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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that these days, sports celebrities gained more money than others. The question is, is it fair enough compared with other essential occupations? In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my conclusion. In terms of the positive side, some people believe that paying famous players large sums of money is reasonable. The main reason given to support this claim is the significant influence of sports celebrities on various aspects, such as: increasing health awareness and positive attitude. To illustrate, if the athletes have outstanding behavior, such as leadership characteristics or volunteering in multiple fields, they will be effected positively on their followers. In other words, the audience get motivated by sports persons. However, others strongly opposed the exaggerated payment to sports occupations. Firstly, it is unacceptable to generalize that this segment of people is always of good morals. In other words, social media shows that some have an a...

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With the development of modern transportation comes environmental problems. What possible solutions are there to these problems?

New advancements in automobiles have brought changes to the climate as well as to its surroundings. Innovations in transportation often come with pros and cons that can be seen on a broader spectrum. problems often come along with their solutions too. This essay firmly explains both problem and solution.

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The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing. Why is this? What can be done?

Nowadays, lakes and rivers are drying and many people misuse water. people are generating more wastes and dump it into the water. I think that government should launch public awareness campaigns throughout the society to show people the consequences of their action and possible environmental crises.

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sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion..

As globalization becomes acceptable around the globe, organisations and international companies do create a lot of international events and arenas around the world that include sports. The Public claimed that there are more demerits of international events to the place rather than advantages. From my personal experience and knowledge, I think that games like Olympic and Commonwealth Games do bring significant benefits to the country. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the subject with examples by demonstrating my standpoints.

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We can get knowledge from news. But some people even think we should not trust the journalists. What do you think? And what do you think are the important qulities that a journalist should have?

Nowadays, the news serves much information that could be knowledge for society. However, some people assume that journalists do not always give fact information. I personally consider thatjournalists must filter the information which would be published to the public in case of avoiding the wrong perceptions. Also, giving fact news is an important aspect that should be owned by the journalists themselves.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle this issue?

One of the most threats facing our planet today is global warming. This essay will analyze the root causes of global warming and then suggest remedies to some potential solutions.

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It is argued that the parents of children who break the rules should be punished in some ways as parents are responsible for the children's actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals frequently put the blame for juvenile delinquency on their parents. Nevertheless, from my perspective, exerting discipline on parents for their children’s wrongdoings is not sensible because every individual is responsible for their own actions.

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Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many people believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays more people think that to learn a second language well it is necessary to live on the country that language is spoken. Honestly, Not every people can move country where speakers live. It is really helpful experience which improve skills. On the one hand, moving have benefits, but on the other hand, there are drawbacks and a issue which be discussed and solved. In this essay both sides will be explained and supported with examples.

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In modern times, young adult are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Adolescents these days spent lesser time with their parents and are more connected with their friends and spreads much time with them. I think it is the generation gap and busy schedules of parents which leads to this. I personally don't agree that parents should force their children to spend time with them.

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today more and more tourists are visting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or Antarctic. What are the benefits disadvantaged for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, many tourists want to visit a place with difficult conditions. For instance the South Pole of the Earth or the Sahara Desert. And of course, it will have pros and cons.

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Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

king rest and enjoying life are essential for everyone. A group of people think that people have to not continue their career after reaching their age of retirement. I agree that people should stop working after reaching the age of retirement. This essay will discuss some reasons why people should do this.

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If a product is good and meets customer needs, then people will buy it and advertising is unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising is unnecessary because people will buy a product that meets their needs and is reasonably priced.

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Some Children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, due to the vast number of hobbies available and the busy schedule of parents, some children spend hours on their smartphones. This presents children with opportunities as well as challenges. It seems to me that negative impacts outweigh the positives, and I will explain why in this essay.

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Some people think that parents have an powerful influence in child's life, while the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part of child's development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that parents will partly have an effect on their children. But I do agree that factors outside the kids' home play a more crucial role in their improvement.

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?

technology is developing at an astonishing pace. however, the old generation is tackling its adoption in their life. owing to it, complications in operating the technology coupled with inadequate knowledge are the prominent reason for it. although,this situation can be catered to by providing assistance in using the cellphone or computers as well as making gadgets more simple to operate.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

There are an increasing numbers of individuals who are taking alternative medicines and therapies without asking their usual doctor for help when they are suffering from health problems. In my opinion, although alternative medicines and treatments have some benefit, it is definitely a negative development.

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Some people think that work is the most important thing in people's life. Without the success of a career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today,some people belive that work is the most important thing in people's life.Without the success of a career,life will become meaningless.In older to explain why I protly agree with the opinion this essay will the why work is the most important thing in life and if without the success of a career,but life will not become meaningless.

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In the Future More People Will Choose to Go on Holiday in Their Own Country and Not Travel Abroad on Holiday. Do You Agree or Disagree?

In recent years, there has been a growing trend of people choosing to holiday within their own country instead of travelling abroad. Some believe that this trend will continue in the future, with more individuals preferring domestic travel over international travel. In my opinion, I agree with this prediction, and there are several reasons why.

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In many countries today, crimes novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Nowadays, crimes novels and TV violation dramas are a reflection of the society in general. Things are shown in programs are similar to what actually happens in our life. Even though I claim that these dramas can disturb the mind-set of people, fictions and TV dramas related to crime are becoming common as the producers of such films effectively draw attractive plots with twists hitting into people's curiosity.

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As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Some languages are widely spoken, while others are not so popular or at the brink of extinction. Many governments and communities take actions to save the latter and widespread their use. I agree with the idea of protecting minority languages, and in this essay I will explain my opinion with examples.

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