IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 710

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In many countries crime rates among teenagers are higher than among other groups.What are the causes for this problem and what can be done to solve this?

It is undeniable that teenagers tend to commit crimes more than any other age group, and some sort of action to prevent it is required. In my view, the tech trend is causing this problem, and by restricting it and by giving more opportunities for them to interact in person, we can save them from being a criminal.

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It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the Internet. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

The discussion of travelling across the globe is surely one that begs the question of exactly how it can help people explore different traditions. It is often argued by some people that we can explore the most about various cultures from movies, books and the web. This essay will suggest why commuting to different places is of the utmost importance to explore distinct cultures.

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All universities should have an equal number of male and female students in each subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of equality was always debatable and has now become more controversial. Many people claim that it is beneficial while others reject the notion. In my, opinion the position of equality appears to be more rational. I do not agree with this stance because it is not equality. Yet, it is an option of preference and choice. In this, essay we will further elaborate on the positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that climate change has the greatest effect on people’s way of life. Others believe the economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that people's lifestyle has greatly affected by the climate, while other believe that it is the economy of nation that impact human's life the most. In my opinion, climate change is a biggest concern due to their harmful impact on people's health.

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Some people argued that history is of little or no use. Others believe that studying history gives many benefits. Discuss those views and give your own opinion?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over whether it is necessary for people to learn history. While some hold a strong view that studying history can lead to a broad range of great benefits, the opposite makes a statement that history is essentially useless. While the latter is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter.

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Some people think that the best way to get news is through newspaper, while the others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Nowadays it is debatable topic that the importance of newspaper decreasing day by day because of the technologies such as internet, Facebook, Instagram, and, YouTube. But, many pupils believe that the newspaper is the best option to read news from them. In my, opinion i m totally disagree with notion because of the internet plays a vital role in the moder era, in this, essay we will further elaborate on the positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

In many regions of the world, some people believe this is undoubtedly advantageous for reducing crime by setting criminal's life in prison. While others concur that this punishment needs to be alternated by many solutions.

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The marketing strategies used by two companies

Cell phones have become a very important device for people. Apple and Samsung have a lot of fans, so these brands have a high level of competition with each other. But people choose their technology based on what meets their needs. In this essay we will talk about marketing strategies, specifications, customers, and prices.

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Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should therefore be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money.

It is true that many people suffer from financial problems due to being unable to clear a huge amount of loans in recent years. Some people think that banks should tighten the process for large loan approvals. Personally, I disagree with this view.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawback

Study is essential as a human being. As a person, of course most of them wanted to go to the best colleges or universities to gain more knowledge. As the result, most of student choose to study overseas. This essay will elaborate what are the advantages and disadvantages regarding study abroad in the following paragraph.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Whether the advertising is strongly useful to persuade us to buy things or just a normal picture that isn't very important to us. I will present both sides of this issue and conclude by giving my own point of view.

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world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

It is undeniable that population is booming around the globe from the last few decades. Being so, people are buying more and more vehicles for various needs which create unnecessary traffic in the city.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, people living in industrial Era start to think seriously about the environment and the issues which start to appear related to besides how to solve and manage them. People argue on the most environmental problem facing our planet recently. Most of them believes it is the loss of certain types of plants and animal, while others see there is more important issues to handle. This essay will argue both views and reveals how loss of these species is entirely important to solve.

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many people spoil natural beauties like sea ,beaches ,mountains and lakes .do people responsible for that ?what should be done to stop people to spoil natural beauty ?give the reasons and examples for your answer.

Humans have done many bad things without thinking. But the worst thing we did is, exploiting nature. In this essay I am going to share my views about the exploitation of nature.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments can tackle these problems.

There is an ongoing discussion regarding the community's faces in the urban range. Many folks are complaining about the government's management of urbanization. There are various reasons that the public faces but the main problem is traffic and fewer public amenities for children. Both the reason elaborates on in this essay.

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Some people think that men and women have differnt qualities, therefore ,some certain jobs are suitabel for men and some jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people argue that stereotypes of women and men are different ,consequently, some jobs are offered based on gender.I completly disagree with this point of view as gender cannot represent people's qualities and its not the main factor to get a job.

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Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines or other products intended for human use. Others, however, criticize this as animal cruelty. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable fact that the animals cruelty raise in this modern era, because of performing numerous test on the creatures. But the inp of animals was always debatable and has now become more controversial. many people claim that it is used of animals is not consderab and others believe that the new medicine and product such as vaccine, capsule are vital for the illness. The impact of carnal appears to be more rational. In my, opinion i strongly claim that it has terrible effects on the wild animals. In this essay we will further elaborate on the position and negative effects of this trend and This will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Advancement in technology has undergone a drastic change in the education system. Computers are widely used as a source of learning in the field of education. it is considered by Some people are that the computers used for schooling are positive behavior, the other portion of citizens says that it has negative impacts. In my point of view, I believe computers have distributed several successes in humanity's education as its role cannot be replaced. That said, we cannot ignore the negative impacts that it brings along. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and I will provide mu opinion with a logical conclusion.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to the social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer including any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

We live in an era where technology gives us the opportunity to see a person’s life and social condition. A person’s worth is presently valued based on social dignity and material possession rather than the old-fashioned for instance honour, affection, and other things. Despite the truth seeming true, I am disagreeing with the statement because the outdated value and good behaviour still matter and are urgent to be seen.

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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. what are the causes of this problem? How to overcome it?

It is common these days that people struggle to balance their work and daily lives. Although some are lucky enough to get their lives together, other people still find it hard. This essay will discuss the causes and suggest a possible solution.

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