IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 810

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Do you agree or disagree?

• The majority of individuals think that, educators can improve the quality of education, however our becoming a political person depends more on our parents. This essay agrees that the one of the best teachers are our parents in our life. First of all, our parents are the people who educate us from the time we are born until we go to school.

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Write a 250-word essay for the topic: The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in everyday life. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that face-to-face communication is being replaced by using many social media platforms social media. Such as Facebook and Twitter. Although this tendency has several advantages, its drawbacks are far more significant. The drawback may be far more significant.

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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Nowadays, the vast majority of people in some countries have had obesity without knowing its consequences, while their health condition and fitness are declining. The prime causes for this vary, and the problem should be taken in particular ways to address them.

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The unlimited use of cars may cause problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Technical advancements have made easier life of humans to commute easily. There are infinite number of companies who make the cars which are being used by people that have created several difficulties. Absolutely, people should be encouraged to avoid cars usage. The issues and ways to cut the number of vehicles will be discussed in this eassay.

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Many local languages today are dying out due to the rise of languages like English. Is this a positive or negative development?

It is well-known fact that most of the local languages are disappear in this contemporary era due to the rise of foreign languages. I firmly believe that it is a negative development as the dead mother tongue in this modern era, as well as older citizens, are not able to understand the English language.

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write about advantage and disadvantage of CCTV cameras

Nowadays, with the development of technology, CCTV cameras are becoming very popular all over the country. Besides, the government also uses monitors to detect crime and prevent violence. However, using security systems in public areas has both pros and cons. In this essay, I will discuss how recorders bring people benefits and some disadvantages these devices cause.

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The leaders of most organizations tend to be older people. However, some argue that younger people make better bosses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Corporation management is a challenging task. Thus, executives of corporations are often older individuals gaining significant work-related experiences. Nevertheless, the recruitment of young enthusiastic employees for such important position would also benefit organizations

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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Wildlife forms a significant part of the ecological system. However, today, numerous wild animals are on the edge of vanishing and the remaining are in danger. There are various factors responsible for this. Such gradually elevating disappearance is leading to countless issues which are needed to be addressed and overpowered.

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Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Obtaining news to date is an indispensable part in people’s lives. While it is believed by some that national news should be the sole focus of readers, I believe that international news is of equal importance.

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Some young people find school difficult and leave early without any qualifications. What causes this problem and what measures could help reduce it?

For some students going to school and studying is not desirable and they drop off school before their graduation from there. in my opinion, there are two main reasons for that issue and also two possible solutions to improve it.

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These days people get more information about world with the help of media. Advantages and disadvantages of mass media.

In this day and age, mass media gives a large amount of data about the world to people.The following paragraphs take a look at both advantages and disadvantages of the argument.

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As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that car users should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Local Community Mental Health Team Copper Mental Health Team Perth Australia September 20, 2022 RE: Mr Jake Cruz, 24 years old. Dear Team, I am writing in regard to Mr Jake Cruz, who has Major Depression accompanied by deliberate self-poisoning. He is for discharge today and he needs your support and management. Mr Cruz presented with troubled sleep and a lack of the mood. Although his mood is decreasing, he is improving and has a low risk of self-injury and no suicidal ideation at present. Additionally, he demonstrates a better response to Cognitive Behavior Therapy after one-on-one counselling. Medically, Mr Cruz had the first episode of DSP and Major depression a year ago. In addition, he sees a psychologist intermittently. Currently, his second self-poisoning symptoms prompt him for admission. He was been prescribed Mirtazapine 30 mg. Mr Cruz, a permanent resident is living together with his mother, he has been depressed, subsequently, and his wife divorced him a yea...

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Modern technology has being used more and more in different aspects of our lives, such as education. Do the advantages of using technology as an educational tool outweigh its disadvantages?

Everything has two sides and modern technology in education is not an exception. In the past, most people do not have knowledge about technology while today the whole world depends on it in a variety of different sectors of our lives ,especially in education. The essay will discuss why using modern technology in institutions is superior.

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Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest to protect endangered species and biodiversity?

Despite knowing about biodiversity’s importance for long time, human activity has been cause massive extinctions of different species. This essay will examine the main cause of loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to this problem.

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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's life. Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

We used to hear, you should spend a live life while you are still a teenager because after this period, it will be the real life. Also, young people are waiting to become an adult because they want to whatever they want without permission from their parents. Then when you grow up, you want to be a child again. People has never satisfied themselve their place. It is the common thing that they think. For this essay I will elaborate my perspective on both topic in the next paragraph.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

Social networking sites, for ,instance Facebook, are thought by some to have had a detrimental effect on individual people as well as society and local communities. However, while I believe that such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local communities. With regards to individuals, the impact that online social media has had on each the individual person has clear advantages. Firstly, people from different countries are brought together through such sites as Facebook whereas before the development of technology and social networking sites, people rarely had the chance to meet or communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circle or community. Secondly, Facebook also has social groups which offer individuals a chance to meet and participate in discussions with people who share common interests. On the other hand, the effect that Facebook and other social networking sites have had on societies and local com...

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Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent hospital. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Drug intake among the youth has increased at a fast pace in recent years. Many people are of the view that drug addicts are criminals and should be imprisoned. On the other hand, few believe that they should be sent to hospitals and that proper treatment should be provided. This essay will discuss both the views and opine on the fact that not all drug addicts are criminals and assistance should be provided to these people like normal patients in some cases.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Many people believe that the online news will replace traditional newspapers and books, and people will no longer have to pay to read anything. I partially agree with this statement, however, there are many articles that are not completely free for people to read.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

A recent controversy revolves around the most fundamental aspect; the question of whether to buy newspapers or to utilise modern technology to read the content online at free of cost. This essay disagrees with the notion and discusses some supporting points against the fact that online content can never entirely replace existing newspapers.

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For Many people, the the reason they work hard is to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's digital world, where every step of life has big competition, everyone wants to do hard work and make a decent amount of money. According to a large number of people, men work hard to earn more cash, I completely agree with the present statement and in the given essay, we are going to delve into this further.

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