IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 802

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from healthy problem as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

It is a global phenomenon with increasing problems arising from health issues due to the unhealthy foods that are present in the economy. Most countries have a growing number of communities that are having health issues from consuming too much fast food. Consequently is indeed a need for governments to apply a higher tax on this kind of food. I totally agree on this matter.

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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are controversial opinions that children who commit crimes are worth being punished, whereas some advocates suppose that the people who should be punished are parents. In my respective, I partly agree with the first opinion because without punishment every time kids make things wrong, it will result in consequences for their growth.

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with growing population in cities , more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it positive or negative development.

In this contemporary era, population in urban cities have increased at an alarming rate. A lot of people like to live in a house with small or no outdoor areas. This essay will deliberate the positive to live in a small house without outdoor areas, but also negative development in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some schools require their students to wear uniforms because they believe it helps the students focus on their schoolwork rather than on their clothes. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Schools in many different areas believe that wearing uniforms to school is a helpful way to better concentrate in school. Thus, they request students to wear them everyday helping them shift their attention onto more important topics. Although uniforms have their positives, allowing people to save time and study more, I believe that overall, not wearing them can be more beneficial for the students. This essay will discuss beneficial points to uniforms as well as topics that support my idea.

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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that nowadays, an increasing number of people are inclined to live solely in comparison to the past. From my perspective, it can have both positive and negative effects in equal measure.

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With the rise of e-books comes the decline of paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In today’s world, technology has a foot place in everything which one of the major one is changing the old school paper books to digital form in electronic devices wich some people believe, it is a revolution in reading history, while others not. This essay discuss how this thechnology can have postive points but, in the meantime it has some abysmal affects too.

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Many young people presently know more about international celebrities than famous people from their history. Waht are the causes. Give solutions to increade awarness of impactful people in history.

In current times ,youth very well know about the international stars ,whereas they do not know much about once renowned people of their own country. Social media plays an important role in the former. In this essay I will discuss the reasons and solutions.

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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this period of technology internet can be accessed from anywhere and anyone can post any kind of news, which could be fake or based on assumptions. I partially agree that news published on internet is fake as it can be verified from another resources .With this notion and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraph with a suitable conclusion.

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People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled?

It is no doubt true that the majority of people prefer to move to urban cities for better life and jobs. Although mega policies are very attractive places to live, and they provide a wide range of different work and leisure opportunities, there are also a host of significant social problems affecting cities.

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Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

In these days, it is common to find the difficulty of focusing at school of several students. This cause by student using mobilephone in class. To solve this problem school should enforce strict regulation to limt the use of hand sets in the classroom.

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Some people think that there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary Era, advertising is the only way to promote anything.It is often believed by large section of the society that there should be complete ban on these kind of stuff. I totally disagrees with this statement. Without advertisements customer cannot able to know about the quality of product. The main supportive ideas of this statement will be discussed in upcoming paragraph

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Today many buildings such as offices and schools have an open-plan design (no walls between areas for different activities) instead of separate rooms. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the floor plans of the construction are designed to open like in office places, there are no partition walls in between. I will be discussing, why is this done and if are there any advantages or disadvantages .

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Some people think that they shouldn't be obligated to get vaccinated. Others believe that we must stop this epidemic by collaborating together. To what extent do you agree with which party.

The opening statement explains that some people believe that they shouldn't be Forced to get vaccinated. Others Come to terms that we must stop this epidemic by Working together.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A large number of governments believe that their economic progress must be a priority, while some people think that development in other fields is equally important. I agree with the second statement and I will explain my reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.Firstly, nowadays, the economy of a country plays a significant role in improving the conditions

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is thought that in the future the majority of readers would just prefer the e- copies over the hard copies because of the free access. I entirely disagree with this notion for several reasons as will be illustrated in the following paragraphs.

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Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Museums and art galleries fundamentally showcase noteworthy histories and creations to the universal audience both to teach them and to preserve artefacts. Though some people support an international assortment in such vital places, I decisively believe that local works and national history should always get the uppermost precedence. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss both views and give reasons to support my point of view.

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Some people believe that reading the newspaper is the best way to learn about news, while others believe that the more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The newspaper will remain to be an important source of people’s news consumption, even though other media may get the upper hand. Many predict that the print’s days are numbered due to strong competition from television, radio and the Internet. In terms of popularity, newspaper is statistically down but is not emotionally out.

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In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world developed rapidly through the telecommunication and air travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays , telecommunication and transportation by air are increasing dramatically rather than in the past , which is vital for today so this essay illustrates the reason for the above statement.

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompained by pictures. some people say that these picture are more effective than words. what is your opinion about this?.

Nowadays, images are used more in news article and newspaper for better explaination. It is a fact that, pictures say thousands words, without writing single text, so that some people believe that, these have more impact on readers rather that words. I extremely agree with this statement. Photograps are best means of communication with readers and easy to remember for long time.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insect as a food source. However, some people believe that insect are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drowbacks of eating insects?

Nowadays, as well known, our planet has a constantly growing population. Due to this, countries should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that harvesting insects can negatively affect nature. So, from my point of view, It benefits both society and the environment positively.

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