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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people say that nowadays children have an easy life, and some people think that the life of children was easier in the past. Discuss both points of view and also provide relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A quick reflection on a typical day reveals, how the advent of technology has revolutionized the world, especially the way of living for the younger generation. Nowadays, some individuals are on par with the idea that contemporary time is beneficial for children, whereas, others are completely against it as they believe the past time was easier. In this, essay we are going to look at both sides of the coin.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourist and not local people. Why is this case? What can be done to attract more local people?

Year by year, growing numerous growing tourists, instead of local people, have been attending all museums and ancient attractions in my city continually. For instance, as certain informal analytical data presented, probably 5.5 million persons have got around the Terra Cotta Warriors museum in Xi'an for the past four years. Yet about 80% or more of them came from different cities of the country, or even from other countries all around the world. Why don't most visitors come from the local area?

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In about 300 words, give examples to support your ideas.

Advertisement is an essential part of marketing. Because of that, many believe that it can influence people to buy things whereas, others argue that the idea is outdated. I completely agree with the former argument and the following paragraphs will support my view.

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Some employers are willing to give their workers a certain amount of unpaid sabbatical time, believing this benefits the individual and the organisation. Other employers see no merit in this arrangement and discourage it. Consider the possible arguments for and against unpaid sabbatical leave, and reach a viewpoint of your own.

İn recent years, Many companies provide their workers with different arrangements or measures. Especially there are a large number of conflicts in Muslim countries. On the one ,hand some organizations support permitting sabbatical times, on the other ,hand some of them are not able to ensure.

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Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with the academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed that schools should teach their students not only academic subjects but also practical skills for living. I totally disagree with the idea mentioned for the following reasons.

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People these days watch TV, films and other programs alone rather than with other people. Do this advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Individuals these days show Tv, films and other programs alone rather than with other individuals. In this essay, I will examine both arguments and then provide my own opinion.

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Watching television has positive effects on children.

Television is a more popular technology than others. It is so much used in daily life, especially, for children because they spend their leisure time watching television or studying and there are many people who think that watching television is beneficial for them. In this essay, it will be considered about it with examples.

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Teenagers should have regular exams at secondary schools as this will prepare them better for life after leaving school. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

Secondary schools need to have an exams from time to time to arrange them to face for future challanges without any hesitation.I would argue adolescents need to be examined regulary in order to well in their future .

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? Given reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people. While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships. Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness. Because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many different ways, it is difficult to give any definition that is true for everyone. However, if there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals then the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of self-knowledge. A person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her happy. Of course, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful envir...

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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

These days a large number of people prefer to travel more than before. It's rooted in the Improvement of people's financial level that cusses them to visit more countries, know more cultures and gain different experiences.

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In developing countries, rural children have less access to education.some people say that this problem is solved by providing teachers and schools. Other think that computer and internet should be provided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that in order to give broader chance for better education to children from non-urban area in developing countries, we need to build new schools and dispatch teachers to educate them. On the other hand, there are people who believe that this issue can be solved by offering them computer and internet. Obviously both approaches have their merits and disadvantages, however, I believe the idea of giving kids online devices is a better remedy, considering its quickness and future expandability.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In about 300 words, give examples to support your ideas.

advertisement is a selling strategy which promotes what companies intend to sell us. It is true that we are surrounded by numerous companies' advertisements. some people argue that advertising strategies succeeded in influencing people by their advertisement strategy while some other people believe that these methods are not impressive anymore and people do not pay attention to them. this essay intends to discuss both views and present my personal opinion on this topic.

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Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their families?

A quick reflection on a typical day reveals, how the advent of technology has revolutionized the world, especially the way of living. In this contemporary society, many individuals are preferring to move away from their loved ones, to different cities. In this ,essay we are not only going to look at the eminent reasons behind it but also at the way it is affecting people as well as their families.

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Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many people think studying at a university abroad offers many advantages for the future while some others believe staying at home country is better due to challenges in living and studying in foreign culture. This essay will explain the pros and cons on both sides.

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphone. why is this the case? Do you think this is positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, the smartphone is the basic need of younger. A number Kid utilising hours every day on their smart devices. I believe that there are more benefits rather than negative effects of the usage of smartphones. this furthers outlines both the point of view.

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Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goals?

Globalization encourages every country to produce more products. Some people may initially believe that more manufacturing should be the ultimate goal. Personally, I do concur with this idea. In the sentences that follow, I will underline my viewpoint and provide pertinent instances. k

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is an ongoing debate regarding the use of cell phones for children. There are divided opinions on this. some individuals are of the view that students must not be allowed to keep their phones with them. Whereas, other people have a notion that students can have their phones with them in any emergency. Prior to my stance, both views will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs with valid reasons and examples.

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Some people think visual images(like photographs and videos) can tell information more accurately in a news story. Others think they are not reliable sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People can achieve least news by diversity of ways, thus some people argue that getting information by visual images is more correct than by news articles, while others consider that the origin of them can not be relied on. I prefer the former views, though some of them are unreal.

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In order to solve traffics, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

To rectify the vehicle congestion, authorities should make a law to give huge tax to the car owners and disburse the collection to improve the mass transit. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of implementing fine to the car owners.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. do you think the advantages of charging people to museums outweighs the disadvantages.

While some people consider paying a fee to gain access into the museum as a good practise, other people think otherwise. In my opinion, I believe other people the benefits of paying an entrance fee which include, an opportunity to get money to maintain the facility and the value people place on the time spent touring the museum, are more than the drawbacks.

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