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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the modern scenario the differences between the nations in the globe have shrinked since their duwellers have equal opportunities to purchas similar items from where they live. In this essay , I will discuss the pros and cons about this trend and explain why I belive this development is beneficial.

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Chloe warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment What causes global warming what solutions are these to this problem

Nowadays, in this modern era the Earth has been warming day by day there are many reasons of it. Chlo warming is aslo threat to our nature. I completely agree with this phenomenon that I will discuss some causes and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.

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In many developing countries,there is a problem with declining qaulity of air and water from both indsutry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this.

Construction and Industries now have become the major part of developed country. Countries are trying to open various industries in their neighborhood so that their country can become more developed. But with this rise in industry and construction over the decade have caused the reduce in the air and water quality of the country.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing? Do you agree or disagree?

In one day, all shops in towns and cities will be closing due to the increase in online shopping. I disagree with this statement because certain products are best purchased at shops and many people shop to socialize.

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Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A plethora of folks believe that individual’s achievements are mostly related to the fortune. I am firmly opposite to that statement due to two main considerations, such as hard work and skills. This essay will shed light on both reasons to get better apprehending.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

All around the world, we hear various music genres. For some people, music can be a means of leisure, entertainment, and even a tool to help individuals express their feelings. Although international music is very popular nowadays, I think it is very important that the traditional music of a country should not be forgotten.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent times, a number of people are in a tendency to use medicines without a proper diagnosis by a medical practitioner. In my opinion, I believe this is a negative development as it will lead to various kinds of negative impacts on a person's life. The following paragraphs of this essay will analyze two factors which will contribute to my opinion.

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Inspite of advances made in agriculture still some people remain hungry.what are the causes of this

Agriculture plays vital role in providing food to the glob, inspite of the advancement in agriculture many people in the world are still hungry. There are many reasons behind this problem.Here in this essay, I will discuss the reasons of insufficient availability of food and their solutions.

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Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Leadership quality is the important factor in society to be a successful person. There is group which believe that leading ability is the talent that exist in a person by birth, on the other hand there is another segment of people who are confident that leadership quality can be adopt by hard work, skills and passion. However in my opinion leadership quality could be by birth and could be developed by hard work.

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The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars famines, accidents and crime. Why do you think that is? Do you think the news should be a balance of both good and bad news?

A lot of journalists have provided more negative news rather than positive ones these days. It seems to me that the reason why they take the consideration is to attract a higher number of viewers. However, I totally disagree with the phenomenon because I believe that they should be professional by showing equal facts both good and bad.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this, and how could it be tackled?

Obesity is not a relatively new phenomenon, but it has grown among people in the new century. ,Obviously this phenomenon is rooted in many factors, whose investigation can help us to adopt the right solution.

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The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinges upon one’s privacy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, technology is advanced and changed our social lives. Moreover, digital media is best way to talk with any person and share data across the globe. But sharing of the information can also disturb the privacy of individual. This essay will discuss the both sides of arguments and then submits a plausible opinion.

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Nowadays more and more information and resources and resources related to arts and entertainment are being digitized. Do the advantages of this trend outweight the disadvantages?

With recent technological development, digitisation is more increasingly popular in the arts and entertainment industries. In my opinion, the benefits are greater than the drawbacks because people can enjoy these things regardless of time and location and the environment will also gain benefits.

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Many jobs used to be done at home by hands but nowadays, increasing number of them are done by machines instead. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this.

In the modern era , a number of work was done by machine ,on the contrary, it did by people the people so this essay explores the disadvantages of this statement.

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Reading story books is better for children than watching television or playing computer games.Do you agree or disagree.

I should first say that I love my family and I can’t imagine my life without them. But only to talk about one family member I am so proud of I can refer to my sister.

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Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It goes without saying that the amount of international trips has increased, because modern nation have more possibilities to travel as they started to earn more money. People’s opinions differ, as to whether international flying should be restricted due to the negative impact on the environment, while others don’t see any problem in it. Personally, I believe that international travel imposes some risks on the surroundings, but those effects can be mitigated.

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Parents what to teah thei children a second language at an early stage . why is that? Is that postive or nitagive ??

There are a general trend among fathers and mothers which is sending their children to international schools to acquire a scond langauge. While some descern this as positive, others thinks that it poses a threat to the national identity of children. I am of the belief that the main reason for this is prepareing children for the world market, and I consider this as a clutural peril. In the following lines, my point of view will be further explained

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It’s often held that public health can be improved significantly by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others argue that additional factors have the upper hand, such as lifestyle and healthy meals. This essay will discuss both sides of these views and support the opinion of the latter one.

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Topic: Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some of or all the costs. Do the advantages out weight its disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days a child's education cost is high, which is becoming a popular fact. However, the question is: does the government benefit more in financially supporting people with school fees? is considered one of the most controversial issues today. In this essay, I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints.

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Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

During the past few decades, due to the advent of modern technological aspects, export and import have increased tremendously and hence productivity has been stimulated by leaps and bounds.Globalisation has paved the way for the import of foreign commodities from other countries which individuals now used commercially and the merchandise has to be transported for a long distance in order to get into the Homeland. There are many advantages to this ,nonetheless, the cons of the situation surpass the pros.

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