IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 804

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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For Many people, the the reason they work hard is to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Money is very important in our lives in the time of age, and many people work their hardest to earn as much of it as they can. I disagree that people should only work for money, I believe that working should be about something bigger than money.

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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while other think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Space study and experiences have become controversial topics these days. Many people advocate that exploring the planet is not essential; however, others believe it is vital for humans’ survival. This essay will discuss both opinions and explain why the advantages of search outweigh the disadvantages according to my opinion.

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It has often been suggested that the reintroduction of capital punishment would deter the ever increasing rate of serious crime. What is your view? Do you think that capital punishment should be reinstated?

It is indeed true that the level of crime has been rising at an alarming rate across the globe. A school of thought suggests that capital punishment will be beneficial to mitigate the number of heinous crimes committed by offenders.This essay will discuss why the crime rate will be reduced through capital punishment.

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some parents that kindergarten is good for their child. While other working parents think that their children are safe and learn more at home with elders of the family. In my opinion, I believe preschool centers enhance child learning skills, while grandparents are also a safe option for kids who are unaware of the bad intentions of strangers. On the one hand, parents want to give the best of everything to their children, they want to see them achieve every milestone on time and because of this they send them to childcare centers. For instance, if carers feel that their kids are behind others or have some exceptional learning qualities then they think they should admit to pre-school to sharpen their abilities. Pre-schools are working hard and providing kids with up-to-date learning activities. They are hiring nice, friendly, and experienced teachers who love their students. On the other hand, working parents who do nine to five jobs feel that it's good for their ...

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Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Purchasing goods online like books,air tickets,and kitchen items are very popular these days.I strongly believe modern technology makes our life easier and more comfortable.I agree with this statement online shopping business growing more and more.In this ,essay I will discuss the advantages as well as the disadvantages of buying goods using the internet.

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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of the nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? should history stand in the way of process?

Recently, the phenomenon of T1 and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that matters of N1 are highly beneficial, such as issue is regarded thoroughly as both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I highly believe that N2 can be a plus and I will investigate that throughout this essay.

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or A negative development?

nowadays many children have filled their times on smartphones. it can be considerate as a common activity in modern world as people's lifestyle has changed in different aspects. whether this hobby is positive or negative development will be discussed in this essay.

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Some cities create extra housing by building tall buildings. Other cities do this by building on wide areas of land. which do you think is the best solution for this problem of housing?

Housing for people in cities has been a topic of debate in many countries. Although people prefer to stay in independent houses, it will become an obsolete thing in the future because of the limited availability of land. Many activists have suggested accommodating these people in tall buildings rather than creating wide areas for housing by cutting down trees. I support the latter statement and believe it to be a better solution for this problem.

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In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

In this essay will be discussed the statement that the non-stop broadcast of sports on television dismotivates /demotivates the new generation to participate in playing themselves and at the end, I will add my personal view on the topic that is the opposite.

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The leaders of most organizations tend to be older people. However, some argue that younger people make better bosses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, while most of the bosses in organizations are senior members, it is argued that young leaders will manage organizations well. I partly agree with this statement because I think that organizations must have both young and old leaders.

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it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

accepting risks in different aspects of life including professional and private, has been the subject of debate in recent years. While there are drawbacks to taking risks, I personally believe that it can promote individuals’ status and bring more consent in their lives.

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Some people think that the government should provide funding for arts. Others, however, believe that the money should be spent on public health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People are divided on government financing arts. Some people believe the government should finance the arts, but others think that the money would be better spent on healthcare and education. I personally believe that the government must give at least some funding to art.

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Fo many people the reason they work hard is to earn money . to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that in this modern world people work hard and most people believe that to get earn more money is the main reason . I partly agree with the given statement and the reasons for my inclination are articulated in the upcoming paragraph .

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Robotics is necessary for future human development.But it has both advantages and disadvantages.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As the most significant technological discovery, robotics already becomes a foundation of future humanity. more over, the benefit of robotics could be included in several aspects such as living standards, technology and manufacturing evolution. despite this, robotics might also become a disadvantage for future human development. More specifically, overuse of robotics might cause labour deduction in the industry, such as fewer job opportunities in the manufacturing industry, which is eventually caused by over-dependence on robotics.

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoid stresses. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience?

Staying healthy is often associated with nutritious food, an active lifestyle and calmness. In my nation, citizens need to include organic food in their meals, follow rigorous exercises as well as stay mindful of their overall wellness. There are myriad explanations for health-consciousness among individuals as time is scarce for workaholics and they are more prone to obesity and other health-related issues.

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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop the creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Owing to the burgeoning competition people want to spend time on extracurricular activities. It is believed by some people that creating people need some freedom for new ideas, while they ought to full freedom to show actual painting messages. I completely agree with the statement artist need freedom to develop creative mindset in the subsequent fragments. I will discuss why I agree.

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Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, such as skydiving and rock climbing

It is often argued that extreme sports are very dangerous. That's why some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, such as skydiving and rock climbing. I completely disagree with this opinion and I will explain why in the following lines.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A healthy diet is the most essential element for an individual. Many people believe that a person's health is the responsibility of the government, whereas others say that a person is a core responsible for fitness concerns. This essay agrees with the latter part and would show that despite, government actions can play an important role in a person's health life, nothing is possible without self-determination and discipline.

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Most of the people who were grown poverty or not a huge amounts of money will be more prepared to deal with financial problems and issues rather than group of people which have a luxury life. I hundred percent agree with this statemnt which in this essay will disccuss.

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Some people think that dangerous sport should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose.Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is thought by certain individuals that sporting activities which have danger involved should be abandoned and I also endorse the aforementioned statement while others believe they should have the freedom to make their own choice. Both sides will be discussed in the essay below with relevant examples.

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