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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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As a result of electronic invention such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent so you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that the electronic revolution makes pupils inactive and cause their health be affected. However, the human’s life has been easier. Despite, I undebatably reckon that our life would have more issue, if we stood on this way.

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Some people believe it is a good idea for students to work part-time to ensure better opportunities in the future. Others are of the opinion, job during study distracts the individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

few people think that working part time for students are better chance of achievement in the future. some people believe that part time job while study distracts their minds. In this essay ought to look toward both the side and give suggestions as well.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that many point out that instead of visiting monuments and artefacts in museums, many prefer to travel to a bookmobile.Personally, I tend to consider that this point of view is well grounded, however, according to some, we should not ignore the fact that the most of us still feel the demand for museums.

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Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

The variety of food present in the country is available from the mixture country's growth and import from worldwide. It is argued that edible items which are manufactured in the country, should be the only source of food for the population and the number of imported food items should be minimized. This essay totally disagrees that imports should be decreased as manufactured food should be the only items available because like this nutrient requirements will suffer and the country will lose its foreign relationships.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Many researchers think that it is more favorable for pupils to begin studying a foreign language at primary school instead of secondary school. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages. The essay will first convey that the earlier someone learns an additional language the easier to master it and it also brings cognitive benefits, followed by the analysis of primary disadvantage, namely confusion with their native tongue which is not valid.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, dealing with different situations is a well-discussed topic. Some individuals think tolerating unpleasant circumstances such as financial problems or workplace challenges is imperative. On the other hand, others believe people should try their best to change what they do not consent. This essay will discuss these ideas based on some facts.

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Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Do you agree or disagree?

Having said that money is the most vital factor to achieve happiness, while others argue that it is not relatable to money. I strongly believe that other factors have their value as money has in being happy.

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Many people think that come naturally good leaderships and many people think to get leadership to learn skill. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that people get leadership skills naturally, whereas others say that people should learn leadership skill in order to become true leader. This essay discusses both views and also give my opinion on the views.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Numerous government thinks the must an important achievement for their country is to have a great economy while plethora of people think along with economic progress distinct progress is equally vital. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and outline the importance and significance of both ideas.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for men after they leave school. It would be a good idea to adopt this system, for men and possibly women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Several Nations follow a mandatory rule that their male citizens should undergo mandatory military service after school education. Many people favour this concept of military services for men and also for women if possible. I agree with this statement completely and I believe that it would be better if all nations follow this rule without any gender differences.

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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

Today, everything is evolving, so the fashion trends of people are constantly being updated and changed. Traditional clothes are increasingly being overshadowed by Western clothes. In my opinion, this is quite a negative development.

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While choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

Compensation for a job plays an essential role to satisfy all the necessities. Some think that wage should be a priority when selecting a post. I disbelief this statement because there are many other factors we should consider when a select a job.

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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

In today's fast-paced lifestyle,people have an opinion that zoos are not entertaining anymore and they need to be shut down in order to liberate animals from cages.In this essay,we analyse the issues and possible alternatives.

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Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some individuals that high-skilled workers and those who render specialised services should only practice their professions in the state where they got their education, while others think they can go to other places to work. In my opinion, I believe these groups of professionals should have the freedom to work where they desire so that they can gain more experience and this will aid even distribution of skilled workers.

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People who read for pleasure in their free time have a better imagination than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few masses believe that reading material about a topic of your interest improves their fascination instead watching videos in their leisure time. Although some people argue that watching TV improves communication skills. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both points followed by my opinion.

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People who read for pleasure in their free time have a better imagination than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few masses believe that reading material about topic of your interest improves the fascination instead of watching videos in leisure time. Although some people argue that watching TV improves the communication skills. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both points followed by my opinion.

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In many parts of the world, people look up their family history. Some people think that researching previous generations is a good idea but others think that it is better to be focused on the present and future generation\s. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have started to look at their roots and family history in order to understand more about them. This essay will discuss both the views of society looking back at the previous generations and the other set looking more at the present and the forthcoming.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A group of people think, studying or going to school or university has a significant effect on achieving success, while others believe that it is better to get a work straight in comparison with continuing a career in university. In my view, education has more impact on getting a position rather than employment straight after school and I will expose it, in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

It is often said that music has many different styles all around the world, and our demand for music is often questioned by many people as well. This author believes that the international music is considered more crucial. In the following essay, the aforementioned statements are about to be debated as well.

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Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is advisable believed certain individuals that protecting from the extinction of rare species does not play an important role in everyday lives.And also,they think that it is just a style of wasting money to recover endangered animal species.In this essay,I totally disagree with this view of point and display the impacts of why I stand on that side.

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