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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world citie can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cars, used by private individuals, is one of the reasons, why air pollution and congestion swelled dramatically, therefore I argue for the need to make public transport and other environmentally friendly transport easier and more comfortable so that cars wouldn't be an essential part of the urban life anymore. It would result both in a quality of life increase and a better climate situation in general.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Generally, the development and progress of a country are related to different factors. Many governments believe that the most important factor is economic growth. However, many individuals believe that other factors are equally important for a country. In my opinion, economic progress is a complementary and supportive factor for other factors in managing a country.

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Writing task 2 Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with their academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Significant number of people have the notion that students are required to train in practical skills like car repair or bank account management together with their intellectual subjects matter in school. This essay shall strongly endorse this perception and thereafter outline the reason for this occurrence after which a meaningful conclusion shall be made.

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nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep what are problems caused by lack of sleep? what can be done about this lack of sleep?

Have health issues or lack of concentration? Then you might need to get some advice from a medical practitioner, because you may have the symptoms of less sleep. In this essay, I am going to discuss the possible problems that a person can have when having less sleep, and what we can do to overcome the possible causes.

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It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should governments place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Undoubtedly it is true fact that in the cutting-edge era consumption of feed level is increasing day by day towards street foods .

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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

During these days, advertising is becoming popular among the society. Some people believe that some of the advertisements are using the wrong method to promote their products. I also totally agree with this assertion.

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The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten. On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people. On the other hand, some traditional view...

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving older railway lines. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For many people around the world, the preferred method of transportation is high-speed rail. Commuters travelling to and from work rely on safety and efficiency, while tourists appreciate the convenience and novelty that trains provide. Others believe that highways, buses and regular trains should be improved before new, high-speed lines are added.

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Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study in foreign countries. While studying abroad has benefits for many students, it may not be beneficial to all. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or not

In recent years there has been an increase in the number of students studying abroad. Some people argue that studying abroad is not necessarily beneficial. However, I believe that it may be one of the most beneficial experiences a person can have. Therefore, this essay will focus on showing how advantageous such a study is.

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Nowadays, older people whoo need employment have to compete with younger people. What problem does this cause, and what are the solution?

In the cutting-edge era, workforce became a competitive domain which is very hard to get. In the field of workings, older employer have to work with youngster equally. This situation can create some problems including reducing work sprit and this problem can be solved by separating their duty.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Across the globe, famous people are becoming popular for their appearance and prodigality, instead of their talents, which is an inappropriate instance for a growing generation. I completely agree with it and I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result some people believed that non academic subjects such as physical education and cookery should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays young scholars are pressured to be successful academically. Consequently some people are of the opinion that unscholarly courses should be excluded from the school curriculum. I differ to this statement for some reasons which will be discussed in this essay.

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It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people.Do you agree or disagree?

These days, it is being argued that it is more efficient for youngsters to get guidance from individuals who are older than them instead of their peers. However, I totally stand against this idea because of the big differences between generations and the elderly community's old information. In this essay, I will discuss these reasons and try to draw some conclusions.

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more schoolwork. How do you think children should spend their free time?

Schools are like a mirror in society. There are many children of higher calibre and acumen. In school, every child can be motivated and encouraged. Nowadays, people think that children are too much leisure and they should be an endeavour to related on a school work issue. In this essay, the possible reasons behind and measures children make full use of their free time and my views on the following points.

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In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work, and communicate online without any face-to-face contact with other people. Is this a positive or negative development?

Our lifestyle has indeed been changing with the advancement of technology, which converts our face-to-face contact into a virtual online process, where people can do the shopping, finish their work, and communicate without physical contact with other people. It seems to me that this trend has given enormous benefits to society in terms of the environment, time, and convenience.

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why is this? Who benefits more from this, the communities or these young people?

Day by day, the number of volunteers, who are going to poorer countries from the young citizens of rich countries, is increasing. In my opinion, the most important reason for this is the feeling of spiritual satisfaction that comes from helping people.

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Young people have different ideas and attitude when compared with their parents and grandparents.What are the differences?What problems may be caused due to this?

Youth is an energetic and thrilling phase of life.At this tender age, an individual's feelings and behaviours are different from his predecessors.Although it is quite natural to have differences, these can at times be damaging for the younger lot.In this essay, I will analyse changes in the attitude of children compared to their families and their hazards.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In a thriving economic democracy, selecting a country to dedicate is burdensome for a multitude of experts. As a matter of fact, some people assert that skilful workers namely doctors and engineers should contribute to the nation where they did their vocational training course. However, despite the fact that the above statement is quite true to a certain extent, from my perspective, the aforementioned breadwinners should have the freedom in making their own determination in these stipulations.

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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Regarding the topic, buying a house is one of the biggest financial decisions that everyone comes across to it one day and from a social point of view, they rather buy than rent. I will expand on this topic in this essay.

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people have difference visions about shopping online some of them encourage and others says its disadvantage outweigh their advantage, what is your opinion?

"I have had numerous times when I've thought, this isn't meant to be, but the thought of performing in front of a home crowd just made me want to push myself and achieve great things." Fraser entered the competition with a slick routine on the pommel and dismounted to a backing of raucous applause. The judges duly scored him 14.650, 0.300 ahead of Northern Ireland's Rhys McClenaghan, the defending Commonwealth champion on the apparatus. Tulloch, defending champion on the rings from the Gold Coast, extended England's lead with a controlled, confident display that earned a score of 14.700, comfortably eclipsing the rest of the competition. Regini-Moran top-scored in both the parallel bars and floor, with Jarman clear of the rest on the vault. The final word was fittingly left to Fraser, though. He stuck a superb horizontal bar routine on England's final rotation, top-scoring with 14.500. Fraser added: "I've faced so much adversity. Before the high bar, my coach said 'I believe in...

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