IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 436

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Every one of us should become a vegeterian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people in the modern world consider their meal pattern than before due to they want to a take balance diet, it will help to have a healthy life. So, all of us want to be vegiterian due to meat will be a cause to health issues. I totaly disagree with this statement and in this essay I will eleminate the major reasons for that.

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some people think that schools should select their pupils according to their academic ability. others think that it is better for young people with different abilities to be educated together. discuss both views and give your opinion

Schools tend to choose their pupils according to their abilities. Several people say that students should be selected according to their academic level and others say that being educated together will have a good impact to pupils with different abilities. I agree with these two statements due to everything has positive and negative sides.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Nowadays tourism generates a significant portion of the national income for many countries, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some societies believe that children must be taught to be hard-working people so they can obtain everything they want. This attitude obviously contributes to their success. However, there are also some disadvantages that must be aware. Both views will be discussed in the following paragraph.

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72.The plans show information about the first floor of a library in 1998 and the same area now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Both maps display the first floor of a library before and after it was developed.

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no denying that violent crimes have increased significantly in recent years. Even though people believe that the death penalty is not the ideal solution to stop this violence, the death penalty is mandatory in some cases.

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People should be responsible for the pollution problems caused by transportation, while others think govt should be responsible. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

In current times, pollution is a major problem in developed countries. There is an argument about who should be responsible for these problems. Some argue that citizens should be liable for such issues which are mainly caused by transportation whereas other believes government are responsible for it. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and conclude with an opinion.

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Some peopel think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?

It is argued that finances have a major role in providing positive emotions in human’s lives . This essay will highlight the opinion that cash is not capable to guarantee happiness , but it can help to attain goals which are a great source of joy .

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling goods are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Technology development in recent times has massively impacted consumer behaviour and their lives. I wholeheartedly agree with this statement in two respects, first gadgets likely make the process simpler that affects human's mobility and health, and second, technology changes will lead to disruptions in industries in order to win the market competition.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In present days, companies are underlining the new features of their products in their commercials, because in the modern world, it is harder to stay on the market and gain popularity. I think that this is a positive thing because it leads to improvements.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, citizens are aging more than in the past. Some argue that this poses problems for governments, while others contend that there are benefits. This essay will argue that the drawbacks outweigh the advantages because governments might lose money and waste time caring for the elderly.

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Some think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that, the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. I agree to a larger extent to the given statement and my inclination is elaborated in the following write-ups.

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Some people think it is important spending a lot of money on family celebrations such as birthday and weddings while others think it is waste of money.

In today's context, different types of celebrations are taking place in the world. Domestic occasions such as weddings, and birthdays are a few of the private celebrations shared among family members. Some individuals believe that is it vital to spend a lump amount of cash to commemorate such events whereas some think is it just a waste of funds. In this essay, both views will be discussed followed by a conclusion.

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In many countries around the worls life expectancy is increasing. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

In a lot of countries across the globe the life expectancy is becoming higher. In this essay both positive and negative effects that come with that trend will be discussed.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there is a trend for businesses to claim their products are brand new and different. They depict this in their advertisements.

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Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are different opinions about whether government strategies such as improving public transport networks and providing cheaper travel fees are effective in lowering pollution brought about by vehicles. I believe that these measures are great solutions however, these are not enough to address the problem of transport pollution.

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Some people think that children should be raised by all the family members (e.g. Uncle, aunt and grandparents) rather than only parents. Give your opinion.

From the begining of human existence family always was the centre of gathering during different times of the year. Considering nowadays life, fewer people tend to have children, and if there is a child they will probably be raised by their grandparents due to several factors which we will discuss in the following paragraghs.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays, people start to do simple investigations towards buildings they live in. Some of the buildings might keep precious memories or simply they want to know the conditions of their houses. This essay not only elaborates the explanation of this phenomenon but also provides suggestions about the resources.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people are overweight and this is becoming an serious issue. Other people believe the solution to the issue is raising the price of fattening foods. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement and will elaborate on the reasons in the following paragraph.

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Completing university education is thought by some to b ethe best way to get a job.On th eotehr hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Disscuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is commonly believed that having a degree is the most adequate option in terms of professional wealth. However, others think that experience is the clue of success. I believe that going to university does make a difference in one’s development, nevertheless the acquisition of soft skills is undervalued.

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