IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 569

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many people nowadays don't feel safe either when they are at home or go out.What are the reasons and What can be done to solve this problem?

There is no doubt that increasing today A lot of people feel unsafe yourself their homes or somewhere.How to solve that issues.This essay intends to analayse some problems.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There was another railway that got demolished for occupying too many spaces on roads in Taiwan. This evoked different voices from commuters, claiming that the local authority should keep expanding the tracks to rural areas so that the local residents can shorten their time during communication. Yet I personally disagree with the opinion and in the following essay, I will elaborate further on the reasons.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people opine that professionals professions who get the education in one country can be employed in the same country. Although they are trained and get the education, they are not supposed to be obligated to work in the country where they studied. In my point of view, I agree that they have the choices to work in the country where they want to.

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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree

In a number of countries, students have a year gap before graduation. So students can attend to work in the period, and gain more experiences about working world. Some views encourage children to know more about working daily life and ask the school for being responsible for arranging kids' working time. I do partially agree with it.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Nowadays, we live in a globalizing world. For that we need to talk in the same common form with each other. The most common form is English in our world. In my opinion, people are right about wanting to learn English, but English is less important than our local language. Because the local languages are our culture, our history, our own. We must not lose these important things.

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People in many countries spend more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and what effects will it have on them and their families.

Recently, there has been an increasing direction in many nations where people are spending most of their given time in their own corners far away from their families. The possible reasons why this is happening as well as the consequences of this current trend will be discussed in the essay.

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People nowadays are not fit and active than the people from the olden days. Discuss the causes for this situation and suggest some possible solutions.

Today more and more of us living in the modern era are having less quality of health compare to generation in previous era. This mainly because of the lack of physical activities and the consumption of fast food on their daily routines. There are number of solutions which should be implemented to deal these poor lifestyles.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robot. What is your opinion?

The issue whether companies and markets have a liability to decrease a quantity of products, which need to be packed or purchaser should attempt buying goods without a lot of packaging is ambivalent. There are two different opinions, which have pros and cons and take place.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A right choice for choosing a friend is becoming increasingly controversial. Many people prefer to do friendship with those who always agree with their opinions while some think opposite to them. This will discuss both arguments in depth and will provide some reasons why choosing friend who sometimes disagree with them is superior.

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Livung in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

People who have made decisions to live in a foreign country for a better future or work purposes faced many challanges in their lives such as the language barrier as well as difficulties in daily life. I completely agree with the statement I will articulate my pinpoints in a forthcoming paragraph.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sport or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is an undeniable fact that body health is the paramount factor in order to be healthy. Hence, in this contemporary epoch, an increasing amount of people hiring personal fitness coaches, instead of attending group sports. For some relevant reasons, I believe that it is a completely positive development.

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Some children spen hours every day on thier smartphones. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, technology plays an indispensable role in the modern life due to the fact that it has changed a lot of aspects of human life. Addition to this, the excessive use of digital gadgets, especially smartphones, among children could possibly have some adverse bearings.

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It is true that violent crime has increased in many countries lately. This essay examines some main reasons for this trend and argues that governments can play a major role in preventing such crimes.

Today, it is easy to see that the amount of crime is creasing every day in many countries and not only in Vietnam where the pandemic has been affecting deeply. The rate of higher unemployed people and the status of younger violence than in last years.

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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. why is that the cause? Should they be encouraged to utilise their free time in a better way?

Spending money to buy something interesting is the most popular activity of youngsters. Typically they do that in their leisure time and they should manage their time in a positive way. In this essay, I will discuss what are the reasons, and give possible suggestions to manage their spare time more useful.

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Today, many parents force their children to study all kinds of courses in their early age. What are the reasons behind this? What effects do you think this practice would bring to the children?

Nowadays parents tend to push their children to study a variety of courses when they are really young. Most parents do this because they are afraid of their children's future, and they want their children to excel. However, it is more likely that children are negatively affected by this behaviour.

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Some people think that schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet while others believe that nothing can replace physical classrooms with direct guidance from teachers.Discuss both views( and give your own opinion).

It is argued that some of the people claim children should not attend to schools anymore because of getting necessary information on the internet. However others think that schools are more important than the internet due to being physical class. In my opinion, going to school for pupils is beneficial effect than online education. In this essay, I will discuss effectively side of the education of attending to schools compared with online institutions and provide relevant examples from my experience.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most parents are disciplining their children with physical punishment. Some people think that the effective way to discipline children is by spanking them. This essay will argue that punishing children physically does not help in developing good in them.

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Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Investments in the advancement of space exploration technology are generally considered to be unjustifiable expenditures, advocating for alternative uses of these resources to more constructive and beneficial purposes. From my perspective, the government should allocate appropriately to balance these activities.

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Today, there is a group of people who do the same thing every day and avoid variations in their life. Contrastly, there is a group of people who think that changes help to become the best version of yourself.

Nowadays some people do the same thing every day and avoid variation throughout their whole life. Conversely exist who think that change is a wonderful thing. In my view, I prefer the changes in my life. However, the following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that foreign tourists should be charged more than local people when traveling cultural and historical attractions. I completely disagree with this scheme/ proposal/ idea and I do believe that we should treat all visitors should be treated equally.

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