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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that the most way that to bring people of different nationalities and generations together. I am totaly agree with the idea because , in my opinion, there is music all over the world although it is in every language and emotion. There are important reasons for gathering people of different cultures and ages together thanks to music.

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Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of town and cities than to build more housing . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The environment is an integral part of the human race,hence it is high time to save it. It is argued that it is vital to plant trees in open spaces in urban regions instead of constructing residential units. I completely agree with the statement with the fact that it reduces global warming and depleted the pollution around us.

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Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is generally believed that maintaining a zoo hardly implies any benefit. Conversely, certain masses state that zoos have numerous advantages. However, in my opinion, a zoo is essential to educate children about various wildlife creatures.

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Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think it is negative for children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the current era, many advertisements are dedicated to the young audience. While some people think that these commercials should be banned for having a negative impact on children, others don't share the same opinion. This essay will discuss in the following paragraphs the arguments on why I definitely agree with the fact that these advertisements cause harm to the youth and should be restricted.

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There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?

It is often considered that urban cities found to have more noise pollution, mostly in social places. In my, the inclination towards noise in crowded places are soaring to the next level which is harmful to the environment. This essay further elaborates my view and thus leads to a logical conclusion.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading and writing skills are decreasing in these days. Some people think it is because of increasing use of computers and mobile phones. I strongly agree with this opinion.

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In spite of advance mode in agriculture, many people around the world, still go hungry. What is the cause of this? What can be done to solve the problem?

Despite advanced technologies which were developed in the last century in the agriculture field, many people suffer and die because of starvation. This is considered to be a major humanitarian issue, especially in poor countries for many years. This essay will discuss the problem, reasons behind it and how to solve it.

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Many people join distance‐learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

When the pandemic COVID 19 outburst, this condition sped up vast internet users leading to the introduction of a huge number of distance-learning programs by well know universities and colleges. A lot of people see this opportunity to strive for knowledge and occupy themselves by enrolling the online learning programs and studying at home. However, there are groups of people who oppose their view in this statement that distance learning is unable to fully bring out the same advantages as attending universities or colleges does, which I do agree with.

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Essay topics: The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

Although marketing of a product is a important task, that helps in increasing the sales of the product. However, some of these campaign's are immoral and breaks the normal boundaries of the society. I partially agree with the statement.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A quite large number of states are of the view that economic prosperity is their very significant target to achieve, however some people generally, have the opinion that other aspects of progress are similarly vital for a nation. In my opinion, both views are equally crucial because, economic progress creates conducive environment for citizens where as other progress such as quality education system could be of benefit to the citizens, as it will now be discussed in this essay.

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Some people think in order to continually improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others feel that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nobody would dispute the fact that the responsibilities and duties of a teacher is extremely important and impactful to students. I hold the view that school pupils should be encouraged to evaluate and criticise their tutors periodically, however, many people disagree with this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give reasons for my opinions.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who desided to do this.

Many young people around the world take a year off between finishing high school and beginning university to travel or to work. Although this can have many advantages like gaining real-life experience, it can also mean falling a year behind academically. In this essay, will discuss what I consider to be the benefits and drawbacks of taking a gap year.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Is experimenting on animals good or bad? It is an often controversially debated topic that animal testing is justifiable or not. I however believe that experimenting on living beings is not the answer to experimentations on medical drugs.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, although the agricultural industry has developed Significantly, there are lots of people who suffer from a lack of food. There are several reasons for this problem and various measures can be taken by governments and farmers to address mentioned issue. In this essay, the reasons for the problem and some possible solutions will be analysed.

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International sporting events promote peace between countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that sports games such as Olympics, FIFA and Universiades help to establish peace among countries. Personally, I agree with this statement.

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It is more important to earn a lot of money than to have a satisfying job. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe earning a lot of money is more important than being keen on your job, while others debate that happiness depends on enjoying what you do for a living. I think that your job should be pleasant for you, no matter how much you earn.

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Nowadays on-line shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Mr Adam White is being referred to your care. He will be undergoing a colonoscopy next week as scheduled and will be requiring your expertise and health teachings.

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Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime . Many people think that having more police on streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree?

To Begin with, smuggling and snatching have a very inferior effect on everyone’s life all over the World, due to these activities population are not feeling safe living in their own country. Many people believe that having more police on the roads can be the only solution to decrease crime in some countries. From my point of view, this can be the solution to some extent.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Job satisfaction is one of the most priliminary factor for a happy professional carrier for adults. Many factors are considered to have a satisfied job. In most of the cases people work in a irrelevent job may be due to the family pressure or compulsive requirement they may not have job satisfaction in reality. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for doing such compulsive jobs wih out interest.

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It is very clear that English should be the primary foreign language taught in all schools around the world. Learning a different language before English is, in today’s world, a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

English is obviously one of the most widespread languages on Earth. Despite that fact, I completely disagree with the idea, that English should be seen as the only option for a primary foreign language.

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