IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 642

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should be encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Most people convince that students should be allowed to criticize their instructors for the sake of educational improvement, whilst others believe that this kind of behaviour leads to a loss of respect and discipline in the classrooms. I reckon that both sides are equally essential and significant.

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Some people believe that best way to produce happier society is to insure that there are only small difference between the richest and poorest members. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Individuals think that the ideal way to make a joyful community is to make sure that there is no gap between the weathy and poorest members. However, I agree with the statement. In this essay should give your personal point of view and the contrary as well.

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Show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The diagrams show information about the town of Islip and its future development plan.

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Peoples shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factor to what extent you agree or disagree?

Shopping plays an important role in our consumer culture, and some people consider that shopping preference of people is determined primarily by their age. In that case, while I embrace the notion, I believe that except age, there are other significant factors in shaping shopping habits.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages

Accepting uncertainty is essential on both sides of people's lives. Those sides are their works and personal lives. Taking risks has benefits for society like getting higher job positions and improving skills but it has some drawbacks which will be discussed in this essay.

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many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. to what extent do you agree?

Cooking has always been a vital practical skill, and many think that it is important for pupils to learn this skill at school. That is when people are split in their opinion and others oppose this view. I agree that acquiring this skill is essential, but question the view that whether a school is the right place for learning it.To commence with, school is the first place where youngsters enter society and start learning skills for their future lives, so it is important to spare some time in school for learning this life skill named cooking. The first aim of all courses is to make children independent individuals. Knowing how to prepare healthy meals is one of the steps towards independence, but it is mostly overlooked by many parents. Therefore, it is important to make acquiring this skill compulsory by entering it into the academic curriculum.

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Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Mistakes are the integral part of human life. Even, practice of mistakes is most common among kids. However, the freedom of making mistakes among children have always been a question of debate. Some believe that, kids having their own freedom to do the things, others think elder should have control over them. The upcoming paragraph, I shall discuss both of these views precisely to obtain a path forward to this subject.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. 🔻What are causes? 🔻How can this situation be improved?

It is an undeniable fact that " education is a powerful weapon that can be used by people to revolutionise the world ". However, only a few scholars opt for science subjects for their secondary education in various nations . This essay intends to enumerate some comparing causes behind this ever-increasing trend and will also enunciate the ways to improve this situation.

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In future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The graph chart illustrates the population of tourists, who visited a specific island in the Caribbean Sea, between 2010 and 2017, with two types of accommodation: staying on a cruise ship and staying on the island.

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Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree ?

Most of the citizens believe that teenagers who are involving with serious offence have to be cursed similar to the adults. I strongly disagree with the statement, because I believe rather than punishing the same way redirecting and helping the juvanile to understand the seriousness matters. This essay will depict why same treatment as adult should be avoided when in comes to punishing young adults.

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Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

It is hard to deny that physical punishment still happen everyday in many countries even it is certainly illegal which rise lots of attention from a large proportion of people to this topic,and there still have some poeple who think that they have the right to punish their children. From my perspection, i hold a strong point that children should be treat in correct way without physical punishment which should be deep in everyone's mind and behavior since it is relate to the future of the country.

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Traffic jam brings a lot of problems to our life. What are the problems? What are the solutions?

The world is moving at a rapid pace. Modernization is the essence of a booming society. The population in our society is expanding at an alarming rate. To cope with the commute-related needs of our masses, the number of vehicles is rising at a sharp pace. I strongly feel the rising vehicle number is going to be a matter of crisis for the future.

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Some individuals believe raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is the most effective method of increasing road safety. While I accept that this policy is good to some extent, I believe it is not the best because there are much better measures to reduce traffic accidents.

There are so many laws that should be put in place that are best measures to reduce traffic accidents and among rules, raising the minimum legal age for driving motorcycles is by far not one of them.

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More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, lots of people are migrating from their hometowns and countries where they could live with their companions and families. There are numerous advantages and disadvantages to this decision which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. As far as I am concerned, the drawbacks outweigh the benefits.

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Many working people get little or no exercise during the working day or in their free time, and hand health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

People are working so hard that they deprive themselves of physical exercise that is good for their bodies and good health, in the next paragraphs I will explain why many working-class people do not get enough exercise.

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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people are unwilling to pay taxes as they consider tax as a burden, which would reduce their disposable income. I believe that levying taxes is essential, because without tax revenue, a country is not able to function well.

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Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at workplaces. ‎Do you agree or disagree with your statement? Give your opinion and ‎examples from your own experience.

It is generally thought that having a unique dress code at offices is an excellent proposal. Considering employees from different financial backgrounds and communities they live in ,it would be better if every worker can wear a uniform.This topic has been profoundly discussed and I will point out my perspective before coming to a conclusion.

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Nowadays, children spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games. Some people believe this has negative effects on children's mental abilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

As they say,Too much of everything is bad.Nowadays,Children spend too much time watching TV and playing games.This has negative effects on children's mental abilities.This statement is true as an excess of everything is bad.There is some advantage as well disadvantage of both.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give you

Nowadays, in the contemporary world the technologies become popular and use in education area. Some people consider computer is the virtuous arsenal for students, while others think it can reflect harmfully. Personally, in my opinion a breakthrough technology can increase capability of pupil. This essay will examine both sides

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

It is true that nowadays various types of music are existing. Analyzing requirements of people morality, to listen music is one of the basic activities which is humanity needs it.

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