IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 511

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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at the present time, the population of some countries includes a reletively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the population of young people is more than the elder people in some countries. There are several advantages and disadvantages about this happening.

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many people prefer to watch foreign movies rather than locally produced films. why could this be? should governments give more financial support to local film industries

Based on statistics people have drastically been tended to watch universal films in comparison of others that are going to build in the area that they live. Realistically, a wide variety category and most popular creator, it seems obvious. But the idea of having better movies depends on degree to consideration by states might be possible.

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Many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career. Do you agree or disagree? What other factors can contribute to a good career?

Most of the people living in our world spend half of their lives ing studying. Some of them are lucky to be landed in a pretogious university. A lot of of people have the idea that having a degree in a university would be a requirement in having a pleasant job. In my own opinion university education provides better opportunites for an individual because of many courses offered in a university and it will give a better track to a person studying in a certain dicipline.

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some people tend to take temporary jobs, for they have time to do other things. Do the advantage outweighs disadvantage

Work smart, go home and get paid. More and more individual are having more jobs that usual and a number of people prefer to have temporary jobs for the reason that permanent jobs can not offer more substantial pay and they can have extra time to do other work. Part time jobs can offer a higher pay, may have lower taxes, and they do not demanding than a full time job, however, these jobs will not give you a long life tenure and it is prone to a scam.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?

It is claimed by some that flights for long distances utilize fuel as corn which use for long-time periods, although they both cause the same amount of contamination and in order to remedy this problem it is proposed by society to cancel unimportant flights, such ad tourist trips rather than to reduce the use of cars. As far as I am concerned, I partly disagree with this statement.

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Information technology inables many people to do their work outside their workplace (eg: at home, when traveling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Several individuals are of the opinion that the evolution of gadgets allows to a significant number of persons, to do their job without the need of attending the office. On one hand, there are numerous advantages that come with this flexibility, but on the other hand, there are also a great amount of disadvantages. In this essay, I am going to focus and examine this question from both points of view.

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In some cities public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruits and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

These days in several cities public spaces such as parks are being converted into gardens in order to support local dwellers to plant fruit and vegetables. This trend has merits and demerits as well.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The maps compare the current layout of the sports centre of a university and how it will change after refurbishment.

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Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities, and as a solution, businesses are being encouraged to move to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In contemporary society, increased shelter and transportation shortages have affected individuals of all ages who are living in megacities. To handle the serious societal problem, businesses have been proposed to move to country areas. While the plan provides undeniable pros, such as the improvement of road congestion and decreased housing insufficiency in urban areas, and stimulation of the rural economy, its cons, including deprivation of parental care for some children whose parents have to work in some industries, located far away from urban regions. Moreover, a threat to those kids' psychological health careful consideration.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that parents should teach their offspring how to be good members of society, while others are of the opinion that school is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the practical experiences that parents give their children, school lessons can give deep insights into what it takes to be good citizens.

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In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

In the domains of education and employment, the level of effort people invest in their work can significantly vary. Some individuals display remarkable dedication and perseverance, while others seem less motivated to put in the extra effort. This discrepancy in work ethics raises questions about the reasons behind these differences and whether working harder is always advantageous. Understanding the underlying factors and implications of varying work ethics is crucial to foster a more productive and balanced workforce.

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Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society inter adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Present days, it is quite often people are moving from their own country to another nation. Besides, to be a part of a particular community they need to leave their own customs, and follow regional traditions. Though I partially agree with the statement, they have to accept some changes in their way of living, but also , they should not leave their rituals.

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Advertisments of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisement to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree

People earn an excellent income by using advertisements on social networks. Notice that snacks and toys substantially affect children and their parents. So the publicities to the heir should be banned. This trend could be highly harmful.

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It is impossible to help all people around the world in need so governments should focus on people from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that it is not possible to give a financial aid to people who came from deprived area all over the world. In my view, I believe that the main priority of every country and governments is that they ought to emphasis on their own citizens because they are certain issues that need to be handled.

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In recent years, the number of people choosing to work remotely has increased significantly, resulting in a considerable shift in the traditional workplace environment. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend, and provide your opinion on whether this shift towards remote work is ultimately beneficial or detrimental to society as a whole. Support your arguments with relevant examples and evidence.

Nowadays the majority of people are convinced that it is more beneficial for them to do remote working instead of occupying in conventional and traditional forms of vocations in an office. Although many people are working in their offices, there are a lot of people who tend to opt remote working. In the paragraphs to come, I shall be putting my views on both the advantages and disadvantages of the topic and peddle up my opinion on the topic.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others , however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed school.

Nowadays, schools are treating all gender students equally to provide proper education. Owing to this, Few say that boys and girls are getting good education in different schools while others do not believe the same. To avoid any kind of distractions, Narrow-minded society still prefers separate schools. However, that needs to diversify to get more benefits in terms of many aspects.

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that children should go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some said that children will gain more benefits when embarking on their study journey at a very young age.Others believe that schooling is better for them when they are more mature. This essay will discuss both views and elucidate my opinions towards this issue.

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some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delieved on campus. Do you think this is positive or negative?

E-learning is considered one of the most significant features in the contemporary technology. While some opponents of the view that attending face to face courses in universities’ campus pose more privilages, others argue that in today’s fast pace lifestyle, offering online courses holds spectacular positivities. I compatible with the believe that the remote studies provide with exceptional benefits.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible argument on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

People have different views about children should spend their spare time with their relatives. While others believe that this is unnecessary for children to spend their time with their families. There are arguments on both sides, however, I am inclined to believe that they should spend time on overall growth.

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The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs enormous government expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that the government should pay money for constructing new housing and road, instead of the restoration of old buildings. However, there is a more persuasive argument that the restoration of old buildings is better for improvement of the society, even though it causes enormous government expenditure.

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