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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that the number of children suffering from obesity have risen significantly nowadays. Some people consider that the governments should take a serious action on this issue because it is their responsibility. From my point of view, I personally disagree with this viewpoint for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

It is undeniable that nowadays many people tend to have children when they get older, compared to the past. From my point of view, I believe that this provides benefits rather than drawbacks. There are various reasons to support my opinion, described in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company. Some people think this is not justified. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, In many countries, expert positions have higher salaries compared to those of inexperienced workers of the same company. Some people think this is not fair, I do not agree this idea because experienced people should earn more than other people.

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Some people are of the opinion that we must discontinue using fossil fuels and adopt renewable sources of energy. Yet others feel that renewable sources of energy are not as dependable as fossil fuels. Discuss both views.

It is argued that people need to use green energy instead of natural resources such as coal ,oil and etc. In this essay i will explore both views.

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School and university students learn lessons far better from their teachers than from other resources, such as the internet and television. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Today online learning continues to grow globally, while many people still believe that students can learn better in onsite training. Even though the classical education system mostly depends on face-to-face interaction with teachers and which provides individual attention, this thesis disagrees with this argument. and shares the opinion for with the development of artificial intelligence and the convenience of learning at your own pace at your home will replace that in near future.

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

Alternative intelligence is an upcoming field around the world. It is because many believe it will be practical to use robots in our lives. They can be used in various fields but especially in the field of medicine, in the future. I agree with the statement that robots will be beneficial in our future.

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

These days, there is vast usage of equivalent forms of medication. Although, these processes are affectless and they could be harmful. I completely disagree with this opinion and in this essay I will state the reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Many young people today spend too much time following the latest fashion trends in areas such as clothing and technology. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Youngsters spend lavishly to stay updated on their looks and technical knowledge. However, upgrading oneself with the ongoing fashion and gizmos must not be at the stake of hard-earned money. I strongly condemn this unnecessary expenditure on the expensive things which burn the pockets.

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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into univerisity difficult. Do you agree or disagree.

Because of the overall number of institutions, getting admission to a university is relatively tougher than admission to elementary-level education. However, there are obstacles for low-income individuals to access higher education in terms of their financial capacities. People with lower incomes frequently have trouble obtaining university degrees because of a lack of funding and family obligations.

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In the past, when students did a , they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the past, students have tended to stay in their native countries. Today, scholars have many opportunities to study in foreign countries. Althoug living abroad is a very tempting idea to learn a foreign language and learn a new culture, I belive the disadvantages outweight the advantages because they feel isolated and culture chock.

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In many countries paying things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays society stays updated regarding various developments in technology, and most of these updates are received through mobile phones, which take part of society mainly occur through mobile phones. In many regions the reliance on online payment applications is increasing, this essay discusses the merits and demerits of this trend.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

It is argued by some that universities should give graduates with the knowledge and skills that have a high demand in the workplace, while others think that universities should give only a knowledge without regarding it is useful to an employer. I believe that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills that are required in the workplace because it would allow them to get a job rapidly and the number of skilled workers would increase.

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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that old residents of different communities have increased incredibly which may affect the cost of the healthcare system in the country. But, as we all know that in all the countries there are lots of people who live below the poverty line and as the ,result they cannot afford to pay the medical charges. So that's why I fully disagree with this notion that the public has to pay themself for their healthcare expenses.

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Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

These days, it is not uncommon that older people who no longer work relocate to other states. There are both positive and negative effects of this trend, and I am going to review them in this essay.

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It is more important to spend public money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

Many people say that in order to fight diseases, the government should invest more money in encouraging a healthy lifestyle instead of spending money on the treatment of people who are already suﬀering from illness. I advocate this point of view.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children’s who are taught to comperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give yout personal opinion too.

İt is considered by some people that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children’s who are taught to comperate rather than compete become more useful adults. İn my opinion , a sense of competition in children should be encouraged , and thus children can be more confident in their schools.

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Modern technology has made it possible for many people to work at home most of the time rather than going to an office every day. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working at home? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples

With modern technology employees can work from home, which can save more time than going to an office everyday. There are some advantages and disadvantages of this opinion.

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Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

it is considered by some people that many governments spend a lot of money in art . Because ars is essential for human life . But on the other hand , others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. İn my opinion , many countries struggle with wars and poverty in the world . İf spent money to art will be decreased by governments and this money will spend for these countries and many countries will be rescued .

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Define the term “globalization” and explain the pros and cons of the effects of globalization. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Before the 20th century, people were usually living in restricted areas. Then, transportation and communication became popular with technological developments and the interaction between people increased significantly. Globalization means the increasing integration of all the countries without restrictions on their boundaries. Globalization has both benefits and drawbacks.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

The increasing number of unemployed graduates has caused many problems in society. This situation can have harmful effects therefore, it has to change.

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