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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many manufacturerd food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

The majority of manufacturers produce food and beverages with extensive taste in order to sell more for their customers. Although this leads to many health diseases, I do not agree with the idea of increasing the production cost which can solve solely the issues by limiting consumption. I think there should be a persuasion campaign of active life and a policy pushing companies to reveal all ingredients that have sugar.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Just like A coin has both heads and tails, that will lead to have certain attributes that comes along with staying in the same company for the rest of they’re career, and moving from one industry to another. We will discuss both the views in the below essay with some statistics that can provide conclusions to my view.

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Whereas some think that celebrities should not get involved in politics, others claim they can play an important role in changing society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that celebrities ought not to join politics, while others believe that they can have a significant role in changing society. Although celebrities have more influence on people, I believe that they will lose their focus on their own careers.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A set of people believe that Advertising plays a vital role in convincing people to purchase things. However, Other groups of individuals think that advertising does not affect a person's buying habits. There are divided opinions. Prior to my stance, both the views would be discussed in the upcoming write-ups with proper reasons and appropriate examples.

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While studying abroad provides an opportunity to broaden one’s experience, as also present the danger of letting influence from the host culture. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The majority of youngsters prefer to go to foreign coutries for studying at present time. Some believe that although foreign countries provide various chances to grow up experience, these countries' cultures also affect the generation. I disbelief in this statement because there are many advantages to live in abroad and adapt the local culture.

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Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do you agree or disagree?

Although,some people argue that leaders and directors in an organisation are normally adult people but others believe younger are more beneficial for leaders. However, in my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement. In this essay give your personal point of view and the contrary as well.

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Government spends much money for education. More money should be spent for free time activities. To what extend do agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the regime has an indispensable role in subsidizing the community in every sphere such as education, health, and some other exercise. Although I agree that government should pay more expenditure on the educational system, I think that a portion of these expenses must be allocated to welfare activities.

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Government spends much money for education. More money should be spent for free time activities. To what extend do agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the regime has an indispensable role in subsidizing the community in every sphere such as, education, health, and some other exercise. Although I agree that government should pay more expenditure on the educational system, I think that a portion of these expenses must be allocated to welfare activities.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

It is certainly true that nowadays Internet is widely used in education around the world. People’s opinions differ, some claim that it is beneficial for teaching and learning while others believe that it is harmful for students and should be restricted. Personally, I believe that the use of Internet should be limited in some ways, but it is still a valuable educational tool.

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Many manufactured food and drinks products contain a high level of sugar, cause health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree?

High sugar content in manufactured food and drinks had contributed so much to bad health and diseases among people. Several companies care less about the ingredients they put in their manufactured food items,they are more concerned about making profits.In the next ,passages I will explain why I agree that sugary products should be more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

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Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The importance of international trade which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this

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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

The importance of children's choices which was always debatable has now become controversial. Some individuals argue that kids should have authority to decide their own choices on daily-life, while others reject this notion, because folks claim that it will lead to selfishness in children's lives, and have an effect on society life. This essay will examine and elaborate my view.

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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

The importance of children's choices which was always debatable has now become controversial. Some individuals argue that kids should have the authority to decide their own choices in daily life, while others reject this notion, because folks claim that it will lead to selfishness in children's lives, and have an effect on social life. This essay will examine and elaborate on my view.

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It is common practice for some students to take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Most students around the world usually take a break after graduating because of several reasons ,some of which I will explain below.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, work and leisure activites. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relavant examples for your own knowledge and experience.

Many fields in life have altered because of IT ; automation plays a dominant role in our daily life . It`s now more important in our job , home or pastimes . No one can deny that information technology has developed our life immensely more than ever , but also it affects our health and traditions negatively. Technology is deemed to be a stepping-stone to the development of our future life .

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the present age, it is debated whether single-sex education is a more effective schooling practice than mixed-sex education. This essay shall discuss both sides of the argument and I, its author will give opinion in the end with the conclusion.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people tend to think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum, acceptable age for driving car or motorcycle. From my point of view, I completely agree with this statement, because reduction of young people with licence will stimulate safety. In the following essay I am going to give reasons and present other effective measures.

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Volunteer work organised by middle schools brings more benefits than problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Volunteer work has been promoted in many schools, and even has been considered to be a requirement for graduation in someplace. Although it may have an adverse impact on students to some extent, unpaid work is beneficial for participants and local communities.

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Governments should focus their spending on public services rather than on arts such as Music and Painting . To what extend do you agree or discuss both?

The financial support is spent by governments out to be concentrated more on public services in excess of the heart of art like Painting and Music. I totally agree with this because that budget is needed for the services of the public .

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this.To what extent do you agree?

Having a decent health service is a human’s basic right that they expect in return for the tax they pay. Although many people argue that searching for new prevention methods would be beneficial, another group’s perspective is completely different and claims that governments have to assign more money for the treatment. I agree with the second idea to some extent.

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