines. Another group believe that only science and technology-related subjects should exist for study. Though It is the era of science and technology but It's not the be-all and end-all. I personally agree with the first group very strongly.

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Some people believe that exercise is the key to good health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people hold the view that doing exercise is a way of good health while others consider that their balanced diet is much more important .In my point of view,doing suitable exercise plays a more important role in the good health.

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The world population has been increasing lately. One way to curb excessive growth in the third world countries is to restrict the number of children each couple can have to 1. Other people believe that empowerment of woman is a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The massive turnout of people in the world has been a debatable issue until now. The government has implemented some ways to avoid the tremendous growth in the third world countries to limit the rate of children upto one whilst others think that women empowerment is a better approach. I agree with the notion that empowering women is a best way to control overpopulation whereas inhibition of one child can be followed to a lesser extent.

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Public library should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, applications, videos or DVDs. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that public library should provide books instead of wasting their expenditure on advance technology which has expensive costs such as software, applications, videos or DVDs. I firmly disagree with the notion. Even though purchasing high-tech media will affect the cost, I believe that it is included in a long-term investment which can lead to many positive effects.

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