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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity.some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.ato what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are many artists who want to have the freedom for expressing their opinion. I agree with this topic and artists should have their own media for sending their idea throughout the world.

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Some people believe that the radio is the best way to get news, while others believe that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals argue that radio is the good way to get news,while their are some other people who believe that that tv is better for news.in my opinion tv is much better way for all the things.

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Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Space exploration offers us the chance to learn a great deal of new things. However, as it costs an exorbitant amount, we need to decide the best way to allocate our resources. I would argue that there are more pressing problems that need addressing but that there may be other ways for us to continue funding space exploration.

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In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

It is true that an increasing number of people are keen on researching their family history. There are many reasons which lead to this trend. In my opinion, this is definitely a positive trend.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Visiting the enigmatic remote areas was a permanent dream for humanity during the history of mankind. Nowadays we have this remarkable opportunity to complete that goal, nevertheless, the process has its own pros and contras.

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Parents nowadays delay childbirth.Does it advantages overweight the disadvantages gives your opinion.

In today's world, childbirth is delayed by parents. Although growing a child is one of the most enjoyable processes, the increasing costs of living, such as inflation has been a significant problem during last two decades and almost every family tries to minimize the birth rates. To my mind, advantages of not giving birth has more pros than its cons in this era.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the present age, whether attending university provides more benefits than getting a job without a degree has sparked much debate. Some people assert that going to college is the only right thing to do for your future, whereas many others argue that a degree in not that crucial. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view.

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Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary workers. Employer’s organization say that in a global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent. What are your views? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Talent acquisition and retention are most difficult for a company, if you have a talented worker then it is a gem. If the top-level employee has some unique talent, then the company appreciate the work and gives monetary rewards. This type of worker should be required to achieve the employer's vision and goals so they do not have taken to many parts in day-to-day work.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Recently, across many countries, crime novels and TV crime dramas are getting popularity. I would like to find out why these books and TV shows are becoming popular and describe my opinion about them.

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Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

No doubt that many countries have been planning to set up new renewable energy stations in order to overcome the crisis of high increasingly prices of oil and gas besides the fact that oil has been a political weapon used by some countries to put pressure on other economies

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Many people believe that, it is more comfortable to live in the big urbanized cities. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that people prefer to live in the huge cities for its more affluent features. I completely with this view and think that living in the well-urbanized cities is much more beneficial and convenient for people’s life.

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world history suggests that violence and conflicts were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So ,for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership. To what extent you agree or disagree ?

It is argued that it is better to own a home, than rent it. I am strongly in favour of owning a home, for the many reasons: safety, comfort and price.

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As computers and technology develop, they can be used to teach children and teachers won’t be necessary soon. Do you agree or disagree?

Students nowadays would rather prefer learning through a computer than attending a class at their institute. Because of the technological advancement, it is portrayed that the importance of instructors has decreased and is predicted to become something optional for children's education. This essay agrees with the part about the fall of teacher's involvement but disagrees that it will reach the point where they are no longer needed.

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Many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe grandparents can take care of their children, while others think t=childcare centres are better. discuss both views and give your opinion?

In the contemporary epoch, the number of working parents has increased dramatically. Because of this, they find it difficult to look after their children. Nonetheless, it is generally opinionated that it can be more advantageous for them if the grandparents take care of their child. Others believe it would be better to join the children in care centres. In this ,essay I would debate both notions and I would shed light on numerous reasons to support my stance.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals prefer to do job in the same company throughout their life. While the other believes that if they work for various firms then they will have great interest in working. This essay will discuss both sides of views and then I will give my own perspective.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

A number of individuals consider the most concerning trouble is the extinction of endangered animals and plants, while others disagree and there are a lot of environmental issues that we should concern about more. Since the industrial revolution began, humans was focused more on their materialistic growth rather than on nature. As a result of this, habitat loss was exacerbated severely. Now we will discuss why certain species of vegetation and animals are becoming extinct or other changes of nature are essential to give attention to.

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Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All leveld of education, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

One of the elements that affects quality of life the most is education. Studying more increases your knowledge. This is a fundamental right that every person in every nation should have from the moment of their birth. Some governments, nevertheless, continue to ignore this, which makes it difficult for their citizens to pursue an education. In my inspection, I concur that just studying should be available to their citizens at all levels; after that, I will elaborate.

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In some countries it is illegal to refuse people applying for jobs because of their age. Is it a positive or a negative development, in your opinion?

Nowadays , the aged persons rejected from many jobs because of their age peoblems . Therefore , in some states less job oppurtunities for older nation are considered a crime .it affect positively and negatively on a nation economy .I will partially agreed with this statement .

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Nowadays young people watch too much violent programs and are exposed to a great deal of negative news. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

On the one hand, people have an opinion that these kinds of shows could have a negative impact on society. Firstly, TV serials, movies, shows, etc. of such nature might create a wrong image of the people around them. This will create some discomfort among them while helping the genuine person and thus, it will create a sceptical mind of the youth toward others. For example, a stage show represents an actual situation in which a beggar robbed a person who was donating some money to him. Therefore, this creates a negative mindset of the audience toward all the beggars and results in which no one will trust social services. Therefore, shows with such a background might have some sort of adverse impact on the youth.

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There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The reason of people staying in a workspace has many contributing factors out of which money is one of the most significant reasons. Money served as the payment of goods and it leads to better standard of life. Therefore, I agree that money is the mainly reason for people to sustain productivities in work place.

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