IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 499

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 % female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?

Whilst much evidence indicates a lower percentage of female in high-level positions, I could not agree with the suggestion that there should be a regulation to ensure a certain percentage of such positions for women since there are other methods that could better address such problems.

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1.Discuss Both Sides and Give Your Opinion: • Some people believe that the government should fund space exploration, while others think it’s a waste of resources. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion.

It is an ongoing debate between two arguments, whether the government should allocate a budget for space exploration or should allocate a fund for its citizens as space exploration doesn’t resolve any issue faced by people. In my opinion, government needs to focus on citizen’s requirements first before allocating funds for space exploration.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effect they have in terms of health on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that in many countries skin care products play a major role in generating a country's income. One such reason for people using these products may be the colour discrimination in society and a myth that only an individual with a fair skin tone looks beautiful. However, All these products will have detrimental effects on people's health.

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Fast food is a part of life in many places. Some people think this has bad effects on lifestyle and diets. Do you agree or disagree?

In our modern life individuals believe that convenience food is a part of life in many governments and I believe that the outweigh for than drawbacks.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.

In this contemporary world, businesses tend advanced advertisements to grow rather than others;,however they have advantages as well as disadvantages also. I think negative developments outweigh positive developments.

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The public facilities at FIB UI that students should try are the Auditorium, Kansas, and Mushollah!

The public facilities at FIB UI that students should try are the Auditorium, Kansas, and Mushollah.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an importantelement of individual wellbeing. What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

As the majority of adults spend most of their time at work, being content in their job is a crucial part of their health and happiness. This essay will first discuss how being respected and well paid contribute toward job satisfaction, and then I argue that expecting everyone to be happy with their career is unrealistic because many people’s circumstances force them to work in unfulfilling jobs. One factor that leads to people being satisfied with their job is being treated with respect. If employees feel that their managers appreciate them and the work they do, it gives them a sense of ownership and they enjoy their work more because their contributions matter. A fair salary and benefits are also important considerations. If workers feel they are being underpaid, they will either resent their bosses or look for another job. In the UK, for example, the most cited reason for leaving a job last year was an inadequate salary. I do not think it is feasible to expect everyone to enjoy t...

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.

I agree with the statement because to achieve a goal, we need to apply discipline and sacrifice. In my opinion, this message can inspire and motivate them to overcome hardships, but at the same time, it can cause delusion and disappointment.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is true that students’ misbehavior is a universal topic. While a variety of factors may lead to this issue, steps can be taken to tackle it.

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Nature has more significant impact on human adult intelligence than nurture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A number of individuals argue that nurture has not crucial effect than people young intelligence. However, i partially agree with these statement,which will be explained on this essay.

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Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discus both views and give your own opinion.

Ensuring culture's security in today’s world is a highly debatable discussion point. Some people argue relying on tourism for cash flow is destroying our culture whereas others think enabling that is the sole choice to remain it. This essay will shed light on core factors and outline the layout merits as well as give the writer’s opinion of agreeing to the first view.

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an increasing number of people are choosing to have comestic surgery in order to improve their experience. Why do people have operations to choose the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development

Thank you for your letter informing me that I have won the competition. I feel highly enthusiastic, and I am looking forward to the 'Teen Cuisine' experience. Accordingly, I am writing to you to ask for further information about the cookery course. I do have a range of questions that I would like to enquire about.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

The arts represent an important cultural facet of the country and community, and as such I strongly believe that time-tested forms of art should be subsidized and conserved. However, as far as modern art is concerned, it should be an exception because it is the very competition modern artists get involved in that will stimulate the arts industry, especially encouraging the would-be artists to create artworks that are highly original.

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Some people claim that recycling is not very effective since most waste still ends up in landfills. They say that instead of recycling, we should focus on using fewer resources to minimise the amount of waste we create. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recycling is a popular and widely accepted practice that has been promoted as a way to reduce waste and protect the environment. However, some people argue that recycling is not very effective because most waste still ends up in landfills. They suggest that instead of recycling, we should focus on using fewer resources to minimize the amount of waste we create 1.

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Wild animals have no use in the 21st century and trying to preserve animals now is just a waste of money. To what extent do agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is sometime argued that it is pointless to spend money defending wild animals. I personally disagree with this conviction and will support my argument in the essay below.

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More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is negative or positive development?

Lots of individuals these days reside in small space home or dwells with no outdoor area. In my ,opinion this is a negative development. living in a small space leads to congestion and invites health problems like breathing disorders, irritability and so on as there is no air or ventilation . life also becomes tedious if humans live in these areas.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the University where you studied. He would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email describe where you lived when you were a student at the University, recommend the best way for him to look for accommodation, warn him of the mistakes students make when choosing accommodation.

I hope you and your family are well by the grace of the Almighty. I'm thrilled to hear that you've got an offer to the University of Toronto for your master's degree in supply chain management.

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Social media has many positive uses, but there have been some negative consequences to it as well. Identify a problem caused by social media and describe the solutions you would propose to address this problem.

Nowadays, social media is popular. There is no doubt that there are good users and bad users, but a lot of people have been negative use, so in this essay, I will discuss the main causes, such as no days for young adults who don't want their life, as result of social media, however, I will suggest some solutions to this problem.

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some people think that government westing money in art what extent to agree or disgree?

I am strongly showing my interest in the BSc (Hons) Computer Science (Top-Up) course at the University of Hertfordshire because I think this course will not only boost my career but also increase my existing skills to reach Earth on the moon. The motivation of my learning abilities inspired me to study this course and it will enhance my knowledge. My abilities in critical thinking, good grasping power, time management, ability to learn different things and many more motivate me to take an interest in this course. Moreover, there are various reasons behind this for choosing this course I think computer science is the study of computation, information and automation which is very useful for me.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

It is a fact that junk foods have dominated our eating style and this resulted in more health issues have appeared. Authorities are doing their best to eliminate such habits but I think the major role is on consumers themselves. I totally disagree with increasing the tax on junk food as we have other solutions that can tackle this unhealthy habit which will be mentioned below.

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