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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people consider that the education which is come from school is more important than learning in the family. Other people think the opposite way. Discuss both sides and give examples.

Some people think that the education which comes from schooling is more important than the education which comes from family. Both of them have negative and positive sides and these will be discussed below.

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Before as now, emigration from the countryside to the city continues apace worldwide as people seek a better standard of living. However, life in the big city is often hard on new immigrants. There are several reasons for this as well as solutions for governments to handle them.

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While international tourism offers many advantages a lot of places, it brings about several disastrous effects on both people and environment there. Do the advantages of international touriIsm outweigh the disadvantages?

with the development of traffic technology, passenger' convenience and effectively shorten time have gradually been enhanced so that the rate of international tourism has been increasing at just a few years. there are both merits and demerits to tourism. However, I think that the demerits are more huge than the merits.

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Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too clostly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?

In the past few years, people developed medicine very well. Now is much easier to get high quality treatment. Since prevention is much better and cheaper than treating, a lot of people agree that spending money on researches and cure is unnecessary and it would be better to invest money in preventative measures. I strongly agree with this view, because people can avoid dangerous diseases.

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Some people believe that school children should be made to wear a uniform. Others feel that children should be free to choose their own clothes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The opinion that school children should be made to wear a uniform is based on the belief school administrators hold, who see wearing a uniform as an important way for students to build an identity sense in the school. Furthermore, wearing the uniform can improve students' obedience to school disciplines, which will reduce the cost of management in school. All of these thoughts may be supported by a psychological theory that already is applied in the armies of every country. Thus they may require the students to wear uniforms in school.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract more local people to these museums?

Many museums and historical sites have become an attraction to a large number of tourists, however, they fail to increase the number of local visitors. This essay will analyze some main reasons for this as well as measures to encourage more local people to exhibit.

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Some people feel that young people face more pressures today than in previous generations. Others think that they have a much easier life than their parents did. To what extent do you agree? Give reasons and examples to support your points.

Nowadays, It is true that the social growth is very fast. Young people have to face more stress than their older generation. While there are might be some reasons to support this existence. I am of the opinion that their parents have a much difficulte life than their children.

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Some people believe that school children should be made to wear a uniform. Others feel that children should be free to choose their own clothes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a controversy about whether students should wear a uniform at school. Some people think children should be free to choose their own clothes; some have the opposite opinions. I think the advantages of wearing a uniform outweigh its disadvantages.

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Some people think that male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict, but female leaders are better than male leaders to gives the better governed and more peaceful society. Do you agree or disagree?

fighting and conflict are the most topics to discuss among a number of people that have been created by boss men more than boss women, and they allege females are more suitable choices to manage the organization and reach peace and hope, however, I disagree with this statement that presumes men always run their own work atmosphere to more conflict and struggle, consequently, I will bring a number of pieces of evidence to clarify my opinion.

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International tourist should pay more than the local visitor for cultural and historical attractions? Do you agree or disagree

Today, almost in all countries, foreigners are being asked to pay more than local travellers when they visit tourist attraction spots. There has been a heated debate among an increasing number of people about whether both international and local visitors should be allowed to pay the same amount or pay more. In my humble opinion, I do agree with the idea of asking outsiders more amount of fees than local citizens for some specific reasons.

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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are different views on whether or not foreigners should follow local customs and traditions when they come to reside in a new country. From my point of view, I believe that people should adapt to local customs and traditions in a new country.

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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are different views on whether not foreigners should follow local customs and traditions when they come to reside in a new country. From my point of view, I believe that people should adapt to local customs and traditions in a new country.

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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are different views on whether not not foreigners should follow local customs and traditions when they come to reside in a new country. From my point of view, I believe that people should adapt to local customs and traditions in a new country.

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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are different views on how many people think that foreigners should follow local customs and traditions when they come to reside in a new country. From my point of view, I believe that people should adapt to local customs and traditions in a new country.

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discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home

There is no denying that since the pandemic started, work conditions change all around the world. Many people can be in favour or against working from home. Furthermore, the advantages of working from home have far outweigh the disadvantages, and in this ,essay I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from you own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays children’s agression is one of the most discussion topics. Although the way of moderating conflicts between children is the most popular topic which psychologists discuss. I am agree that people should teach children how not to be toxic in interactions. In this essay I will highlight the possible points why it is better for children avoid aggression.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It is going to be a popular trend that an increasing number of people are attempting to change the way they used to solve their health problems. While these alternations may be meaningless sometimes, I consider this action can be an effective choice when we find that the original doctor didn't help us as we expected. Generally I argue such a phenomenon is a positive development.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Specialists have advised and suggested to parents and the public to give their children opportunities to learn a foreign language at young age ,especially in primary education. This is because they are able to absorb and learn the language faster compares to when they grow up. I perceive this as a positive encouragement and the results why the benefits outweigh the drawbacks will be discussed in this essay.

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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

In the current century, due to the population leap and urbanization, there has been increased in number of waste materials in every part of the world. While a lot of countries adopt recycling methods to reduce environmental impact, there are still many countries that hardly recycle their refuse, but instead, they dumped everything into landfill. This essay will discuss why this might be the case and how to alleviate this problem.

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Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interest in anything else. Other people are most enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interest than their jobs. Discuss both of the attitudes and give your opinion.

In the last years, the rapidly changing modern world such as technology and other events, especially pandemic covid 19 had made creativity have an important role in companies, much is said about how important business innovation is to improve results, especially in today's highly competitive market. But what is it? This word is defined as “the use of skill and imagination to produce something new or to produce art”. (Oxford Learner's Dictionarie.com. n.d. Creativity). This essay focus on factors that impact creativity and its importance on the job.

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