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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people say that giving a smaller amount of money weekly to children will help them become more capable as they grow older. Do you agree or disagree?

Giving pocket money to children,some people say that ,not good ,and many more people say its useful for children to learn how to manage ,with a small volume also they will learn to save,i strongly agree from the positive side,there few drawbacks here describing both views.

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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, internet has made it possible for students to access world knowledge at their fingertips but this does not mean that there is no need of tutors, therefore, I completely disagree with this statement becauses teachers are professionals in their subjects and help solving problems of the students.

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Some cities ban private cars from entering the centre and force people to use bicycles and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's fast-paced world, transportation facilities are increasing trend among the people. While some cities force the community to use bicycles and buses by preventing the private cars to enter to the city center. In my opinion, I think that this policy can bring more benefits for folks compared to any disadvantages it might bring.

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Some people think that children should only read academic books. others believe that reading books for entertainment is equally important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although it is sometimes thought that children ought to read study books for greater achievement in life, other people believe that the focus should be also on entertainment books. In my opinion, I consider that reading both books helps children gain more success in their life.

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'Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people's lives and should receive more funding.' To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, news companies spend much more money to cover international news than local news, which is more relevant to local society. I completely agree that local news covering should receive more funding because people have a right to know what is happening where they live. Also, informing people about regional issues can help to involve more participants to resolve domestic problems.

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Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems.

The amount of violence in films has been an intensifying cause of concern for many people. Such films usually materialize as exciting, entertaining and even something to imitate. Nevertheless, it is undeniable that these films can cause severe problems in our society.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on young people and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that social media sites(such as Facebook) have a massive negative impact on the youngest lives and society. I disagree with this opinion and I believe that it helps them to be more aware of what happens in society and communicate with other people and express themselves.

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Housing shortages in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the population is increasing at a brisk pace. Most of the population is trying to live in urban areas thus, creating a housing shortage. This issue is causing a lot of social issues. Many people think that this can be resolved only with government intervention. I completely agree with this assumption and will support it with relevant reasons in this essay.

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Some people say that the best way of improving public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

there are several perspectives on finding the best way to improve the standards of public health. some folk have a positive attitude towards that the administration must attract attention to increase the quality of equipment of sports . in contrast , some people believe this solution has a minor positive effect on upward public well-being. hence, there are other decisive factors in general health. in this essay, I will want to discuss both sides of these views and say my standpoint.

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Some people think that as long as professional sportsmen and sportswomen are good players, their behaviour on and off the playing field is not importsnt. do you agree or disagree?

Due to rapid increase in the coverage of sports events, their popularity has risen multiple folds in the last decade. Some people perceive that their personal activities should not matter to anyone unless they are underforming at professional level. However, I completely disagree with this notion because of several reasons. This will essay will discuss various points to provide justification for my stance.

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Face to face meeting with people are much effective than meetings held on the telephone or via the internet

Conducting a meeting at the office is more adequate than setting up arrangements by phone or the internet. Most vital decisions of the company are determined by conventions that demand the attending employees.

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, we can observe a decline in public parks. This is due to the increase in demand for residential and commercial spaces. Due to this decrease in public parks, there are many disadvantages. The argument public park spaces could be used for residential or commercial spaces is invalid. This essay will provide relevant reasons in support of the argument.

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Some people think that children nowadays have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, some argue that parents gave their children high freedom which means they can do many things depend on themselves. For teenagers, it is no longer that everything has to follow parents’ minds. There are some people who say that this kind of education will bring negative effects on children, but I have some different opinions to discuss.

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Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio. How does media affect the society? Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

There is no denying the fact that the media are a crucial part of people's lives. Devices such as television and radio have significant influence on the way how humans think and act. Hence, the question is whether the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks?

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Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

We consider the interesting ambivalent topic which is related an education. In accordance with the theme we observe two sides. People who graduate the university for the academic study and who do vocational training.

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In some countries, if people need to find work, they have to move away from their families and their friends. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In some parts of the world, people must sometimes leave their countries, families and friends in order to seek work. While they obviously have a good reason to make such a hard decision, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. On the one hand, the great advantage is to be able to earn a living in another country. If they are unable to find work in their own country, many men join the global migration of labour. Leaving their families, they become economic migrants, sending money home if they are able to find work. In France, for example, many migrant workers from North Africa work in the construction or service industries, in order to support a family in their native country. If they had not moved to another country and found work, their family would have remained poverty-stricken and without hope for the future. On the other hand, there are too many disadvantages if this situation is allowed to continue. Firstly, local populations are sometimes prejudic...

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Many people think that job satisfaction is important in work. Do you think young people these days should be sure of job satisfaction before taking a new job or should they put salary first?

To be satisfied with your job is a debatable concern ,some might believe it is essential to work in a field that you are passionate about .While others see that how much you are going to get paid is the most crucial thing.In my opinion, at younger age working just for money is considered enough motivation to feel satisfaction.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visits such places?

The tourist spots that contain extremist natural conditions are gaining popularity nowadays. While visitors could create unforgattable memories in such regions, it may put them at potential risks, including natural disasters, and the disease derived from unfamiliar weather.

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The government should pay to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy Justify your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge of experience.

The decision of having children might be the most challenging decision for adult people, especially for young parents. Even 100 years ago it was a common desire of creating a nuclear family that was also a traditional way for married people. In the modern world people more often think about the possibility to have a baby, how much money they should earn for it, and the capability of having more than one child. Nevertheless, these conditions also include the level of life in different countries. For example, in China people couldn't have more than one child two years ago because of the population. They should pay extra taxes for each child or leave the country.

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in some countries, people prefer to rent a house to live in, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. does renting a housr have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?

In numerous nations having a personal residence of one's own is a privilege to those without. It may be for countless reasons, but the most significant ones are economic problems. This essay is on to count some of them with a focus on the issued economy.

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