IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 576

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many people think it is important to spend a lot of money on a large wedding celebration. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion and give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience

A wedding is one of the most important occasions in many couples' lives. People always dream about how their wedding will be and what they want to do at it. Some couples prefer to spend most of their money on celebrations and invite as many guests as possible while others decide to buy the most expensive trip on the island.

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There is a shortage of housing in many countries and this can lead to severe social Consequences. Only governments can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the only the state can provide solutions to the problems caused by housing shortages. I believe that governments can be an important factor in solving housing-related issues but there are also other bodies and institutions, such as charities, which could help.

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In some countries, as cities grow, more money is spent on the urban transport system and little is spent on the rural ones. What are the problems creating it? What are the solutions to these problems?

The population of cities increasing drastically and it also demands a transport system in urban areas. The government spent a huge amount of money on the urban transport system. It creates some problems. This essay will discuss problems and solutions in the following paragraphs.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

HUMAN BEINGS HAVE BEEN SEARCHING THE WAYS OF BEING HAPPY FOR YEARS. WHILE SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT A BIG WAGE IS MORE USEFUL IN THE WAY OF FINDING HAPPINESS THAN EMOTIONS, OTHERS BELIEVE THAT JOB SATISFACTION IS MORE IMPORTANT THAN MONEY. THIS ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN WHY I THINK THAT WORKING WITH PLEASURE IS MORE IMPORTANT THAN SALARY AND OUTLINE THE POSSIBLE REASONS FOR IT.

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In recent years cosmetic surgery is talk of the town some people said it's a good development while others opose it. What is your opinion

Around the globe,there are divergent opinions on invasive procedures aimed at improving appearance.Certain individuals opined that plastic surgeries should not be allowed.I disagree with such a view because cosmetic surgeries boost self-confidence and improve health.

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In this contemporary world, some countries like the US implement a strict rule regarding teenagers in which they must be accompanied by an adult during the nights when they want to go outside their home. I think this is a smart rule which seeks the benefits of both adolescents and society.

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Some people believe that pop stars deserve to earn more money than classical music performers. Some disagree

Nowadays, a group of people admit that pop star can get a well-paid more than classical musicians. While some belive that it is not fair and aslo argue that classical music performers can earn money better than the others. In this essay, I will discuss more about this viewpoint.

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In some countries it is possible for the people to have access to variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. Do benifits of imported food outway it drawbacks?

In the past, tasting foreign food or visiting an overseas restaurant was considered a luxury pleasure to have and also it had cost a quite high price. But now, thanks to the modern technology, economics and improved transportation it is now a very easy thing to do. Although, I personally believe there are drawbacks of this kind of culture, the positives of this always surpass the minor negatives of this kind of nature? In this ,essay I’m going to discuss them with a broad analysis.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In modern life, the effective learning of children would be concentrated by parents. Individuals believe in children’s essential characteristics belong to be a good sense of society, while the others think the school could provide necessary knowledge for their infants. I expose that a child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only, they should prepare the children’s adaptability to reality

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there are many different types of music in the world today. why do we need music? is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

There are various types of music in today's world, listening to traditional music, in contrast to international one yields community-wide benefits.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

Nowadays an increasing number of parents are letting children make their own decisions on different life issues. While some argue that letting youngsters make choIces by themselves concerning day-to-day matters will lead to a community made up of people who only think of themselves. Others believe that it is crucial to empower children to make resolutions on issues that have an effect on them. In my opinion, I agree with the former view.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The choices we make has a huge impact on our development. Some are of the belief that allowing children the freedom of choice will lead to selfish adults, while others think that children should be given the right to choose. In my opinion, a child should be involved in decisions regarding their life.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

In recent world millions of misuse produced from home. Many say that household misuse is not recycled properly. They also say that the authority can reduce misuse by recycling or taking any legal action.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.  To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

In recent world milions of waste produced from home. Many say that household waste is not recycle prooerly. They also say that the government can reduce the waste by recycling or taking any legal action.

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Some people think that employers should not be concerned about how employees dress at work, but the quality of work only. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this concurrent world , the employers at work is an inevitable topice . Few ethnic groups postulate that they should focusing in the quality of work rather than people dress.I vehemently accorde with the given statement . The essay will propound on my accordance along with credible examples .

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In some countries, criminal trials are shown to the public on television. Do the advantages of this tren outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, a variety of different shows are available on television for the general public. Among such programs, there is a loop of crime-related episodes. Although these are the source of knowledge with a common point of view I believe, drawbacks preponderate over the benefits. A combined analysis of possible positive and negative aspects along with the related research study on the issue would prove it.

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Some people think that schools are no longer necessary because people can acquire information on the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this concurrent world , the study is an invetable topic . Few ethnic groups postulate that the school is not critical place to bringe information so internet is enough . I vehemently accorde with the given statement . In this discourse , I will expound my disagreement along with credible examples .

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

It is normal that some people easily resist changes in their life. Since change can ruin life's stability, such as a job's position and advantage. In another way, it might come from belief and misunderstanding about changing something.

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Education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Education and health care are basic necessities for every living soul. Without proper education and health care system no nation can prosper and even cannot sustain. Many people argues that it is government responsibility to provide basic education and health care to its every citizen for free. I strongly believe with this view point.

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Many people argu that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Other think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your Opinion.

Educational system is one of the topic that majority look for developing it, because it tuch our kids' success. Furthermore, Enhancement in education sector is one of humans' demand for progress. Nowadays, people think that pupils' opinion is important to help teachers improve their work while others do not agree with this. In my point of view, I strongly disagree with the idea that students can criticis or give their opinion about their teachers. Due to students are not wise enough to juge a teacher, beside that criticism is a huge topic that needs high level of understanding.

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