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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many countries are currently witnessing an increase in criminal activities among young people. Discuss reasons for this phenomenon and suggest ways to deal with the problem.

These days, juvenile crimes are rising in various nations. There are many causes behind this. In this essay, the reasons, crime imitation and being unemployment will be examined and I will recommend the solutions.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make decisions on every day choices such as food, clothes, entertainment will result in a society of individuals who think only of themselves, others are of the opinion that decision should be made about issues which affect them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Children are the future of society. Whereas , there are a group of people who believe, that allowing kids to make decisions on individual preferences of daily needs will subsequently , result in a self-centred community structure while , others are of the opinion that decisions should be made, by more well-informed individuals for the sake of greater good. I am in opinion largely in favour of the latter and in my essay, shall discuss both viewpoints with relevant examples.

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The death penalty should be available as a punishment for serious crimes. To what extent do you agree?

Serious crime can bring negative effects on others, it makes some people believe that the death sentence is the answer to reduce it. Yet I don't agree with that statement, because it is against human right. I do believe to make criminals live in a poverty for the rest of their life is the best solution.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case ? Do you think is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, some kids tend to spend most of their time using smart mobile phones. In my opinion, this is happening because of the entertaining media on these devices. From my ,perspective I believe advanced technology could support the kids to fulfil their needs but on the other ,hands it will have negative development in the long term that can affect their behaviour.

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When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that when new buildings are planned the most significant moment is how this structure will be used more than their exterior. I agree that a functional purpose of building is important, but at the same time an exterior also plays a key role.

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In their advertesing, businesses nowadays usally emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It becomes more popular choice among sellers that making promotion mainly based on release date of product. While there is one fundamental reason can be seen on this issue, I think drawbacks do outweight benefits on the result this development.

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28/05/2022: The population of many cities is growing rapidly. What are effects on people living in these city? What can be done to maintain the quality of life of people ?

It is a public concern that there is a dramatic increase in the number of residents settling in urban centers. This issue has several impacts on those living in these cities, and solutions are suggested to improve the quality of life.

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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonel held belief that the government must buy the tutition for education of their citizens. There is no denying the fact that the main role of the government in education is arguable. I strongly believe that the government must provide free learning for students in their entire life. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view and show why I agree with the statement.

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Some People say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that the sole purpose of learning foreign language is for hiring a job at that country, while others deny the fact and point that there are additional valid reasons besides it. However, I believe, despite the importance of foreign language in travelling and working in an outside nation, people should still have to master of it as a part of their skill development.

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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion

It is opined by some people that success is the most significant yardstick to evaluate the intelligence of a person. Nevertheless, there are some people who believe that intellect can be determined by other means. This essay partially agrees with the statement.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In some part of the world, people are getting more curious about the history of the house or their settlements. There are several reasons behind this trend and many research techniques can people follow on this endless journey.

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Some people hesitate between getting a job and starting their own business. While the idea of not having a boss and working on one's own schedule may sound tempting, financial risks and stress sometimes outweigh these advantages”. In your opinion what are the pros and cons of working in a company.

Nowadays some people are not able to take a decision between joining a company or setting up their own business. This essay will examine the pros and cons of working in a company and provide a logical conclusion.

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In many countries, not enough students study science subjects. What are the causes? What will be the effect on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Students who study subject in science are only a few in some countries. In my opinion, this will affect the society because science education is a basic foundation and the factor that can help many aspects to progress for a nation to develop further.

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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher; others think that it depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

People are divided into two groups when they discuss about the educational success. First group believes that teachers shall help learners to get success by making innovative teaching, while the others have a notion that it depends on the ethics of the learners. I stand on a position that both perspectives are fundamental and I will detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say that ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

While some people tend towards the viewpoint that soonly, reading books and news online will overpower paper books and newspapers. I would have to support the idea that even though ebooks have some undeniable benefits, there are still some fascinating factors about owning a collection of books.

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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Truly, education is an integral part of the success of a person, Although some argue that tertiary education should be paid for by the student only, I, ,,however disagree with this view and I awfully believe that it should be free as it will improve our economy and also student can focus on their study very well.

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The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

It is quite common these days for Internet which has provided information easily and immediately to humans through electric devices such as computers and smartphones in over the world. This knowledge was made for no profits. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this trend. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks.

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Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, more and more people think advertising can improve the sales of products that customers do not need. Although this can be true to a certain extent, it is my firm belief that advertising does not have an important effect on the sales of products.

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We should fix the traffic and transportation by making everyone lives in the cities not suburbs or countrysides. What to extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, we are experiencing traffic and transportation problems. It is been argued that these issues are able to sovle by letting everyone live in the cities rather than the countryside or the rural areas. I disagree with this statement, which will be later discussed in the essay.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinio

Some citizens believe that it is preferable to educate females and males in separate schools; however, others argue that there are more advantages from attending co education schools. I believe the last one is a preferable method because this is how a real society works.

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