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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Fo many people the reason they work hard is to earn money . to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that in this modern world people work hard and most people believe that to get earn more money is the main reason . I partly agree with the given statement and the reasons for my inclination are articulated in the upcoming paragraph .

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Robotics is necessary for future human development.But it has both advantages and disadvantages.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As the most significant technological discovery, robotics already becomes a foundation of future humanity. more over, the benefit of robotics could be included in several aspects such as living standards, technology and manufacturing evolution. despite this, robotics might also become a disadvantage for future human development. More specifically, overuse of robotics might cause labour deduction in the industry, such as fewer job opportunities in the manufacturing industry, which is eventually caused by over-dependence on robotics.

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Write about the following topic: A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoid stresses. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience?

Staying healthy is often associated with nutritious food, an active lifestyle and calmness. In my nation, citizens need to include organic food in their meals, follow rigorous exercises as well as stay mindful of their overall wellness. There are myriad explanations for health-consciousness among individuals as time is scarce for workaholics and they are more prone to obesity and other health-related issues.

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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop the creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Owing to the burgeoning competition people want to spend time on extracurricular activities. It is believed by some people that creating people need some freedom for new ideas, while they ought to full freedom to show actual painting messages. I completely agree with the statement artist need freedom to develop creative mindset in the subsequent fragments. I will discuss why I agree.

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Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, such as skydiving and rock climbing

It is often argued that extreme sports are very dangerous. That's why some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, such as skydiving and rock climbing. I completely disagree with this opinion and I will explain why in the following lines.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A healthy diet is the most essential element for an individual. Many people believe that a person's health is the responsibility of the government, whereas others say that a person is a core responsible for fitness concerns. This essay agrees with the latter part and would show that despite, government actions can play an important role in a person's health life, nothing is possible without self-determination and discipline.

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Most of the people who were grown poverty or not a huge amounts of money will be more prepared to deal with financial problems and issues rather than group of people which have a luxury life. I hundred percent agree with this statemnt which in this essay will disccuss.

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Some people think that dangerous sport should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose.Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is thought by certain individuals that sporting activities which have danger involved should be abandoned and I also endorse the aforementioned statement while others believe they should have the freedom to make their own choice. Both sides will be discussed in the essay below with relevant examples.

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Some say you should always marry for love, others say that in an uncertain world, it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss bith views and give your opinion.

Marriage is one of the most ceremonies in an human life. Many people held that we should marry to love while, others argue that we should marry for money. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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Some say you should always marry for love, others say that in an uncertain world, it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss bith views and give your opinion.

Marriage it is one of the most ceremony in a human life. Many people held that we should marry for love while, others argue that we should marry for money. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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music can connect people of various cultures, lifestyles, and ages together with its meaningful sounds and lyrics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music plays a significant role for individuals to get rid of some stress. A school of thought suggests that music can connect different traditions and individuals together . This essay will discuss why any other entertainment form can not be attached by the people.

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Stumbling blocks to the development of electric vehicles

Electric vehicles are experiencing a huge boom, and electric vehicles are set to become the future of our transportation. But electric vehicle sales have never been able to achieve significant growth, and despite the global push, electric vehicles will account for only 7.2% of global vehicle sales in 2021. The electric revolution still has a long way to go. This is important because electric vehicles could be the perfect solution to three major problems: energy security, environmental reduction, and industrial upgrading. So individuals and governments must work together to address the stumbling blocks facing electric vehicle development.

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Plastic bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In our modern life the poly bags became as one of the important recourse and solve the surroundigal issues, however the majority of people claim that the carrier bags should be prohibited. From my point of view the second way is more significant and in this essay I will discuss these two viewpoints in a depth.

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Plastic bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In todays modern world, it is undeniable that plastic goods have became one of the major environmental concern to our society, therefore some individuals believe that its necessary to prohibite the plastic bags in order to stop the pollution. Personally, I completely agree with this statement and this essay will argue and provide arguments on this statement.

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Million of people every year move to english speaking countries in order to get better education.should they learn in their own country and migrate should they go there and learn.

In the modern era, the importance of migrating from one nation to another was always debatable many individuals claim that its beneficial to transfer distinct countryside while others reject this notion.This essay will further elaborate my view in favouring the positive impact of transferring to different countries and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Animal habitats have been destroyed, and some animal species have become endangered. WY does this happen? What can be done to protect endangered animals?

By ruining Wildlife habitats animals are prone to serious threats. In my opinion, exploiting too many resources and polluting the environment can associate with this problem. I believe that finding alternative resources and enforcing effective laws can be highly beneficial to remedy this situation.

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There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university?

The number of tertiary students has surged for the past few decades. Some say that this trend contributes to pushing up the average level of education in society, but others say this affects the standard of education. This essay aims to enlighten us regarding the effects of this development.

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Write a 4-paragraph essay of about 200-250 words on the following topic: Many young people spend a lot of time on the Internet without any parental supervision or control. What are some of the problems caused by unrestricted use of the Internet and what can be done to curb these problems?

Over the past two decades, the Internet has taken a huge leap forward. This is very clear when we can see that social networks, video games and e-commerce exchanges are attracting strong interest from individuals, especially young people with a lot of time using the Internet. If they do it without parental control, it can cause many problems for society and children's health.

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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing that leads to increase in cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for that. Agree, Disagree

With modernisation, advanced techniques in the health sector enhance the life expectancy of the population which leads to an increased ageing society. Most countries provide well-being facilities for free through taxes or subsidies. However, some are complaining about a lack of money in comparison to the aged populace which can make their health system unsustainable. I also agree with this notion and there is a need to change the strategies for changing future reality.

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Some people say thhat the only reason for learnig a foreign langua is in order to tavel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In a world full of challenges, it becomes more and more important to learn new languages. Some people believe that this is necessary only for obtaining new opportunities to work or travel abroad, while others hold the view that it is necessary for other reasons. In this essay, I will try to explore both views in more details in addition to showing my own opinion.

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