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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Doctors recommend that older people should excersice regularly.However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

General health is one of the most important topics that elder people should care about. Many doctors around the world advice elders to practice physical exercises to improve their health. Some times choronic diseases like blood pressure or diabetes prevent people from that. The governments should play an important role in raising awareness of elder people to encourage them to do exercise.

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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specIt is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

There is a continuous debate whether or not it is good for children to spend their initial years in rural areas as opposed to in centre of metropolitan areas. I believe, from two key aspects, that they should grow up outside of busy big cities; namely, they can enjoy close and warm human relationships and also they can acquire significant benefits from the good natural environments and can grow healthier.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the internet should be restricted for educational purposes, since it has a large number of negative effects on students. The majority of people may assert that the use of the net during studying in fact should be reduced, whereas many others claim that this kind of resource is vital for qualitative learning. I tend to believe that cyberspace is quite crucial in order to achieve a piece of higher knowledge and should not be restricted.

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People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effects?

Nowadays advertisements play a high role for humanity as well as commercial increase measure. In my view, the positive sides of this outweigh adverse side. This essay will look at the benefits and drawbacks of this situation.

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Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is not one particular road to be successful that's why each individual has a separate path for it. However, most of society had already assumed that it's all about how well a person has planned his life. Whereas, some are convinced that everything is related to how hard they work or how fortunate they are. In this essay, both assertions are discussed.

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multi-cultural societies, people of different cultural backgrounds live and work together. Do you think the advantages of multi-cultural societies outweigh the disadvantages?

With the rapid change of the world, strong countries might attract people who has different cultural backgrounds to develop new live and this has been becoming more and more normal. Some people think of multi-cultural societies as advantage of countries' competition, some people refer to it as a threats. As for my perspective, I consider multi-cultural societies has more advantages than drawbacks. I will be elaborated on as follows.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The discussion regarding the learning a foreign language by children has sparked a heated debate. Some people opine that studying different languages is providing opportunities for people to communicate with different kind of people. However, there are some individuals who believe that this is making children less patriotic. While knowing foreign languages can affects the patriotic spirit in some cases, I personally believe that it is very essential to provide primary schools with such a curriculum. This essay will look at the benefits and drawbacks of this situation.

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Cities offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living. So that, people are moving from rural area to urben area for living better lifestyle. However, living life in a cities might be quite challanges. Traffic and expenssive cost of living are major challanges. Goverments should improve public transportation and construct residential are to decrease cost of living. I will elobrate more in next two paragraph.

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In many places, people's lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?

The world is changing at a rapid pace due to phenomena such as globalization and emerging technologies. This has had a serious impact on families which in my opinion is quite negative.

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As more and more information is available online, the role of textbooks has become obsolete. Therefore, universities should replace traditional books with digital materials. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Printed books have become redundant in the modern age due to the advent of electronic books. This has prompted many to advocate for the abolishment of textbooks in universities in favor of digital books. Though many individuals find reading on their devices comparatively difficult and some may even lack expertise in using digital resources, I believe there are many benefits of this situation. Besides being portable and economical, e-books offer various accessibility functions which are absent in traditional textbooks.

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Write about the following topic. Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Bullying in schools is a growing concern around the world. Students desire a safe environment at school, but when the schools have insecurities bullying occurs. There are some reasons for this phenomenon according to my perspective. This essay will outline the possible causes and reasonable solutions including relevant examples.

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Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some individuals tend to think that modern technologies are making people more sociable, others think that cutting-edge technologies are making individuals less sociable. In my point of view, cutting-edge technologies such as the World Wide Web and wireless internet help to make life easier and more comfortable in different directions. This essay will discuss both points of view and the opinion will be given.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days life getting more and more difficult and people who need to improve most face some risks to have a perfect opportunity in either professional and privet lives . In my perspective ,the benefits of taking risks more than the drawbacks , in this essay I will explain both sides and draw up my own conclusion .

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

gallery is the place that tell the stories of the past. well, they are always interesting and captivating. Museums are the symbols of the cultural values and traditions of any society. Undoubtedly, museums tell the untold secrets of the place and take visitors back to historical times. Mostly, tourists visit museums whenever they are travelling to new places. In my opinion, there are certain reasons to visit museums which will be illustrated in the following essay.

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Government should focus their spending on public service rather than on arts such as music and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Authorities should spend their money on social welfare rather than on artwork. I agree with the first view but the arts are also crucial for the development of human beings.

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Some experts believe that children should begin learning a foreign language in primary school rather than secondary school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is often argued that learning a foreign language at a young age is more beneficial for students at the same time some people argue that it is a burden for primary school students. in my viewpoint learning a foreign language can develop communication skills as well as they will have a high possibility of getting good jobs moreover the primary age of children is considered as the hub of learning. However, there are some drawbacks such as it will be a burden for the students and it may affect learning the main subjects. But the advantages outweigh the drawbacks.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's world of sophisticated technology, it is not remote expectation that in the future many people can possess accessibility to high-tech devices. According to some, societies move towards using online types of reading materials as well as never do they purchase paper ones. In the following, by mentioning some reasons I tend to discuss that I generally agree with those.

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Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?

Protecting animals is one of the most important problems that many countries face. However, whether or not to stop the use of animals in testing new drugs or other products is a controversial issue. In my opinion, we should protect endangered wild animals and can use some not endangered animals to test new drugs.

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Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?

Protecting animals is one of the most important problems than many countries face. However, whether or not stopping use animals in testing new drugs or other products is a controversial issue. In my opinion, we should protect endangered wild animals and can use some disendangered animals to test new drugs.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. To what extent fo you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in the contemporary day and age, there exist various products containing a large proportions of sugar which are enormously flavoured by a number of people. However, this action tends to affect many aspects and inevitably contributes to several health-related issues such as Diabetes or obesity. Thus, it is generally held that the only solution is that the governments should have the policy to make sugary products less affordable to the population by higher their price. This essay partially agrees with the aforementioned statement and provides a set of reasons to support each point of view before the conclusion is reached.

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