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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays , there are debates on many problems that are going in the society . There is one controversy on the matter that some individuals in the society are to gay marriages and on other hand few believes that it has bad impact on the society.This essay will discuss more in upcoming subsequent paragraphs and I will partially agree with the given statement.

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Computer are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important?

In today’s education sysytem, the efficiency of computer is debatable and it’s usage is becoming popular day by day. Many people think it is replacing on teachers duty, but still teachers are the inseparable part of educations. In some areas like in theoretical parts computers are more useful whereas teachers have a great role in others area like practical education.

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These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, many families tend to convey their accommodation to another country because of available jobs and vocations there, and they generally have their own kids with them while travelling. Some see that it has to be considered a benefit for them, whereas others think that it makes life more tough and dreadful for them. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree that it is so important and beneficial for them as it does not badly affect their ability to accumulate a new environment.

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The fil is less important from af art and literature.To what extent do you agree?

It is a broad opinion that films are a notch below the most common forms of art and literature such as paintings or books.I strongly disagree.I believe that films have the same artistic value as both writing and drawing.

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Nowadays a lot of buildings, such as offices and schools, are now being built with an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development?

In the modern world, interior design terms are well-discussed topic and citizens perspective have changed about. Moreover, most of buildings have built with an open plan design. In my eyes it would be positive for social communication. This essay will explain two causes and my vision about.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write not less than 250 words.

Studying of second language as become an integral part of education and this as make certain professionals to think that elementary school instead of higher institution is the appropriate level to start learning different languages. This assertion has it own merits and demerits, nevertheless, I think the advantages surpass the drawbacks because there will be easy and fast assimilation of the language,also it will enhanced future career opportunities.

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as rubbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that there are more and more crimes committed by young people and have bad influences on society. To solve this growing problem, an escalating category of people, nowadays, try to seek solutions and some of them think those young criminals should be punished like adults. By contrast, I discern young criminals should be educated and be punished less. In the following essay, my contention will be further scrutinized.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write not less than 250 words.

There are divergent opinions regarding the age a child is supposed to learn non-native language. While some individuals claim that it is essential for them to acquire the knowledge of learning a foreign vernacular at elementary school. However, other people think that it is paramount to learn it at their higher school age. Although, obtaining a foreign dialect in secondary school might be better, I believe that the merits of learning foreign vocabulary in junior high school outweigh its demerits which this essay will buttress in the following paragraphs.

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It is too expensive to look after and repair old buidings.This money should be spent on building modern building instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that it is too costly to maintain historical sites and finances should be allocated to the construction of new buildings rather.I oppose this view because historical site serves as a source of income, and employment and portrays our rich culture.This essay will explain in detail the reasons for my stance in the subsequent paragraphs with examples.

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some people with a good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What are the problems caused by this?

Nowadays settling in other countries becoming increasingly popular. The majority of people with good education qualification and relevant experience are preferring to work overseas. This essay will discuss the main reasons and side effects of working abroad.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, most of the children spend their time on their phones. This essay will discuss the reasons for this tendency and whether it is positive or negative

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Some people believe that for successful education you need a good teacher while others believe that it depends more upon the attitude of the student. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Right now people are divided over whether successful education relies on an excellent teacher or the student's attitude. As far as I am concerned, both factors are equally vital.

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Liveing in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems

A language is a communication tool for humans. Each people in their culture have their language for talking with each other in their area.

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Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

The media shows us images of famous people on a daily basis. Their lifestyle is often depicted as glamorous and enviable, though clearly it is not without its troubles. This essay will discuss the benefits and problems that fame brings.

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in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studied.advantages disadvantages

These days, due to advancement of technologies, machinery and awareness it has become really difficult for a senior secondary student to decide the career in various fields. In some countries, teenagers are motivated to work or travel before starting university studies. In this essay both benefits and drawbacks will be discussed before my opinion is reached.

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Team activities can teach more skills to individual more than other activities ideally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Collective exercise results to a better and positive outcome, regardless of one's status and age. In this, essay I will say that I totally agree with the statement that team work teaches more skills than handling it alone.

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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that getting placed in a job role of their own personal interest is an ideal way. Whether people enjoy a better career life who choose to fallow their dream rather than changing profession frequently is a debatable question. From my point of view, I agree to the former statement because people might not feel guilty at any point, as the career is solely responsible of their own vision and goals.

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You and your classmate just received a poor grade on a major school project. One reason for your grade was that your classmate’s family member got very ill. Your classmate was distracted and didn’t contribute as much as was expected. Explain why you had to do most of the work. Describe how the illness of your partner’s family member affected the project.Say what you hope your professor will do.

I am writing regarding my poor performance on the past project given in class. This was a very unpalatable experience for me. However, I would like to justify the reasons why I failed my paper.

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Deforestation is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes and effects of deforestation?

Forests' demolition is called to be one of the gravest problems in nowadays world. The climate crisis and extinction of animal species are a result caused by endless consumption and urban areas expansion. Hence, in this essay, I will try to discuss why this is the case.

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Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?

Over the last years, our planet has experience a long list of environmental pollution problems that million years will be taken to compensate the resulted consequences. I am certainly on the opinion that human activities for extending their own life and scientific capabilities are the major contributions to these disastres. In this essay, several individual and global solutions will be elucidated.

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