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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their students, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

School is the second place of a child. They learn various crucial things like (manners, how to behave and respect others etcetera) which improve their personality and help them to become a good human beings. Some institutes are very strict towards their dressing code which students has been provided by principles and directors while others are not.

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Social media is a good thing for modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, non-stop upgrading of technology is a good thing for the younger generation such as being easily connected to their families, can minimize the time in answering their assignments and they can also improve their knowledge. I do agree that using social media has a good effect on our generation today.

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Experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primeray schools rather that secondary school the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is known to us that the language barrier is one of the major problems everyone is facing. And learning a foreign language at a very young age, can help us to communicate basically and it is advantageous in the near future if you work abroad or travel. In this essay, we will outweigh the advantages of learning a foreign dialect.

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We live today in an electronic information age. It is easier to be connected by technology yet many people seem to no closer to feeling happy in their lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Even though it is true that people living in the 21st century can easily get in touch with their love ones thanks to the advance development of technology, however, many individuals are still unable to achieve their life statisfaction. In this essay, I will talk about two main reasons why technology is still unable to bring happiness to some people.

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Many people believe that family has greater influence in child life and development as compared to other factors such as friends, tv, music and so on? Do you agree or disagree with the content ?

Most people assume that family has much more influence on the young generation's life and development as compared to other factors such as friends, tv, music and so on. Moreover, they believe that in our modern-day family is the most crucial thing that we have to be influenced. Personally, I agree with the statement that family has greater influence than close friends, music and social media.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantaged?

There is a discussion between specialist which is revolving around the issue of appropriate age for start language learning by youth persons. These days children are encouraged to study at least one non native dialect during taking education in order to reap many benefits in the future. Although there are downsides, this essay argues that the advantages are stronger from beginning absorbing new dialect in primary school, as you can develop your mind and overcome the language barrier.

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Some events like ASEAN Children Festival helps countries understand more about customs and tradition. What extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Events like ASEAN Children Festival 2016 contribute to helping countries understand more about the customs and traditions of others. Even though I agree with the right purpose of these festivals, the time limit is one of the problems holding back big occasions like this.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Accepting a bad situation is not always the best way to address reality. Of course, sometimes it's necessary to look at what are our own belongings and accept them. In my opinion, by the way, there always exists a way to change its own position, and in this essay, I want to declare my reasons for this statement.

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[Diagram - CB 16 test 3] The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The maps compare the current site of Southwest airport with the next year's redevelopment plans. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that this airport will be extended its area to support more gates, while there are many new facilities, including a new transportation system in the airport.

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The ease of international travel and the spread of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, communities can interact together thanks to the technology world that is constantly developing. Some people argue that this interaction offers some advantages for human-being, whereas, others support that it has more drawbacks In my opinion, there are many reasons why international interaction provides several benefits.

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Some people believe women are better leaders than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is argued that, ladies are much better captain or boss than gents. I do not agree with the statement because I believe ladies are more emotional than gents. And gents can take any decision more rationally than ladies.

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These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine,rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent times, the need to take care of one's health is an issue all over the world. Nowadays, it is believed by some that trusting on physicians and medicine to keep people healthy is a better choice than pursuing a healthy lifestyle. It is undoubtedly true, through science of medicine people would have to spend more money, consumed too many medicinal drugs, and wait until they get ill in order to have their health back.

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Some students take one year off between school and university. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, speaking about the gap, which could be roughly 1 year after completing school prior to enrolling in collages, is one of the contemporary controversies regarding advocates believing this idea could be beneficial due to the high levels od experiences and qualifications, which might be acquired during that period and disputers arguing detrimental drawbacks which should not be ignored; take the butterfly effect as most patently obvious example. In this essay, I discuss both views and give my opinion followed by experts’ notions and apposite instances.

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An increasing number of people are changing their careers during the working time What are the causes this trend and is it a positive or negative development

With the advancement in modern technology, many individuals are changing their careers while doing work. In my opinion, there are several reasons to do this, and it is quite beneficial to do so. Both the reasons and my opinion are discussed further.

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Some people spend money on sport and cultural event. Do you think this is good or bad?

Nowadays, investment is a vital criterion for every human being. Some of them believe they should save their money for buying their needs in the future and some accept the fact that some people need to nurture their literacy and help others for cultural growth. In my opinion storing some money for lexicon purposes help our community touch high-level targets like humanity and kindness.

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Some college freshmen find that the courses they choose are not suitable for them. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve the problem?

It has been observed that undergraduates don’t tend to find subjects appropriate for them they select. The main reason for this problem is the poor choice of parents and sometimes the unavailability of their wanted courses. This issue can be addressed by combined counselling of parents and students.

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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

Children are the future of nation. They contributes in the economy and represent their country worldwide but nowadays youth is lacking focus on their studies in institute. There are several causes of this like environment, technological gadgets and not participation in other activities.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There have been many different languages used as society has developed. As a result, I could say that living in a country where we have to speak a foreign language can lead to not only serious social problems, but also practical issues. The following paragraph will discuss this statement with relevant reasons.

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It is said that day-by-day people’s lives are becoming increasingly stressful. What are the reasons behind that? What can be done to solve this problem?

Philosopher said, the purpose of human life is searching for happiness. In this century level of stress of human being is getting increased. This essay will describe what are the causes, and provide a solutions of this notion in the following paragraph.

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employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs personal information, such as their hobbies and inerests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that sometimes managers ask individuals personal questions in the interview, such as their characters, habits and married life. Certain people argue that this information can be beneficial for the company while others disagree with this statement. The impending essay will discuss both views and will elaborate my perspective with a logical conclusion.

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