IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 804

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Ethical virtues play an essential role for humans. Some people insist that parents are obliged to teach their children to how to set a good example in the community, whereas others postulate that school is the right platform to impart the basics of living in a civilized way. Although both these views are justifiable, I believe both have an equal emphasis on educating children.

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Some People think that exercice is the Key to health, white others feel that having a balanced diet is more imrortant. Discuss both sides an give your opinion

it us true that exrcice is the key to health but mean while some people feel that having a balanced diet is more important . As per my opinion both are equally important in our daily life .

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For many young people today, shopping is their favourite free time activity. Why do you think this has happened? Should young people be encouraged to do diﬀerent activities in their free time?

As societies continue to approach to the excessive consumerism more and more, younger generation are choosing activities like shopping as a passtime and leisure in their free time. This growing trend I believe is due to promoting bad consumption patterns that is frequently preached to the population around the world, through social media, movies, celebrities etc. which would bear more benefit to the business owners of huge international companies.

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

Today's reality is today's function in this technologically advanced age. The developing pace of technology is implausible. It is anticipated that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. They will largely be beneficial and used in the field of medicine and to accomplish household chores proving to be an absolutely promising development.

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In some countries, some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying their own homes. Doe renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place?

People have different forms of accomodation in various parts of the world. Some people might rent an apartment while others might have their own. This essay describes renting an apartment can be beneficial in short term stay. While, also highlighting it can be costly in a long term perspective and can cause stress from dealing with the house owners. While acknowledging the advantages of leasing accomodation, this essay will argue that the disadvantages outweighs the advantages.

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Some people think employers should not care about the way their employees dress, but the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different views about if employees are supposed to focus on dress codes rather than their work. while I agree that the way people dress should be seen as irrelevant in many work contexts, it is necessary to wear the appropriate dress in certain professions.

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Some people think that children's free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time. What is your opinion?

Younger generation have many options to do on their free time. It is suggested that children should spend their break with informative activities that will enable them to learn something, otherwise, time is wasted. In my view, a child should be given the freedom to choose what kind of play they want to in order to achieve maximum enjoyment and also, for them to develop skills and talents that they are interested to.

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A government's role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure, such as roads, water and power. All other services, such as education, health and social security, should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the increasingly awareness of person rights, some people think that the government should help people who do not have a little level of rudimentary lives like eating, taking shower, or sleeping. so people insist that the government should supply the essential and fundamental services, while others believe that the government always have to concentrate to defence cability and civil infrastructure like streets, water and power. But I agree with former view as I believe that the person beings is the countries's assets.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Everyone has the right to freedom of choice. Some individuals assume all tertiary institution learners should study whatever they wish. Others think that they should be granted courses that will be of importance to them in their later life, such as field and computer technology. This essay will discuss both notions and state my pragmatic opinion on why students should be allowed to study their subject of interest

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, many countries are building large shopping centers to cater the needs of the people, this is considered as a move to prove the nations socio-economic imrpovements. However, others think that this development will lead to closure of small businesses and later on leave the community members suffering. I stronly agree that the bankruptcy of small, local entrepreneurs do have a negative great impact not only in people's financial status, but also, losing local tradition.

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Now technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages .

In this contemporary era, technology has increased at an alarming rate . A number of new technologies have changed the way of style children spend their speare time. In my prespective, it had merits outweigh the demerits.

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? *ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY ASSIGNMENT Some people argue that children recreation parks should give way to the development of shopping mall complex in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times infrastructures in the metropolis are advancing more rapidly, especially with the construction of shopping centres, Currently some individual believes that children's leisure parks should be turned into the building of more shopping plazas in urban areas.

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Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The industrial revolution has brought human beings substantial troubles, such as greenhouse effects, cancers and air pollution. Some say we can solve these urgent problems only through global corporations. However, I tend to think this is just a solution and we also have other possibilities.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is controversial whether social media have a detrimental impact on the youth and their formation of relationships personally or it makes people closer in the flourishing aspect, I think it harmed them in three aspects.

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Many people think that food companies should not be allowed to advertise, while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?

The food business is immensely popular among businessmen. While proponents hold the view of prohibit publishing any kind of advertisements, opponents hold a diverse stance. However, I am of the believes that all kinds of advertisements have to be rechecked by the authorities. My contention will be further explained.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.

It is vivid perspective that the more technology enhance, the more vehicles such as privet cars or even public transportation move to automation. This issue have numerous merits but seeing this phenomenon from another side may have demerits. I subscribe to the notion that the proses are far from cons.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicales will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicales outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern era, as technology is boosting, consequently, means of transportation will also change their mode. In the coming decades, all kinds of vehicles will be driven mechanically rather than manually. Without any drivers, people will commute from one place to another desired destination. In my opinion, disadvantages are prevailing instead of advantages. In a further essay, besides some of the advantages, how the disadvantages are more, will be discussed.

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In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It is not enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison. To what extent do you agree?

There exists a school of thought whether arresting law violators and increasing police control on the roads is not a productive way to minimize the crime rates, whereas addressing the key sources - poor educational and social standards are the way to go and I agree.

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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree?

There exists a school of thought whether countries should concentrate to help their local citizens as it is impossible to assist worldwide entire population. I am inclined to believe that developing countries have no proper finances to help out other citizens, whereas powerful countries should invest in that direction.

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Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

By advancements on technology our world has changed significantly. There are several viewpoints for and against this change whether it is beneficial or not. While some people believe new technology can be advantageous in term of bringing people closer and disadvantageous in term of vanishing different cultures, I do not agree with them.

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