IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 808

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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women and men are commonly seen as having defferent strenghts and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of thier gender? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Males and females are presumed to have varying levels of strength and weakness.This has made some people argue that the profession should be sex-bias.In my opinion,I think that individuals should be given the opportunity to practice any vocation irrespective of their gender.

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Some people believe that the restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The community is developing and getting bigger which is why the demand for new buildings has grown due to this fact it is widely believed that instead of the expensive cost of restoration it would be better to build new facilities. Personally, I agree with this opinion.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Several individuals expand most of their life alive near to where they were born. What might be the couse for this? What are the advantageousness and downsaid?

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Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?

Technology has come such a long way nowadays that people can make use of their mobile phone to answer work or personal calls at any time. Although there are some negative consequences of this development on individuals and society, I believe that they are outweighed by the positive effects.

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Nowadays, people prefer buying new items rather than repairing the damaged ones. What are the causes of this change ? what are its effects?

Тhe given bar chart presents us the number of children attending different spheres of sport such as tennis, badminton, cycling, swimming, football and hockey. The difference in attendance is shown between girls and boys in an English town in 2012.

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Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to universities while others think that it depends on other factor.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the tactics to become successful. While some claim that the sole approach to gain high achievements is to get access to colleges, others make a statement that fruitfulness is greatly reliant on various elements.While each has its own perks , I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give the reason and relevant examples.

It is a no-brainer that, sports are crucial part of our lives and is a interesting way to stay fit and active, but there are numerous sports in the world, which are hazardous to human beings and I strongly agree with the former statement that dangerous sports should be banned. Thus, the reasons behind the aforementioned statement, will be further explained.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that the most way that to bring people of different nationalities and generations together. I am totaly agree with the idea because , in my opinion, there is music all over the world although it is in every language and emotion. There are important reasons for gathering people of different cultures and ages together thanks to music.

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Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of town and cities than to build more housing . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The environment is an integral part of the human race,hence it is high time to save it. It is argued that it is vital to plant trees in open spaces in urban regions instead of constructing residential units. I completely agree with the statement with the fact that it reduces global warming and depleted the pollution around us.

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Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is generally believed that maintaining a zoo hardly implies any benefit. Conversely, certain masses state that zoos have numerous advantages. However, in my opinion, a zoo is essential to educate children about various wildlife creatures.

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Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think it is negative for children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the current era, many advertisements are dedicated to the young audience. While some people think that these commercials should be banned for having a negative impact on children, others don't share the same opinion. This essay will discuss in the following paragraphs the arguments on why I definitely agree with the fact that these advertisements cause harm to the youth and should be restricted.

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There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?

It is often considered that urban cities found to have more noise pollution, mostly in social places. In my, the inclination towards noise in crowded places are soaring to the next level which is harmful to the environment. This essay further elaborates my view and thus leads to a logical conclusion.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading and writing skills are decreasing in these days. Some people think it is because of increasing use of computers and mobile phones. I strongly agree with this opinion.

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In spite of advance mode in agriculture, many people around the world, still go hungry. What is the cause of this? What can be done to solve the problem?

Despite advanced technologies which were developed in the last century in the agriculture field, many people suffer and die because of starvation. This is considered to be a major humanitarian issue, especially in poor countries for many years. This essay will discuss the problem, reasons behind it and how to solve it.

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Many people join distance‐learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

When the pandemic COVID 19 outburst, this condition sped up vast internet users leading to the introduction of a huge number of distance-learning programs by well know universities and colleges. A lot of people see this opportunity to strive for knowledge and occupy themselves by enrolling the online learning programs and studying at home. However, there are groups of people who oppose their view in this statement that distance learning is unable to fully bring out the same advantages as attending universities or colleges does, which I do agree with.

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Essay topics: The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

Although marketing of a product is a important task, that helps in increasing the sales of the product. However, some of these campaign's are immoral and breaks the normal boundaries of the society. I partially agree with the statement.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A quite large number of states are of the view that economic prosperity is their very significant target to achieve, however some people generally, have the opinion that other aspects of progress are similarly vital for a nation. In my opinion, both views are equally crucial because, economic progress creates conducive environment for citizens where as other progress such as quality education system could be of benefit to the citizens, as it will now be discussed in this essay.

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Some people think in order to continually improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others feel that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nobody would dispute the fact that the responsibilities and duties of a teacher is extremely important and impactful to students. I hold the view that school pupils should be encouraged to evaluate and criticise their tutors periodically, however, many people disagree with this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give reasons for my opinions.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who desided to do this.

Many young people around the world take a year off between finishing high school and beginning university to travel or to work. Although this can have many advantages like gaining real-life experience, it can also mean falling a year behind academically. In this essay, will discuss what I consider to be the benefits and drawbacks of taking a gap year.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Is experimenting on animals good or bad? It is an often controversially debated topic that animal testing is justifiable or not. I however believe that experimenting on living beings is not the answer to experimentations on medical drugs.

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