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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children’s who are taught to comperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give yout personal opinion too.

İt is considered by some people that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children’s who are taught to comperate rather than compete become more useful adults. İn my opinion , a sense of competition in children should be encouraged , and thus children can be more confident in their schools.

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Modern technology has made it possible for many people to work at home most of the time rather than going to an office every day. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working at home? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples

With modern technology employees can work from home, which can save more time than going to an office everyday. There are some advantages and disadvantages of this opinion.

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Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

it is considered by some people that many governments spend a lot of money in art . Because ars is essential for human life . But on the other hand , others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. İn my opinion , many countries struggle with wars and poverty in the world . İf spent money to art will be decreased by governments and this money will spend for these countries and many countries will be rescued .

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Define the term “globalization” and explain the pros and cons of the effects of globalization. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Before the 20th century, people were usually living in restricted areas. Then, transportation and communication became popular with technological developments and the interaction between people increased significantly. Globalization means the increasing integration of all the countries without restrictions on their boundaries. Globalization has both benefits and drawbacks.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

The increasing number of unemployed graduates has caused many problems in society. This situation can have harmful effects therefore, it has to change.

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many people work long hours , leaving very little time for leisure activities. what are the advantages and disadvantages

If you want to be the best in your workplace, have a job promotion or be a reputable employee, you must work hard to achieve these goals; but without rest and recreation, this hard endeavour leads to serious illnesses. The following essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this issue.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parent and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

İt is considered by some people that It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. I completely agree with the opinion . İn my opinion , parents and teachers should execute punishments for their children in a detailed way , and thus punishments can be provided to children for learn the distinction.

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Woman can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many thing that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appropriated as much as men, although they have to sacrifice a lot to their family and career. What do you think?

İt is considered by some people that women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many thing that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appropriated as much as men, although they have to sacrifice a lot to their family and career. I completely agree with the opinion and in my opinion , the job right should be provided to women by governments , or seminars can be given to companies by governments due to inequality among men and women .

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some people spend most of their ives living close to where they were born. what might be the reason for this? what are the advantages and disadvantages?

In today's world, globalisation is a very big trend, and as ,result many choose to live abroad in pursuit of finding new life and experiences around the world. However, some other crowds choose to stay in their home country. In this essay, I will share my opinion of why people choose to stay in their homeland and compare the benefits and downsides of this choice.

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In order to Spend a quality life, some say, people need to have more money and some say people need free time. What do you think is important. What are the other things which are required to have a quality life?

Nowadays, part of individuals says that having more cash to lay out a element of life, however others believe citizens need leisure time. I think both are significant points to spend a better life in todays era and other objects are also required. This essay will analyse the objectives of money and time, as well as other things needed to have a character of life with a reasonable conclusion.

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In order to Spend a quality life, some say, people need to have more money and some say people need free time. What do you think is important. What are the other things which are required to have a quality life?

Nowadays, part of individuals say that having more cash to lay out a quality of life, however other believe citizen need leisure time. I think both are significant point to spend a better life in todays era and other objects are also required. This essay will analysed objectives of money and time as well as other thinks need to have a quality of life with a reasonable conclusion.

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Some people think it is easy to learn a language without the help of a teacher. Do you agree with this opinion? Which method of language learning do people prefer in your country?

There are numerous countries overseas.Individuals speak the insignificant language in the world. Some public are like to learn in another language. They face a lot of difficulties to learn without guidance. I completely disagree with this phenomenon and give my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To What extent do you agree and disagree?

Adolescence is the crucial stage of interpersonal development and learning social skills. During this age, the young brain should be occupied with positive thoughts to be an integral part of the community. Therefore, some people thought that if teenagers serve the community in their spare time without any financial benefits, it will benefit not only the community but teenagers as well. Indeed, I do support the above view and will discuss in detail the significant impact of teenagers’ active participation in community services.

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It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

There are some people that say that travel broadens the mind.

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In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think te advantages of driverless vechicles outweigh the disadvantages.?

These days, it has become a prevalent phenomenon that vehicle manufacturers produce some no driver vehicle and it become commonly, thanks to the advancement of technology under globalization. I believe that the drawbacks of this trend are outweighed by its benefits.

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People who live in large cities face a range problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled.

In this modern era, individuals who moved toward metropolitan cities have to face a number of difficulties. In upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss problems and how to overcome these problems.

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Some people believe that children at school should learn art, others says it is a waste of time. What is your opinion?

There is a discussion about whether art is essential for students or not. Some people consider craft necessary for curriculums, others think it is needless. I totally agree with the former. This essay will discuss both of them and explain the reasons.

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heavy emphasis is placed on testing these days. the need to prepare for tests and examinations is a restriction on teachers and also exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners

There are many examinations in our lives, like working, studying or life exams for ourselves. Especially for teenagers, there are lots of tests and exams when they study. Some people think that not only restricts lecturers and also causing a lot of pressure on students. I think that examinations can allow teachers to know more about their students and what they learn in class. However, it has some stress on young learners.

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Nowadays, celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons of this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, film members are becoming. ore well-known rather than in the past and also they have wealth more than congresspeople behind of this a particular reason are there, in addition, it is a beneficial development.

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology permits the world to become more global. Thus, some people might propose the thought that instead of having an individual government for every country, the world should be controlled by a sole ministry. Although, a single ministry might cause conflicts between different nationales, I believe it will permit an equal economical regulation. Therefore, while acknowledging the disadvantage of a single state, I strongly believe the benefits outweigh the downfalls.

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