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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the main reason for schools is making students good citizens and workers. They claim that the schools are the best places where the children will be grown up as well-educated and socialized citizens and workers. I support this idea because schools help students become more mature citizens.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. I think it is mainly the social reasons. At the same time, I consider it as something negative.

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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In this day and age, many languages face the risk of disappearance. While there is a wide belief that these languages should be preserved by authorities, others argue that it is unnecessary. In my way of thinking, I believe that money should be invested in other aspects instead of these languages.

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Some people think that it is best to save money, for example in a bank or savings scheme. Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available. Discuss these views and reach an opinion on this debate.

Give reasons for your answer, and support your essay with ideas and examples from your own experience.

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In the future, there will be a higher proportion of older people than young people in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development?

In recent years, due to the speedy development of human society and the burgeoning development of the medical system, the issue that problem of the high older population has sparked widespread attention and prevalent debate among people in many countries. It may lead the whole society to be unbalanced in the function; however, it will be great news for people who are afraid of death.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Rubbish has been produced much more than before. There are a few possible reasons for the change that should be corrected.

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If you could make two changes in the educational system of your country, what aspects would you change? Support your ideas with reasons and examples and discuss how the changes you suggest would improve the system.

Nowadays, due to worldwide improvement in every sector, some systems became old-fashioned and needed to be changed, which also include education. If I get a chance to make changes for it, I will do proper and optimal ways to get achievements.

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In many countries today, major cities have become too big and overcrowded. Why is this? What measures could be taken to reduce this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

One of the paramount contentious issues today relates to the overcrowding of cosmopolitan cities. In this essay, the causes of overcrowding in the big cities will be proffered by me, and I will also explicate upon the remedies, reaching a reasoned conclusion.

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Some people believe that violence in the media, such as in television programs and films, directly results in violent behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Media industry has been booming. Many argue that people are highly influenced by the movies and the serials and imitate the violent behaviour as exhibited by the characters. I disagree with this argument and will shed some light in the upcoming paragraphs to support my viewpoint.

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Online education is becoming increasingly popular. Many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outweigh disadvantages?

Every student dreams of getting a world-class education from a renowned institute, and choosing a major or an institute is a daunting decision that they make in their lives. It is not always possible to visit a different country or state for higher education and thus, many are opting for distant education these days. In this essay, I will contend how it is advantageous and what disadvantages it can have. In my view, although it is a matter of choice and individuals should weigh both positives and negatives depending on their circumstances, it is best to have offline education.

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Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Painting and statues are admired by many people, And it's argued that the state should spend more resources on works of art like paintings and sculptures. This essay agrees with the view because it will help to increase the tourism industry and helps people living in the city to be more productive.

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism of their teachers. Others think it will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Diverse educational institutions have increasingly encouraged students to remark on and even criticize their lecturers during the past decade in an effort to enhance educational quality. However, opinions remain divided as to whether this should be implemented in high schools. Personally, I feel that both students and teachers at this stage of schooling can gain considerably from this strategy, despite valid concerns about the potential loss of respect and discipline in the classroom.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People hold conflicting views whether continue to learn after high school or go to work instantly. While some argue that go straightforward for a job may bring about some certain benefits, I believe that keeping on studying is a better solution.

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Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People hold conflicting views about whether universities should solely enroll students having the highest scores or should accept all youngsters of all ages, even if they did not study well at school. In this essay, I am going to elucidate both viewpoints before clarifying my own opinion. It is understandable why all students having the highest marks should be admitted to tertiary education has received widespread endorsement.

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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the country side. Discuss both sides

With the majority of people these days moving to city from countryside, there are still a lot of debates among the people to live in regional areas. While some believe living in the countryside is a better option, I, however, agree with those who feel it's better to live in a city.

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international sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give specific example.

Nowadays, international events have been an enjoyable activity for our society. In addition, when it comes to hosting this event. People believe that it can lead to negative outcomes for the hosting country. However , In this essay, I will argue that hosting events can have a wide range of benefits instead of issues. In the past, society used to have multiple fights while attending activities in other countries . In addition, this has resulted to make country leaders being afraid of managing it, so governments started to develop new effective guidelines for hosting impactful events . Although it took some time for countries to start applying the new standards, that led to positive outcomes for the public, which has affected our society in a greater way in terms of emotional state. Currently, while having effective guidelines, countries can host international activities and now it led to positive outcomes . Moreover, this has brought up a variety of cultur...

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Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some individuals that manufacturers should produce good quality goods that are durable, whereas some people prefer that organizations should focus on manufacturing goods that are inexpensive and affordable. In my opinion, companies should produce high-end products at low cost so they can be used by all the classes of our society.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

World in next years will be marked with as advanced technologies as we can hardly imagine today. The mosts conspicuous one is related to trans potation systems. It is predicted that rule of divers will be completely cleaned. So, travelling might be carried out only by outomatic programs which instated on carriages Exactly, with out the existance of divers. while, this crucial developmant benefits individuals, such every other progresses negative impacts should not be neglected. In this essay, I will look into impressive impacts of drivelless from both a effective, destractive espects.

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Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some individuals that manufacturers should produce good quality products that are durable, whereas some people prefer that companies should focus on manufacturing goods that are inexpensive and affordable. In my opinion companies should produce good quality products at low prices so it can be used by all the classes of our society.

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Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching with the technology available today, there is no justification for it, and everything should be online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give your own opinion

It is irrefutable that technology has an indespendible part in people's life. There are those who believe that education ought to be online, traditional teaching way become redundant because of technolodical advancements which offer an online training. I am of the opinion that, even though the online training has a variety of advantages it is not substitute for face-to-face education mainly because traditional education offers social environment and it is necessery for practical teaching.

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