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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

The classes based on the Internet have replaced those of colleges year by year. Some people say that classes on the Internet are useful as they do not need to go to college, whereas others believe that learning at university is essential.

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Online courses have been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, other students see these courses as a poor substitute for classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?

Internet is used in all disciplines. Teaching via theinternet is becoming more and more popular, especially in the last two years when coronavirus had spread. Offering an online course is considered a great chance that must not be missed but others find studying the online courses will not be beneficial as much as classroom learning. Studying online courses has many advantages that are in my opinion greater than its disadvantages.

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Full-time university students spend a lot of time studying. Some say they should do other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

University education is a way of imparting knowledge, skills and learning. It is believed some that students who are enrolled full time at the university should participate in extra-curricular activities besides studying, while an academic study is important, other activities are as important. I strongly agree with this statement.

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the percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend

The obesity is getting general issue in present days due to an unhealthy food and an inactive life style replaced by the hanging up on social pages and using smart or cell phones. The number of the overweighted community is going up especially in the western society because of their most exposure to the fast food comparing to other parts of the world. Reasons such as a laiziness to cook a healthy food instead of the purchasing a fast food and doing sport activities lead to negative effects such as a depressed condition or the loss of energy along with the health problems.

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large companies have big budget for marketing and promotion and as a result people graviate towards buying that product

It is true that more and more community are being launched and having good growth in recent years. Because of that, many people think that these organizations need to supply sports and social facilities for the local residential area they are working at. In my perspective, I totally agree with this opinion.

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The advent of internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Write an essay looking at the advantages and disadvantages of this professional arrangements. Share personal examples in your essay

Recently, the world was hit by a pandemic which made us realise that many professionals can work from home instead of going to crowded offices. This trend has both advantages and disadvantages to the workers and Employer.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. What are the advantages and disadvantages

Nowadays, artists earn low salaries for their work therefore they should receive funding from the government in order to continue with their work. Making real art is a long and unique process and makes artwork so expensive.

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y countries have started to give money to unlucky countries to help. Some people argue that rich countries should help in other ways, such as food supplements, and educational ınstruments since fi

With globalization, wealthy society have started to give money to unlucky countries to help. Some people argue that rich people should help in other ways, such as food supplements, and educational ınstruments since financial aid does not completely end poverty. I completely agree that monetary aid should not be the only type.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

there are a lot of old buildings in several countries in which an increasing number of residents find it interesting to become familiar with the history of their houses. different ways could be used for this purpose. people's reasons for this curiosity and those ways will be discussed in this essay.

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Although families have influence on children’s development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Our Forefather says “Evil communication corrupts bad manners” which means what is in close contact with ink will be black, what is near light will be illuminating, and it is precisely correct with children’s influence that the factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives. I agree with the opinion

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Some believe that government should allocate more funding for skills and training courses related to a future career while others say that this money should belong to university level. What is your stance?

In order to satisfy social development demands, human resources need to be invested wisely, so the government should allocate more funding for skills and training courses. I totally agree with this approach.

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that formerly incarcerated people are the most appropriate ones to communicate with youngsters to avoid future delinquencies. I strongly agree with the idea, for it is a direct driving force to become morally better.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, the internet is widely utilized net all around the globe. Although the usage of the internet makes our life easier and more comfortable, they have also had many problematic issues. I think these will mainly cause distraction and health issues in real life, but there are some solutions.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely High salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The unprecedented progress in the earnings sector brings along with some notable notions which are incontrovertible. Among them, whether vastly giant salaries are applicable for the betterment of a nation or not is an undeniable propensity in this con-current age . A bunch of personages assume that this is convenient for society; whereas, others argue that it should be limited by the responsible authority. In this discourse, I will explicate both stances on how it plays a pivotal role in an area and why it should be restricted in some cases, and finally, I will present my consensus by citing examples.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

The invention of newer technologies made communities around the world connect.Along with newer technologies evolved newer social media platforms which allow us to explore and talk to others.In spite of others arguing that this tech world connects younger people and others together, I agree with the point it will have a degradable effect on teenagers.

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Write about the following topic: Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are so many issues in the environment sector which are threatening our daily lives. Among those issues, it includes the extinction of some of the plants and animals species and that our global ecosystem is threatened by man-made pollution and climate change. Although some say that the decrease of plants and animal species is the major issue, I believe that there are more important environmental problems. Providing the environmental problems that we have right now such as pollution and deforestation will show in this essay along with my opinion.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people believe its good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and given your opinion.

Friendship is the most beautiful relation one can have in their life. Many old people used to say that the more friends you have, the longer will be your life. Many believe that it is better to have friends who never disagree with you, but I wholeheartedly disagree. This essay will discuss why people believe to have friends with same opinion and will also highlight the benefits of having friends who sometimes disagree with them.

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In recent times many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negative effects on society?

Nowadays, almost everyone thinks that money is the most important factor in their lives. Money lets people live happily and enjoy their lives. We often spend 8 hours a day or more working and earn a salary. In order to pay daily bills, essentials, or cheer up our ordinary/ mediocre lives with a ticket to the movie theatre, shopping, and traveling. But is money the only reason people pursue happiness? In my point of view, this depends on each person’s opinion.

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News plays an important part of most people's lives. why news so important to people? why is so much news dedicated to bad news? should the news focus on good news instead?

In many people’s life news plays a major role. As the public wanted to keep themselves updated with the information, while bad news is more published in the publications because of the increased crime rate, I believe editors should focus on both good and bad news.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is believed that owning real estate property is more significant than renting. In my opinion, having your own house is essential for survival and must be acknowledged as a positive trend.

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