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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Unemployment has become an increasing problem in the recent past. what factors contribute to an increase in unemployement and what steps can be taken to solve this problem?

Apart from inflation, unemployment is a serious economic problem every country has to deal with because it is one of the indicators to measure economic development. High unemployment lead to various economic and social problems for example higher rates of poverty, famine, and criminal acts. In this essay, I will outline elements contributing to an increase in unemployment and viable solution to tackle them.

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Many think that religion should be taught in schools, while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Ans- Religion has been a contentious topic throughout history, and its place in educational institutions has been a subject of debate. While some argue that religion should be taught in schools, others believe it should be avoided. This essay will explore both perspectives and provide a personal opinion that religion should be taught in schools, but only in a neutral and objective manner that does not promote any particular religion or belief system.

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Nowadays people use social media to keep in touch with others and be aware of news Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

It is quite popular to see that people have changed the way of communication with the advancement in technology, and ready to explore various news from the different part of world. While I genuinely accept that this statement have few considerable drawbacks, I still claim that it is constructive approach due to several benefits.

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Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals, while other people feel that this is not fair on animals and not necessary. Discuss both views ad give your opinion.

Although some people though it is not fair to use animals to test new medicines, others believe that it is vital to use different species to find treatment for society. I believe it is preferable to use animals to find the right treatment than let people die.

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Some people like to work in company which offer high salaries, other prefer working in a company which offer good working atmosphere. What do you think. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals prefer to select their jobs based on financial aspect, others people choose their occupation rely on working environment. In my opinion, positive working environment is very important factor when people choose their career than huge wages.

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it is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

there always have been arguments about change and its outcomes. In this essay, I will outline the perceived benefits and drawbacks of change and argue why the pros do in fact outweigh the cons.

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Some people belive that the fast pace and stress of modren life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you aree or disagree?

I agree with this given statement, which says that life is more stressful and busier. As a ,result it is opined by some masses that is having some negative effect on families.

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It is predicted that robotsare going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

While robots are often believed to be to be believed to be to be necessary for developing the future of human beings comma other consider that they will affect the community detrimentally.

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Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Although, being a celebrity brings some benefits but along with these benefits they experience more difficulties in their life. This essay will discuss why the problems they face are more than it's advantages.

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Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. What is the reason for this? it is a negative or positive development?

Technological advances in children’s entertainment have been spread widely, and it is quite addicting. However, the reason offspring prefer playing video games rather than sports is the convenience of playing digital games. This essay will elaborate on the negative impacts caused by this phenomenon.

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MORE PEOLPLE HAVE UNHEALTHY DIET AND DO NOT DO ENOUGH EXERCIESS WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS ? HOW CAN WE ENCOURAGE PEOPLE TO HAVE A HEALTHY LIFE STYLE

Whether most people do not take healthy diets or exercise. The main reason is that the majority of individuals to love spend time on electronic gadgets and are hectic in their work, so they have unhealthy diets, but it can be solved by less use of digitalization and taking part in physical activities.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals, and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in this new generation, fast food is more prefer than traditional food. Therefore, our traditional will be disapeared soon. I completely agree that it has several drawbacks to relationships among family members, friends, and communities.

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Social media helps people to keep in touch with friends and stay on top of news and events. Do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in this internet world, a notion is always hold by present generation is that being updated by recent events and stay connected with friends is possible through social media. I support the viewpoint that everything, whether internet is a blessing if used in a wise manner.

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There is not need to go out to see live performance (concert...) because it is better to see them on the TV or Computer screen, Do you agree or disagree.

It is a technical era, So here, plentiful Digital devices available on the internet for human entertainment. I think it is the best way of entertainment as well as I agree with this notion.

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Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newpapers while others think it it through online media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, some people believe that newspapers are the best media to read news, while others argue by mentioning online media. In fact, I side with those who said that online media is better than newspapers. The following paragraphs will explore both points of view with examples.

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The government should pay for the college fees for everyone who wants to study at the University. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Many people believe educations is very impotant for everyone. Hence in my views government should support budget for people who want to apply the University. However educations development will affect to human developments in the future.

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some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schols. others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals present the view that it is good for boys and girls to complete their education in schools separately, whereas others believe both genders present in class altogether. I strongly agree with the latter opinion.

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Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

The widespread problem of overpopulation has long been a major topic of social concern. This essay will discuss what issues it may cause and how to tackle with them.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that salary is the key factor in selecting a job. In my opinion, while income is important to sustain a life, job satisfaction is equally important factor to consider before someone embark into a career. This essay will explain the details of my views.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

With the recent breakthroughs in medicine, the longevity of a human life has enormously extended as compared to the past. This change has impacted societies in different ways. Today, many families have more than three generations living at the same time. In my opinion, while an ageing population brings challenges to the economy, the value that it holds for the community far surpasses the negative sides.

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