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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Nowadays , English is considered the language used internationally by people. In fact , according to researchers, more than 60% of people around the world speak English as a first language or second language. Because. in today’s world of globalization, English is promoted as a means of communication to overcome the language barrier and it is clear that English is the language that is used all around the globe and the one which keeps the world connected. Despite these benefits. at the same time, it causes the risk of extinction of other local languages. I believe that it is extremely necessary to start learning English, but local languages should also be given equal importance and steps should be taken to ensure their survival . First of all, let's find out why it is so important for people to know English. In the...

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In today's fast-growing world, it is debated whether the government should invest more in public benefit cause rather than in developing arts like music and theatre. I do not completely agree with this statement.

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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

These days, the theme of Educational System is one of the most important concerning the political systems and the society. In some parts of the world is believed that children must start school when they are six. On the other hand, in other countries it is thought that school for them should start at seven or even eight years old. In this essay I will discuss this two main points of view and why I strongly agree that minors have to start school when they are four or even before.

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In recent years, the number of crimes committed by teenager in major cities throughout the world is increasing . Discuss this issue . Give reasons and suggest some solution.

The number of crimes related to youngsters are growing day by day in metropolitican cities . This essay will discuss several reasons and solutions of this situation.

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In many countries, city planners locate offices, schools, homes and shops in certain areas so that they are separated by distance. Do you think the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?

Offices, homes and diversity of many facilities are situated in different areas and divided from each other in many places of the world by city planners’ arrangements. Generally, this case gives benefits such as creating quite places for some facilities and facilitating transportation ways to these areas.

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In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

The correlation between equity and individual success has become much stronger in recent years. It is believed some people that this success can realize in egalitarian communities more than in the others. Others assert that this achievement depends on freedom in terms of their individual values. Egalitarian societies may be advantageous due to their fair regulations for their people. Looking at this case from the other side, individuals’ freedom has a key role in order to obtaining achievements.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

People encounter risks occasionally in their daily lives, and decisions remains to be made whether to take the risks or not. Personally, I would argue that the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages.

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In the future all cars, buses and truckss will be driverless. The inly people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era, development in cutting-edge technologies providing enormous benefits to the people but some folks consider these technological advancements can produce adverse affects on our daily. While others argue and claim that these contemporary advancements can bring ease in our daily life.

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Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. However, other trust that everyone has a responsible on the environment. This essay I will discuss both points of views.

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Some people claim that too much focus and resources have been spent to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days few people concerned about the energy and money wasts to keeping animals alive. The question is, is it worth to concentrate and investing on wild animals? In this essay I’m going to discuss the benefit of protecting animals comparison with investing in other sectors. then draw my own conclusion.

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Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sport, while others think it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

More and more companies these days use athletes to endorse their products and services. Though some people have raised concerns over this trend, I am generally in favor of sponsorship in the sports world.

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Nowadays many students choose to take a year off before entering university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of taking a year off, and give your own opinion about whether it is a good idea.

The majority of scholars prefer to have a year break after finishing their schooling. Although there is a number of benefits of this trend, drawbacks cannot be ignored. As far as I am concerned, it leads to a more lucrative career compared to the downsides.

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One of the biggest problems facing the world today is growing enough food to feed the ever-expanding population. GM foods are a good way to solve this issue. To what extent do you agree of disagree.

Genetically modified foods have been the source of much debate over the last few decades. However, I believe that they are the best solution we have to the problem of producing enough food to feed the planet for three reasons.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical educator lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The vast majority of people have been involving a serious strain on health issues which is called being overweight. Some people believe that the best way to tackle the issues, is to do exercise and sport in schools. I completely agree that this solution can help effectively to solve gradually to reach the goal without any cost.

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Some people think governments should focus on environmental pollution and housing to reduce the number of illnesses and diseaeses. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, all we know is that environmental problems and housing has been increasing around the world. Many people claim that governing bodies have to focus on problems of the environment and increase housing to minimize excessive detrimental diseases. I partially agree with this viewpoint inasmuch as governments have to focus on these main global problems although I believe that governments should address other measures to prevent illness and disease instead of spending time on housing and environmental issues.

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The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent time, it has been noticed that Juvenile crime is increased. Some individuals believe that the best possible path to decrease this is to give proper training to their parents for parenting. In my opinion, to improve parental skill is the possible solution but along with that schools and governments are equally responsible for this.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.

Some people often argue whether there must be fixed punishments for any crime or the circumstances and reasons of committing a crime should be consider before inflicting punishment. Here, I will discuss both views since fixed punishment would consume a short time judgement while sufficient punishment will be given to criminals after knowing their motives for the crime.

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Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples

It is true that parents need adequate knowledge to raise their kids in an appropriate way. I totally agree with the statement that childcare training programs should be made compulsory in following essay we shall discuss it in detail.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only spaces available for building in in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new home there. What is your opinion about this?

It is thinking of some individuals, that in certain areas the building of new houses occurs mostly on the outskirts of the city. Others find this option not suitable. In this essay, I shall discuss the above-mentioned notion and states my own ideas as well.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

More often than not, most public look for triumph in riches and they are thinking richness is key to accomplishment. Maybe it is true, this is the reason this essay will discuss why this is the case and outline the contributing factors that make the nation happy.

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