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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some people still claiming that allowing youngsters to use digital devices such as smartphones or computers may indirectly cause some tremendous effects to them on reading and writing abilities. While there are some drawbacks, some others hold the belief that using digital devices is considered as an effective way for young people to learn by themselves. This essay will discuss both points of view and show my opinion about this phenomenon.

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Nowdays, many people have to work long time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What employers can do to make their life easier?

One of the main controversial issues in today's life is the long working hours for employees which causes stress and worsening condition depression among them. Modernity might have a serious impact on the mentioned issue.there are some suggestions that may help governer or entrepreneurs to reduce working hours and following that solve its consequences.

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Plastics and chemicals are becoming threat to the planet. Discuss its reason and solution.

Over the last few years, problems with plastics and chemicals have become more serious and acute. These are floating in seas across the globe, and were already found in glaciers. This will lead to the total Earth’s pollution and threat to the flora and fauna. This essay will look at the main causes of the problem and propose some solutions.

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With the increased global demand in Oil and Gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued by some that, due to the increased demand for fossil fuels, left-out areas of the world should be explored. Though I agree with this opinion, I also disagree with it. Having said that, I will present both my views and my opinion.

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Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this ?

Nowadays, the crime rate drastically increasing in different modes, typically people personalising opinion that every offence should be punished with according their cruelty. The Investigating officers had done research, across the world after 20 th century people were killing for own needs. There are some advantage and disadvantges will be followed if government take public advise.

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Volunteer work organized by middle school bring more benefits than problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As students are well-rounded developed, volunteer activities have been much accounted by junior high which even as a requirement for graduation. Unpaid work might have some downside, but I believe that there are more advantages for those young participants than disadvantages, as well as the whole of society.

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More and more people today are drinking sugar based drinks. What are the reasons for this ? What are the solutions.

There is no denying the fact that the main impact of unhealthy drinks is debatable. While it is a commonly belief that unhealthy drinks high in sugars may put a negative impact on health. In this essay, I will give the reasons and the solutions to unhealthy drinks.

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Counties with long working days are more successful economically, but there are some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Working hard can make a person financially stable . However , some argue that working for a long time can have some negative impact on individuals and I also agree that engaging in a job for long hours can definitely create some social problems in people . But I also believe that it helps them to fulfil their dreams .

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School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of student than parents. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

To be honest, I can not make a broad generalization out of it, this statement totally depends on the educational system of the country in that someone is living in. I am going to explain to what extent I agree by elaborating on a family basis and school basis style.

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In some countries most people prefer to rent their houses rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a house?

Buying houses is an biggest issue nowadays, they are more expensive . So only renting is the major option for them . In few nations , renting is vastly done by public instead of owing the house . I discuss the pros and cons of renting an houses or appartment.

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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face? Is this a positive or negative development?

Today, our society has a wide list of opportunities to talk online with others while sitting at home. However, some people argue that a face to face conversation could not be substitued by a phone call or a video chat. I think that different types of internet communication is very beneficial, but it is crucial not to forget about socialising in real life.

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With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, the population of our planet is rapidly increasing. On the one hand, growing number of humans means more workforce. On the other hand, this causes lots of other problems, and one of the most serious is how to feed everybody. Some people maintain that GM foods could be a valid solution. Personally, I would agree with that.

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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a variety of sports which are played and introduced to the world. Day by day, people intend to create different types of sports and they can be categorized into two sections single and team. Although, the majority of the games fall into a single type, team games can be shown discipline of a person to achieve something bigger in larger groups. I strongly agree, children should be taught the value of team sports as a foundation of school education.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for a child having a larger number of toys?

Almost all people take a pleasure from getting something to play with in their childhood. Different type and plenty amount of toys are bought to child by certain number of parents . I will write both advantages and disadvantages of owning huge number of playthings .

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All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Human rights have historically proven to be one of the most extreme complexions in the world. However, it is agreed that as contributing members of society, each individual deserves equal access to free education and healthcare, for it guarantees a bright future and fewer futile expenses.

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Large chain stores are taking over the marketplace in many places, making it impossible for small businesses to compete. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

In the modern world, tiny local outlets are disappearing daily because of the domination of the market by giant corporations, such as food or clothing companies, which are challenging to fight against. Generally, although these retail companies can benefit society, their monopolisation may impact the economy.

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Obesity has become bigger and more global problem. What are the causes of this? and what solution can be taken to tackle these problem?

Obesity turned a bigger issue and a global problem. Some of the cuases are fast food and physical inactivity; however, some solutions to adress these problems are re-inforce regulations on yunk food and parental control over their children.

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Public health is becoming an urgent issue now a days. some argue that government should create nutrition ad food choice law to improve public health while others believe that it is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that government should be responsible in public health while others believe it is the sole responsibility of the people because nowadays the people's health is one of the major concern. Although, others believe that government should combat malnutrition in the country, having a good health should be more concerning to the citizens.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects at university in many countries. Why is this? What effects does this have on society?

These days, there are fewer students choosing to undertake a science-based degree at university in many countries around the world. There are several potential reasons for this trend, and a number of possible effects on society.

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SOME PEOPLE FEEL THAT ENTERTAINERS ARE PAID TOO MUCH DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? WHICH OTHER TYPES OF JOB SHOULD BE HIGHLY PAID

There are some who believe that entertainers are getting paid too much money in regards to their job. I think other jobs in the area of education or health should be better paid.

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