IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 514

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Do the advantages of the government spending their money on college and university fees for students outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people, say that if we let children deside the important thing in their lives ,and take their own choises of every detail such as what to wear or food and clothes will make a society that think only for them preferences and wishes ,whereas other believe it is good idea for children to make their own choices.In my opinion, I strongly believe that youngs should be free in their maind to choice what make them more comfort.In this essay, i will further elaborate more.

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There are many disadvantages and advantages to having only one child. Do the advatages outweigh the disadvantages?

There are benefits and drawbacks to having an only child. There are numerous advantages and disadvantages to an only child , which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. As far as I am concerned the cons outweigh the pros.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

There is no gainsaying that taking a year off before university is an upward trend. Although students often struggle with the breaking of connection with academics in a year gap, the refreshment of mind and spending time with family is advantageous to students. Twelve months gap between school and institute has an equal number of banes and boons.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is an obvious fact that celebrities are better known as their luxurious lifestyles instead of their performance in life which provides negative consequences for youth. I have balance opinion for this argument to the following reasons.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over the necessary subjects for all institution students. While some claim that it is vital for all college students to learn whatever they are interested in, the opposite makes the statement that the subject related to science and technology which will bring valuable knowledge in the future should be taught in universities. While each has its own perk, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.

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Historical monuments and museums are visited only by the tourists, locals do not visit them. Why is this is happening? What are the solutions to prevent this?

Despite ancient buildings and state museums being attracted by tourists who are interested in the culture and history, many locals are not interested in these places. This essay will examine the main causes of this reason and possible solutions to prevent this problem.

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DISCIPLINE IS AN INCREASING PROBLEM IN MODREN SCHOOL. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT DISCIPLINE SHOULD BE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF TEACHERS,WHILE OTHER THINK THAT IS THE RPOLE OF PARENTS.

Children need to be disciplined early in their younger years. While some people believe that teachers are the ones responsible to discipline the young ones, I do believe that parents have the equal responsibility in nurturing the children in order to decrease the problem in a a modern schools.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree ot disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Presently, pupils were depended more on vehicles, many trial and error methods carried out by researchers to reduce of using their goods. Finally, they concluded by raising a petrol rate so some expection could find in reduction of using automobile. Here, some of pros and cons of enhancing petrol price in the below paragraphs.

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Around the 65% of the worlds population is an internet consumer. Did you know it? Give your opinion

Did you know that around 65% of the world's population ispopulationhe population of the word is an internet consumer ? Some people dislike internet use because they don’t think it is educational or useful, especially for the youth. However, the internet is a good tool when used properly.

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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city, while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there is a huge influx to big cities, as it is considered that the life quality is of a higher level there, whilst some people find life closer to the nature better. On this essay I will deliver my arguments on this issue.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, people have consumed high-level sugar and a sedentary lifestyle, this phenomenon causes many health problems. Some people argue that people are too much consume sugar in the food or drink products available on the market. So, a quick win solution is to make sugary products should more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. I agree with this statement and I will list some benefits.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,one of the most contoversial issue around the world is education.Meanwhile,some people believe some extracurriculum such as working for charity or teaching to other children should be mandatory among the children.I can neither completely agree nor disagree with this statement.Because in my opinion there are some merits and demerits of both views.In this essay,I will discuss both views with some relevant examples.

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In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some parts of the world, fast food has become so ubiquitous that many people are no longer fond of conventional dishes, which causes adverse influences at family and societal levels. In my opinion, I strongly believe that this detrimental trend badly affects family bonds and the health of international communities.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.

The internet changed our whole world. Some years ago, it was impossible to do many things, and some were buying goods from home, talking to people who lived far away, and working from home; however, with the widespread use of the internet, we can do all of it.

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Some people think they have done all they should do to society by paying taxes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I disagree with this point of view since citizens also need to take social responsibilities through other aspects.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

In today’s highly digital society, many children have been increasingly spending an important amount of their time on computer, specifically on playing games. This has impacted seriously their lifestyle in terms of loss of productivity and ability in socialisation. It seems to be clear that measures need to be taken in order to mitigate the detrimental influences that can have on youngster.

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Some people believe that children should do what their parents tell them to do; others think children must learn to think for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The phenomenon of parents should help children to make all decision or let them to determine thier own choose has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I personally believe that parents should give their children an opportunity to do things as their will in order to improve their individual abilities.

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In many countries government spent a large amount of money on improving internate access. why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money.

The internet has become the sine qua non (prerequisite) of promoting national economies. No wonder, many governments are investing a lot in making the internet available freely to their citizens. this essay intends to analyse the reasons behind this phenomenon. I believe that the government are being wise in doing this expenditure.

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Some people think that children should be home schooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten. Which do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

some individuals propose that children are better to go to the primary schools when they are younger rather than going to a kindergarten.As i see,such impulsive alterings in fixed educational scheme can negatively effect on children and parents respectively.The factors such as lack of time flexibility for parents along with not appropriate supervising of children becomes the majorest proofs to not to replace a traditional method.

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People in many countries do not wear their traditional costume. Some argue that they would forget their history and tradition. Do you agree or disagree?

it is common knowledge that nowadays the majority of people do not wear their traditional costumes. there are many people who assume that not wearing their traditional costume can lead to forgetting their history and tradition. In this essay I will discuss both views and after that I will give my own opinion.

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