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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

The English language showers an ample amount of opportunity since it is used by most people in the world. Although it is used widely, People will not die just by not learning English. Certainly It crucial to learn English to maintain the pace with the growing world. Ensuring the survival of the Local language by the people is equally important. Below I will discuss more on the importance of both languages.

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In your opinion. What has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, we have been developing several essential transportations from the model of the past. In my point of view, In previous many hundred years ago, in my country, people still travelled to other places by boat as the river is the main road now and then and the hugest way to traffic.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others, however, disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

I received an Email a few days back from our Human Resource Team related to sharing of personal information of all employees. I want to share my views about the Pros and Cons of it.

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Tourism has been a good source of revenue in many countries and government should promote the industry. Do you agree or disagree.

It is believed that government must improve tourist attractions because it contributes to a significant increase in the amount of income for an increasing number of nations around the world. I completely agree with this statement the impending essay will discuss the same with a logical conclusion.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days life getting more and more difficult and people who need to improve must face some risks to have a perfect opportunity in either their professional and private lives . In my perspective the benefits of taking risks are more than the drawbacks , in this essay I will explain both sides and draw up my own conclusion .

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.

With the technological advancements in recent years, computers are becoming more and more integrated into today’s society. This increase in adoption means that people, and youngsters ,in particular, are being exposed to computers more often. Some people praise this development, whilst others believe that daily use of a computer imposes a negative effect on young people. This essay will elaborate on the latter standpoint.

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Some people think tourism should be banned while some disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

nowadays, some people believe that government should stop people to travel in different countries. others think that tourism is a basic need of countries to develop in future. In this should discuss both sides and give your personal point of view.

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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as the older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views on how people should do in free time .while some argue that is crucial to do some activities that improve mind during the leisure time , others believe that free time just for resting and relaxing. eventually , I want to discuss these opposite views and give my input into the matter .

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be c compulsory part of high school programme(for example working for charity ,improving the neighbourhood, teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that " Education is the most powerful weapon used to change the world ." However , few masses opine that learners must perform community services like doing charity job , giving knowledge regarding sports without salary along with academics as a part of their high school programme . I partly accord with this statement . In this essay , I will discuss both views before deriving a meaningful conclusion.

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IN SOME PLACES, WORKERS ARE REQUIRED TO RETIRE AT A SPECIFIC AGE. IN OTHER PLACES, WORKERS CAN RETIRE WHEN THEY CHOOSE. IN YOUR OPINION, SHOULD THERE BE A MANDATORY RETIREMENT AGE FOR ALL WORKERS?

Some people should not retire from their job at the stipulated age. I believe this is uncomfortable and can cause very problems.

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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and work of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that people can see historical monuments and work of art by using computer.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

It is a known fact that in constantly developing cities there is a huge demand for accommodation and rental properties. This raises a concern about the benefits and drawbacks of expanding leaving areas to the countryside. There are certainly a couple of factors that we need to consider, such as the growing population in big cities and subsequent growth in demand for rental and real estate properties. I believe that building apartments and homes in countryside locations is inevitable. And in fact, both the city and its habitants of it could benefit from it, which I am going to discuss in this essay.

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The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed.

According to some, all citizens should be given some wages from the government to live despite not being hired. I disagree with this view.

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Some policymakers have the notion that the economic progress is the most important measure to be taken for development of a country. Do you agree or disagree?

according to opinions of large amount of people, economic growth is the most fundamental principle which causes a country achieves numerous developments. I also believe the aforementioned fact and some points will be addressed in the essay below.

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The government should provide free public transport facilities 24/7 to reduce traffic congestion. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Parents have some dilemmas about the childcare process. Some parents prefer childcare centres to grandparents.Other parents think that grandparents are the best option for caring for kids.Both sides have advantages and disadvantages. Childcare centres such as kindergartens offer children systematic training and psychological support and which may turn back their academic success in future. Grandparents can not give systematic education like kindergarten but they give kids a lovely atmosphere and curiously enough children take role model grandparents manner easily by household. In my opinion, childcare centres are the best selection for children.

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in many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Does advantage outweigh disadvantages?

The pressure of a job is one of the biggest problems that many women face. Especially the women who give birth to their babies. Therefore, in many countries, the government allows them to leave their jobs during the first month after the birth of their babies to take maternity leave. In my opinion, it brings lots of benefits for them but has some disadvantages.

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Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the environment is a huge issue among world. individuals think that looking after the environmental problem accountability of government departments. Others think that it is the responsible for society. In this should discuss both sides and give your personal point of view.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In about 300 words, give examples to support your ideas.

Nowadays, brand endorsement is quite common in all kind of platforms such as television, social media and so on. Number of people hold the beleive, advertisements are remarkably inducing us to purchase various products. Others argue, products marketing are so prevelant that it can not influence most of the individuals. From my perspectives, I have disaproval for the later view and I am agree with fromer statement.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Over the recent years in some particular countries, people are showing a high tendency to discover the history of their houses which is caused by various reasons. In my opinion, there are several ways to reach this information such as asking the old neighbourhoods.

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Online shopping has become more popular than before. Discuss the causes and effects of this trend.

Over the last few years, online Purchases have become more prevalent than the past. It is believed this trend go up because of many reasons. Consequently, there are merits and demerits for buying products over the internet. Both causes and impacts will be discussed below.

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