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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that childhood is the best stage of happiness. While others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary world, the best stage of happiness is experience during childhood. Meanwhile others believe that an individual can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life. In my opinion, I believe that a person can enjoy happiness regardless of what stage. It depends on the how the person defines his happiness.

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These days,a considerable amount of advertising is directed at children.Should it be banned because of the adverse effect?To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern epoch, the trend of the advertisement has increased in world. However, some opine that few ads should be restricted for children.because it has detrimental effect on hair. I discuss both sides in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Many people get little or no exercise either during the working day in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why many working people not get enough exercise? What can done about this problem?

Nowadays, most individuals are lacking of physical activities not only in weekdays but also in weekends and this will lead to various health issues such as obesity, diabetes, high blood pressure and so on. This is happening due to most of the people don’t have enough time to do exercise for themselves. And in this essay, consequences of worrying this trend will be examined .

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the free communities aim to support to pour people or young talent have to be on the mandatory base in high school programmes. I exactly a fun of such movements, first, this activities improve a mental health of person who act it and second people which get a support of course get a great chance for success in life.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people if different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Music has been with humans from long times. It has been helping us in many ways. Most of the people believes that it has very important role bringing different cultures and various ages together. While others says that it's just a form of art and totally disagree with their opposition side. In following paragraph I putting both sides argument as well as my views.

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teelevision is dangerous because it destorus family life and any sence of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Televisions throughout the years have developed and had various versions along the way. The TV most people use today have the most advanced technology, and they can watch almost anything on it with the help of the internet via wifi. In my opinion, having a big screen and not having divided hours to watch with families, causes a rift between everyone.

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People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effects?

Nowadays, people live in a highly informational time where advertising influences people. I believe that advantages of advertising outweigh disadvantages since promotion is a big force in our world. This essay will examine merits and demerits of commercial and give reasonable conclusion.

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In many parts of the world, shopping is no longer a way that people buy things that they need, and it has been developed into a form of entertainment. What are the reasons for this development? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present world, shopping has become a form of enjoyment and self-satisfaction rather than a necessity. There can be several reasons for this change and this essay will explore the reasons for the changes and discuss the positive or negative development associated with it.

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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT PARENTS SHOUL ENCOURAGE THEIR CHILDREN TO TAKE PART IN ORGANIZED GROUP ACTIVITIES IN THEIR FREE TIME. OTHERS SAY THAT IT IS IMPORTANT FOR CHILDREN TO LEARN HOW TO OCCUPY THEMSELVES ON THEIR OWN. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR ON OPINION.

It is often argued that parents should have their offspring partake in organizational activities, while others might propose that children are encouraged to solve problems by themselves. This essay will discuss both these points of view and conclude a logical conclusion.

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The cost of flying as decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

The world has become a global village as travelling cost has reduced drastically over the last 10-20 years. There are certain benefits as well as setbacks. Although import-export among countries has improved their Income and reserves, the increasing number of accidents has become a drawback.

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While it is sometimes believed that alien life that potentially exists on other planets should be contacted, others warn against doing this. Even though alerting aliens to our existence might be asking for trouble, I believe that this is highly unlikely. In my opinion, we should try to contact extraterrestrial forms as they can bring technologies enhancing our life.

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In many countries today young people are forced to get a job which they are not suited to or passionate about. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause?

Nowadays, in a number of nations throughout the world getting an unfavourable job has forced the youth to work which they are not well qualified for or even more passionate. In my opinion, Having these jobs unwillingly is because of income issues and unawareness of self abilities also there are troubles like the disappointment of teenagers and financial costs for employers due to this situation.

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In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people believe that it is more important to protect the country side and not build home there. What is your opinion?

In this contemporary era, demands for accommodations are increasing in many places, especially in cities. While, numerous folks concur that a plenty of land spaces are available in the countryside, to fulfil the house requirements can construct homes in those places. Other people reject this notion due to a plethora of reasons. In my personal view, the latter statement appears to be more rational.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this era, ,usually merchant’s advertisements persist that their services or products are different from the past to some extent. There are several reasons why they do this. In this ,essay I will elaborate on my reasons and will mention its advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, Importing and exporting of goods from the other countries are a simple and important procedure over the last decades. Some people advice that governments should take some efforts to produce most foods in their nation by importing little items from the other country. I fully agree with this phenomenon and the following essay justify the points with relevant examples.

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Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

a generation ago, people were moved easily from one to another place without facing any traffic. However , Major cities are now seeing a massive amount of problem due to the rapid cars increased. This essay will look at the core reasons for this and propose some solid solutions.

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It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages

It is vital for individuals to take risks, whether in their career or personal lives. I think benefits of risky actions outweigh drawbacks. I explain some reasons in the fallowing essay.

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Some people say the mobile phones should be banned in SCHOOLS , to which extent do u agree or disagree?

Mobile phones are becoming a necessity of daily life. Nevertheless It has been argued that cell phones should be forbidden in schools because it has a negative effect on students education. In this essay I will argue why I totally agree that cell phones should be banned in schools.

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Parents should encourage children to spend a list time in studies and more time in physics activities do you agree

In this modern epoch, children are becoming more and more introverted the past. However, some masses proclaim that, parents should give information and encouragement to their offspring to spend their time in outdoor activities rather than doing academic work. I have elaborate concur side in forthcoming paragraphs

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Parents should encourage children to spend a list time in studies and more time in physics activities do you agree

In this modern epoch, some masses proclaim that.parents should give information and encouragement to their offspring to spend their muchness time in do outdoor activities rather then do academic work. I have elaborate concur side in forthcoming paragraphs

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