IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 657

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been seen from ancient times, women care for their children with enthusiasm and they exert lots of effort for the nourishment of their children but on the other hand, males are quite busy with many things. So, they do not give most of their time to the development of children still it is a debatable statement and I will express my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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in some countries, more and more people are becoming interesteed in finding out about the history of the houses or building they live in

these days a number of people tend to find out about the history of the accommodation they live in. I strongly believe that this interest comes from being more knowledgeable about the place they live in and an interesting historical story of an old building.

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Although families have influence on a children’s development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the majority of parents think that they do not have a contribution to their children's growth but instead of that external people have most of the contributions to their lifestyles however, I think that even though culture and trends are changing still home members should help their teenagers to learn basic cultural activates.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

These days, we are surrounded by junk food, you can find it even at the supermarket and this is a significant problem for all the people who have difficulties eating in a healthy way. Some persons believe that governments should impose a higher tax to increase the prices of this food. In this essay, I will discuss why I strongly agree with this main point of view which I believe that it is one of the most effective ways to help.

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PEOPLE ARE BECOMING MORE AND MORE OBESE. What are the reasons of this problem and how can this be solved?

Nowadays, junk food restaurants are becoming really common because they are cheap,however, they have led people to gain weight as a result, governments should impose taxes on them.This essay will analyse how people are gaining weight and, how can they handle this issue.

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Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

Technology and social independency change the behaviour of human actions and even the communication skill. Inefficient examples of communication such as anti-social behavior and disrespectful approach for others are an increasing trend among the society. This essay will discuss the main causes and possible solutions for this problem.

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Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual person. Nobody can fully understand or experience another person's feelings, and we all have our own particular passions from which we take pleasure

Every Individual looks for happiness, happiness can be expressed diversly from one person to another. Some find joy while feeding stray animals or some may find it in spending on food, clothing and other leisure activities. In this , an essay I will talk about the different types of joys one has.

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In countries that have already achieved affluence, any additional wealth would not make people happier. Do you agree or disagree

In several developed countries, there is a hotly debated topic that revolves around wealth, of which many people would argue that community would not be happier no matter how much wealthier they become. From my perspective, I go against this belief, as being in abundance could make human life more comfortable.

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"Technology is advancing at a rapid pace and is changing the way we live, work, and communicate. Some people think the rapid pace of technological development is beneficial, while others are concerned about its potential negative effects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

The rapid pace of technological advancement has changed how people live, work and communicate. Some believe that it is a positive development, however, there are some who disagree. While knowing that there is a possible downside to it, I believe that the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks. The forthcoming paragraph will discuss both views and provides an opinion at the end.

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Students perform better in schools when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Controlling recruitment's accomplishments is currently a difficult process. Some institutes decide to give a penalty list for those who don't reach the expected achievement. Others choose to give rewards to encourage their enlistment to do these tasks. In the following essay ,I will explain that choosing one of these methods is not enough to reach the optimum goal of teaching and give an appropriate method to do this.

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In poorer families, school children may have to work part-time as well as study. Discuss the merits and demerits for these children.

It is a common practice for children from lower-income families to work part-time while studying. While this may provide some financial relief, it can also have both positive and negative impacts on their academic and personal growth. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation.

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Some people today have argued that countries should interfere less in the affairs of other nations To what extent do you agree or disagree

People nowadays have been arguing nations ought to not meddle as much in the internal affairs of other nations. I strongly agree due to several considerations in which to maintain the relationship between both countries and yet, one country can interfere with the inner workings of others if there is harm toward itself.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Nowadays , English is considered the language used internationally by people. In fact , according to researchers, more than 60% of people around the world speak English as a first language or second language. Because. in today’s world of globalization, English is promoted as a means of communication to overcome the language barrier and it is clear that English is the language that is used all around the globe and the one which keeps the world connected. Despite these benefits. at the same time, it causes the risk of extinction of other local languages. I believe that it is extremely necessary to start learning English, but local languages should also be given equal importance and steps should be taken to ensure their survival . First of all, let's find out why it is so important for people to know English. In the...

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In today's fast-growing world, it is debated whether the government should invest more in public benefit cause rather than in developing arts like music and theatre. I do not completely agree with this statement.

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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

These days, the theme of Educational System is one of the most important concerning the political systems and the society. In some parts of the world is believed that children must start school when they are six. On the other hand, in other countries it is thought that school for them should start at seven or even eight years old. In this essay I will discuss this two main points of view and why I strongly agree that minors have to start school when they are four or even before.

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In recent years, the number of crimes committed by teenager in major cities throughout the world is increasing . Discuss this issue . Give reasons and suggest some solution.

The number of crimes related to youngsters are growing day by day in metropolitican cities . This essay will discuss several reasons and solutions of this situation.

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In many countries, city planners locate offices, schools, homes and shops in certain areas so that they are separated by distance. Do you think the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?

Offices, homes and diversity of many facilities are situated in different areas and divided from each other in many places of the world by city planners’ arrangements. Generally, this case gives benefits such as creating quite places for some facilities and facilitating transportation ways to these areas.

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In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

The correlation between equity and individual success has become much stronger in recent years. It is believed some people that this success can realize in egalitarian communities more than in the others. Others assert that this achievement depends on freedom in terms of their individual values. Egalitarian societies may be advantageous due to their fair regulations for their people. Looking at this case from the other side, individuals’ freedom has a key role in order to obtaining achievements.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

People encounter risks occasionally in their daily lives, and decisions remains to be made whether to take the risks or not. Personally, I would argue that the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages.

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In the future all cars, buses and truckss will be driverless. The inly people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era, development in cutting-edge technologies providing enormous benefits to the people but some folks consider these technological advancements can produce adverse affects on our daily. While others argue and claim that these contemporary advancements can bring ease in our daily life.

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