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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Write about following topic: In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is ture that in many countries, the frequency of crime has been increeased during recent years. There are variety of possible reasons for this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

Some people think that social media platforms such as Facebook or Twitter can harm young adults and their ability to form relationships, while others say that these sites can help them build connections and improve their ability to build new relationships. I believe that social media applications can cause more harm than providing benefit,especially to teenagers.

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Some people think that certain old buidings are more worth preseving than the other ones. Which types of old buidings should be preserved? Do you think that the advantages of preseving these old buildings outweigh the disadvantages?

It is claimed that people think that old buildings are worth preserving more than others .While there are some existing drawbacks , I believe that this decision more potenticial benefits.

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As housing is a basic need for people, the government should provide free housing for everyone who cannot afford it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Poverty is becoming a major issue all over the globe. However, accommodation is a basic necessity of the masses. I do not agree with that notion because governments should give free houses to needy people as it would be a practical solution for the homeless.

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Some people believe that competitive sports,both team and individual,have no place in the school curriculum.To what extent so you agree or disagree?

For decades sports had a very special place in the heart of people.They loved sports for the adrenalin they caused and how they fulfilled the desire of wanting to be among the best ones.

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Organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It’s clear that running a large family celebration can cause many problems. in the following essay, I will discuss the problems and mention how you can solve it.

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By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some countries still punish offenders with the death penalty to reduce the crime rate. However, it is not the suitable outcome for sentencing. This essay totally agrees with that statement. I believe that criminal offenders should not be punished with the death penalty, as the death penalty is considered an inhumane act and it is irreversible.

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Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays there is an argument between men and women, some people claim that men are more competitive as they have strong power and mental stability. Moreover, all over the world men are considered more high-powered than women. Furthermore, I totally contradict this statement, since both genders have abilities and should be treated equally.

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Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views give your own opinion.

The significance of climate change which was always debatable has become more controversial people claim that is beneficial while others reject this notion.The substantial with many influences of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in the below paragraphs.

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?

Recently, digital technology takes a major position in every sector different from the two last decades. This is impactful and helpful for the youth and the adult, who are enjoying used to that kind of tool. However, the elderly struggle with this condition. There are several limiting factors such as based knowledge and health problems. This essay will elaborate on and give a solution to fix it.

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Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from television as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals assert that eliminating aggressive sports from television broadcasts and international sporting competitions is a highly advisable course of action. I concur with this viewpoint, primarily due to two significant reasons which will be elaborated upon in this essay. The foremost reason supporting a complete ban of violent sports on television stems from their detrimental effects on viewers. Scientific research has established that exposure to aggressive behaviour can adversely impact an individual's mental health, causing emotional distress and undermining mental stability. Given that violent sports are rife with aggression, these negative consequences are amplified, leading to serious issues for spectators. Consequently, a ban is essential for safeguarding viewers from these potential harms. Moreover, it has been scientifically demonstrated that the content people consume can significantly influence their behaviour. This implies that exposure to violent media is like...

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Some people believe using modern technology (digital photographs, blogs) is the best way to record and remember important personal events. Others think the traditional method (making photo albums, writing diaries) is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are two different opinions related to how the best method recording individual events. Some people think that utilizing the advancement of technology such as google photos and blog is better to record special moments, while others believe that conventional way is the best. This essay will attempt to elaborate both views and I personal believe technology is the better remembering that people can review and recall the moment anywhere and everywhere in convenience way.

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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men eventhough the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50%female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain % of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Gender inequality in workplace has been the recent debates globally. Some people say that higher positions should just be reserved for men while others are saying the opposite. In my opinion, women should also be allowed to lead a company.

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Government of many countries had to impose a lockdown to control the Coronavirus pandemic. What were the advantages and disadvantages of this lockdown. Give example from your own experience.

In the contemporary era, viruses has widespread around the world.Conona virus is an recent example this. Hence, authorities has imposed stringent curfew to tackle the serious pandemic.There are two camps ,While some people opine that lockdown is the best,other emphasize the necessity of the keeping life flows in a normal track.I firmly belive that demerits of lockdown are higher than its downsides

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of youth adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the majority of some countries’ population is in the young adultadults age and people with older age become the minor group. I think this situation has advantages for the countries’ growth as young adults are adaptive and have better physical condition.

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Some people say that advertisings extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other peopte think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe advertisements it’s not important for purchasing something,although it’s an advertisement stage fundamentally of stages for a creative product ,l agree with this opinion because the advertisement introduces the product.

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In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant experience from your own experience

Nowadays more children are obese than ever before and this is true in many countries all over the world. The reasons for this are changes in lifestyles but individuals and government can take measures to stop the problem.

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IELTS essay, topic: Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums are classic depictions of great history. Entrance fees are made compulsory in most of these places, while a few do not charge any.In this ,essay I will be addressing both the advantages and disadvantages of collecting money from visitors and explaining why the latter outweigh the former.

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In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?

In earlier times, a lot of people worked in small companies, but nowadays, big companies have a lot of workers. There are a number of benefits and drawbacks of this development.

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some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes air pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, air pollution has been a major problem in the world. It is often argued that air transportation should be restricted since it results to air pollution. In my opinion, I somewhat disagree with this statement and I will discuss the positive and negative impacts of air pollution.

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